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Reviews for Atonement

By : KalikaMaxwell
  • From LadyTsuru on January 12, 2011
    Oh, wait... Disregard that! This dates back to '04... Sorry! In that case, all heil the first! (bows low)
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  • From LadyTsuru on January 12, 2011
    That was good! Really good! Though I expected just smut, what I got was much more emotional. It was very deep, and I can honestly say that it was one of the best character studies I've ever read! (The sex wasn't bad, either!) There's so much meaning in their actions; the way that Ed chooses to be punished by Al really speaks volumes about their relationship. He knows that Al would never just haul off and smack him, even if he asked for it. However, the pain of this intimate act is perfect for Ed's guilt. It was through love that he screwed their lives up in the first place, and it is only through a loving act that he can atone for it. So, in a way, I guess you could say he wants Al to screw him the way HE screwed them over years ago...

    Sorry, that was too long and over-thought-out... it was a great story.

    One more note: I don't think you were the first to write Armor Al x Ed; I read a couple of stories like that on ff.net a couple of years ago (back in 2007, if I'm not mistaken...). However, there aren't many authors who DO tread on these grounds, so I commend you for it nonetheless!
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  • From Leeana69 on January 11, 2009
    :sniffles: ;_;

    That was cute and sad. Poor Edward, taking all the blame onto his shoulders. But at least Al knows how to take care of his brother when everything gets to much to handle.


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  • From smaragdine on April 11, 2008
    Definitely proud. Well done. I enjoyed this.
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  • From on January 17, 2007
    YOU KICK AS* I LOVE FANFICTION LIKE THIS!!!!!!! A perfect mix: pain and elricest!!!!!!!!! Quite the turn on ^_^

    Note: I'm not drunk or on drugs,lol

    YAY FOR YAOI!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - ThatCrazyBookworm on November 24, 2006
    Be proud! ArmorAl/Ed is surprisingly hot.
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  • From ANON - LuneNightingale on September 05, 2005
    This was really amazing. Sad though it was, the writing and thought was absolutely beautiful. You brought the moment to life as well as the emotions behind it. Thank you so much for writing this. I loved it.
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  • From ANON - trixxykitty on August 17, 2005
    dont be sad you did it well ^.^ you wrote a good ficcy, i would like to see more please!! please continue this one
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  • From ANON - E-chan on July 31, 2005
    wow that story was both deep in a emotional sence and a little pervy..but it was still good. ^^
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  • From ANON - hakkzaw tha klown on July 14, 2005
    -claps until smoke rises from my hands- BRAVO! MORE I MUST HAVE! i found this searching for some non consensual elricest but i suppose this will have to do. . .-sigh- i love it though! i love you! -gropes you- thankyou for this make a second chapter!
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  • From ANON - DarkHabit on June 28, 2005
    FINALLY! I finally found a fic where Al is still in the armor. I've just been wondering how someone would make the whole, sex with a suit of armor thing, work. Your way was logical I have to admit, though it did make me giggle when I first read it. Great story, and congratulations, you've setteled my curiosity, feel honored! ^^

    ~DH
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  • From ANON - Metranome on May 18, 2005
    I'm not sure if I've reviewed this before, since I've read it twice. Anyway, it's good, and Ed and Al are the most in character I've ever seen them in an Elricest fic. I hope you write more stuff this sad yet sweet in the future. Maybe a little more sweet than sad, next time. :)
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on May 07, 2005
    Awww......that was so sweet! ^^ Kinky, original, and angsty, to say the least, but still sweet. I really liked it! ^___^ Keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - Miko Hanyou on March 24, 2005
    i loved it,there's not any much pairing of ed and is ARMORED brother getting together.i give 10 out of 10 rating
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  • From ANON - Aloe on March 23, 2005
    This is well written & captures the characters nicely. A bit too nicely, actually. (Shudders a bit and wanders off to see if you've written anything else)
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