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By : Kali
  • From ANON - kari_remon on September 10, 2004
    ok, so this took a little longer to read then I thought! big story you've got there, but it's well achieved! you let the characters get involved with one and other in time and explored their feelings very well. I think you interpretaKai'Kai's feelings very well. Strange as it might seem, I'm actually liking Hillary (I so hate her in the anime, don't worry, it's not like she's a bg loss to the m eit either...), anyways, and it's interesting to see how she gets along with Tyson and Tala. Humm, pairring them up doesn't look like a bad idea, but what about Brian and kenny then? I liked the song from chapter 5 too, did you made it up or it really exists? I like your style of writting and you space your story very well. You also did a good job with the plot, though somewhat predictable (well, it's not like there are many choices for the bad guys anyway...), you exposed it carefully and let us readers get more and more into the story. The yaoilemon was also well achieved and introduceto tto the plot and story and justifyed by the occurences, so it's realiable and realistic (lets face it, most storis published around here are just about taking the anime's characters and let them screw each other!). can't wait till next chapter is up! keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 07, 2004
    Cool! Bryan is okay and there with everyone!! Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Phoenix Dreams on September 07, 2004
    WHOOT!! UPDATE >D!!!!

    Awesome, lovely, sad, cool, *enter more words here*, Chapter!!!!!!!!


    YAY!!! >D Hurry with teh next update *pokes* :3

    ~PD
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  • From ANON - XZanayu on August 15, 2004
    What happened to Tala? Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Ezj on August 11, 2004
    Ohh I relly like you're plottings... That was so good.
    Well well jealousy... Oh this is do great you must
    have a fun time making these stories up... Keep
    up the good work but do rest sometimes so you
    don't get tired of writing them cause that would
    be a loss... Yay you're so good^^
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  • From ANON - Phoenix Dreams on August 07, 2004
    OOOOooooOOooooOOOo Twist of Events!!!! I love plot twists T_T

    Anywho, YAY CHAPTER!!! Please hurry with teh next update =D
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 07, 2004
    WOW!! That is so cool!! Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Phoenix Dreams on July 30, 2004


    !!!! Ahhh this story got better since the last time I read it (Chapter One methinks, was the last Time I updated)

    Anywhoooooo...YAYAYAYAYAYA -glompz- YAYNESS

    Continue

    Or...Brooklyn will come after you ^.~

    Brooklyn: O_O...Shes always picking my fights for me

    Phoenix: ^_~ Anywho cant wait for next update! *drags Brooklyn away*
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  • From ANON - lo on July 23, 2004
    Another wonderful chapter. I can't tell you how much I love your stories, all of them. YOu are such a talented writer. It is almost like christmas when you write, I love it.

    lo
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 23, 2004
    Wow!! Awesome!! Tyson can change into a dragon!! Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Ezj on July 22, 2004
    ^_________________________________________________________^
    Don't mind the twisted plot... it's those who makes your stories so
    good... And your writing... pwease never stop
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  • From ANON - Sam on July 18, 2004
    I love all of your stories so much, I'm part of your yahoo group as well as only tyka hotness, and you are my fav beyblade authoress^^ this fic is definitely my favorite so far though, keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 17, 2004
    Wow!! Well, those two are finally getting together! Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - lo on July 10, 2004
    I just want to tell you how great I think you are again. The whole Mpreg thing is different for me. But you explained it really well. Cool chapter. And again, keep up the good work.

    lo
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 09, 2004
    I hope Kai returns Tyson's kiss and hopefully it would lead to something more!!!
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