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Reviews for Unbeaten Paths

By : CardDragonBall
  • From ANON - Lenora on October 21, 2004
    hmm...i'd lov see see that. i wonder what radditz would do. i think the entire family should go all super and he would like faint and stuff. lol *giggles to self* that would be awesome.
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  • From ANON - angry monkey on October 21, 2004
    Heh heh heh- Gohan's tables have turned! There's even a e soe song for him now- the song sung by Terrance and Philip in the South Park Movie- UnFuckFucker LOL. ^_^ It has really good tune as well. Do do dod do do Shut your fuckin' uncle fucker......... ah memories.
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  • From on October 21, 2004
    Well, i do realize taht you don't like neither Gohan nor Raditz too much. Neither do I. But being stronger and all is to me a thing to be thought. So, without wanting to defend Gohan or something, i think that he should dominate Raditz. Preferencially in a very angry, very... SS2... angry way... That would be a good face of both of them to us to see...
    I do like vegeta though, but methinks he needs a good spanking or something (kinky) from Kakarotto to stop bitching around and denying us our almighty right to drink a good lemonade!
    So, go on with that!
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on October 20, 2004
    That sure was a close call, But Raditz is a persistent fellow.

    Looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Lenora on October 19, 2004
    I wonder...*Vegeta runs away scared at that comment* what Radditz would do if Gohan suddenly powered up to SS2 underneath Radditz...*wanders off in thought*
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  • From ANON - macha on October 18, 2004
    OH, I do, I really do like it! *Rubs hands together in a most evil way* I like watching Gohan second guess himself in this situation. Muwahahahahahahahahah.

    And Goku, Stay out of it. Your son is a grown man, and could kick Radditz's as back to HFLI if he felt like it.
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  • From ANON - (STILL CAN'T LOG IN!!) Saiyajin-Neko on October 18, 2004
    Ahhh poor Gohan..lmao. I love how he thought he was inlove with Vegeta while drunk. XD I can't wait till the next chap, Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - Saiyajin-Neko (can't log in) on October 09, 2004
    Haven't been able to review for a while....Hmmm anyway still wondering what your going to do with Raditsu...are you going to put him with Gohan? Like i asked last time? ^_______________^ It would be funny and so cool. I do hope so. Now he seems alot better behaved, i'm glad about that.
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  • From ANON - macha on September 30, 2004
    Interesting: Vegeta wondering "Why" now. Well, it should turn out interesting then. Still holding out in favor of Goku I.T.ing Vegeta and himself to earth and leaving Radditz on his own foe lae landing. *Shrugs* I guess it will depend on Radditz's behavior as to whether or not Goku or Vegeta thinks that's necessaid fid fid find Vegeta's reactions to Radditz rather interesting, revealing a little bit more about their relationship.

    hehe, YEah, Leave the mattress in Yamcha's trash. I like it. And I am so glad Trunks didn't feel the need to inform his mother of what the fluid was. I think I would have had to have serious doubts about his sanity.

    No Lemons? *scratches head* I guess the stories have been interesting enough without them if I haven't noticed!
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on September 29, 2004
    That was a funny chapter.

    Yamcha will be upset though. LOL
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on September 29, 2004
    You know, even though Raditz is being a total ass clown. I still can't dislike him. Even in my story where he is an even bigger ass I still like him. It's like one of those abusive relationships were you just can't leave them because u think they only hurt you because they love you. I know I'm sad. But I just love him. Wait a mintue...*checks shoulder for mated mark and finds nothing*...wonderful! I was saving that spot for Cell anyways. Heh heh.

    I'm glad to see the boys back and banging again. Poor Yamcha, the Sanitation Technicians are gonna think he's a sick perveted bastard. Eh...who really cares what they think anyway.
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  • From ANON - macha on September 21, 2004
    I really loved Goku's response to Radditz's "I had him first." hehe "I have him now." Made me smile. (I would have laughed, but people are sleeping at the moment.) And then, to go and prove just what "I have him now," means. MMMMMMMMmmmmmmmmmm lemons, in a shower, on a space ship. Yes, I suppose any noises Vegeta makes as a result are going to be heard quite well.

    Now, to Trunks and Goten. hehe, "Talk?" "Later" Yeah, don't interupt a good thing. Jeez! hehe
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  • From ANON - QueenSaiyan on September 15, 2004
    Hooray, I believe I'm finally up to date! For weeks now I've been reading through MoP, Saiyan Enlightenment and now I've arrived at the most recently posted chapter of Unbeaten Paths! There have been so many moments I've wanted to review or comment on the fics, but I've had to restrain myself because they *weren't recent*! Ahem. Now that I can finally review, I've forgotten what I wanted to say. XD I'll content myself with giving you my complete and unconditional thanks for writing such ag ang and excellent series of fics. ^_^ That, and tell you that you must (MUST!) have Raditz.. And Vegeta... And Goku.... Together in a big ball of Saiyan goodness. Or else I shall beat you to death with plushies.

    (But wait, that would mean no more fic... >_>;; *runs away to await the next chapters, Saiyan love triangle or not*)
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on September 14, 2004
    And the plot thickens!

    Raditz, Kakarott, and Vegeta are sure in for a ride home. *Grin*

    Looking forward to next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Plyric on September 13, 2004
    LMAO! Goten purrrs and Trunks Is that normal-like stuff? Goku being overly lust-driven to prove Raditz was never in his league of lover-dom? Too funny! I eagerly await your next chapter! =)
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