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By : CardDragonBall
  • From on July 21, 2004
    ~Sniffs the air~ Do i smell a lemon? ~Grins~The bit where Vegeta turns around and says "Now, your thinking about me" AHAHAHAHAHA, that was just the funnyest scene ever Card-san. I can't wait till the next chap, Ja ne!
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  • From jaygoose on July 21, 2004
    They left...they actually left! Why am I so sad. This is a good thing right. Convince me that this is a good thing. And where the hell is Raditz! *sobs* I want my Raditz!
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  • From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on July 20, 2004
    Awesome 2 chappies!
    I love it!
    But you probably knew that I would love it.
    And a lemon in the 2nd chappie, you can't beat that!
    So Goku has agreed to wish Radditz back, even after a very long talk with Piccolo. I can't wait to see what will happen.
    Sorry for the delay in reviews...I have been so so so busy and I am leaving for Japan in 3 days.
    but this fic is great. I am just so excited to see what will happen when Radditz will come. I keep wondering if Goku will be able to contain himself and his jealous rages.
    Guess I have to wait and see what goes down.
    ^.*
    -MB-
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  • From ANON - Hecate18 on July 18, 2004
    *Stares wide eyedfic fic and begins reading although it 3.30 in the morning*

    (Chap 1 review)
    One thing I must say, Goku is so cute!!! *huggles hiI thI think I was as surprised as Vegeta when he said the Radditz should be resurrected.

    I thought this was really cute: - 'So first he got to hang out with Vegeta in space for a while, and then they would get Radditz (if that was really what Vegeta wanted.)' - ^-^

    (Chap 2 review)
    4 in the morning for training... if that were me right now that would mean me getting up in 30 mins. *laughs*
    But I guess Goten gave Trunks incentive enough! ^.~

    - 'The moron was talking to his erection.' - cute... a little strange but cute none the less. ^_^

    Yum lemon! *hentai grin*

    - 'And as a reward you can fix the bed.' - A price to pay for sex. ^_~
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  • From on July 18, 2004
    Vegeta: Goku, you were on top. O_O He said 'Goku'. Oh and i was only messing, you don't HAVE to make the girls get together ya know. -_- I loved the lemon between Goku and Vegeta ~Nods~y niy nice, hehe. Can't wait till the next chap (Sorry i didn't review soon enough, my birthday an all) Ja ne!

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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on July 18, 2004

    That was another great chapter!


    You are a talented writer, morso than me.


    Keep up the good work.


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  • From ANON - jaygoose on July 18, 2004
    Lemon overload...Lemon overload! Are you seriously trying to kill me? *grins* You're the best!
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  • From ANON - angry monkey on July 18, 2004
    Hey- just a though, but are the memoirs (spell?) Vegeta's writing going to play a part in this or be spin off? Or will Raditz read them?
    Also, the final time we see Raditz (on the show, to my memory serving well, excluding GT) he's in a laundry room, so will he come back and be good at ironing? :)
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  • From ANON - Macha on July 18, 2004
    First of all to the responce of the review, *looks skeptical* Riiight.

    OH, what a lovely lime and lemon. I especially liked the lemon with the no hands rule. I think Bulma put the bar there on purpose, (of course) And I believe that Vegeta should be looking around the room for hidden cameras. Well, that is IF he actually cares.

    Well, I guess that would be one way to spend time during space travel, regenerate tails. Of course, I would hope there was only going to be one such session for both sayians. I can't imagine that they would be so bored out of their minds they would cut them off just to regrow them. *shakes head* NO, that sounds like a terrible plan.
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  • From ANON - Macha on July 17, 2004
    So, Piccolo has spoken and Son has listened, as usual. Hmm, seems kind of fishy to me. I think Piccolo wants them off planet for some reason.......

    ..........*smirks* Nah! Just kidding!

    It does seem that Goku listens an awful lot to him though. I guess Vegeta should be grateful, in a way. They are going to resurect(spelling, sorry) Radditz. (I found it funny that Goku didn't like the letter R any more and twitched at 'itz' sounds, hehe)

    The mud figas aas amusing. Well, at least to me it was. It seemed as though Vegeta didn't share in this amusment. *shrugs* Oh well, they are in the shower now!


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  • From ANON - Plyric on July 15, 2004
    LOL!!! Vegeta being prissy and Goku being a big horny baby! ROFL! Awesome first, er 81st, chappie!!! =))) This is going to be really interesting with Raditz. I've added your webpage to my Favorites, so keep it up! (or rather, let the boys keep theirs... up!) ;)
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on July 15, 2004

    The last sentence of the first paragraph was hillarious.


    ...We didn't want to stay on earth, that we were going to go look for more Saiyans." Pause. "Then Piccolo said 'sure, why not? While you're at it, why don't you resurrect them all?' ... ... Vegeta are you listening to me?" LOL That would be interesting. *smirk* "Yes, Kakarot." "Good. Because I have thought about it a lot, and I figure that we can resurrect Radditz." Vegeta must have the look of O.O *jaw dropped* on his face. LOL


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  • From ANON - angry monkey on July 15, 2004
    Hey, s wos working again. (AFF). Anyway, this looks to be a mighty good fic (with it's predecessors, how could it not?). I love the way Piccollo is portrayed as an agony aunt! (He should do thoose Women's/ Teens magazines- his own column "Ask Auntie Piccollo". With a picture of him in a bonnet?) And Vegeta's "most amused non-amused look" ever. Catchy.
    BTW, good luck with your site. Much quicker than AFF, and nice and simple to use. ;)
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on July 15, 2004
    Hmm...so I'm going to have to wait around for my Raditz huh? Fine then...but just know that you have just saved his life in my fic. I was going to kill him off, but I'm thinking that he can s aro around now. Heh...heh...
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  • From on July 15, 2004
    WOO HOO!!wondwonder who you are going to pair Raditsu off with, maybe Gohan, HAHAHAHA. I mean think about it, is you get him to be with Gohan then he might be a bit more understanding. But we all know it's not going to happen, he has a lot of haters to be of any use in this story now. Are you ever going to make those blasted baby's grow up and get together? I want some Bura/Pan love. Can't wait till the next chap, Ja ne!
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