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By : Pixelgoddess

From on January 06, 2005
Chapter 22 Announcement

(Hey this is Violet moonlght6056@hotmail.com Just to let you know I now have an account lol!)

I think its been a while since I last reviewed and for that I apologize, there has been quite a bit going on over here at the moment. As such I would like to wish you a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year, even if they are a bit late.

Krillin�s talking to himself? That can't be a good sign, and what are the Kais up to?

Lovely chapter, I adore the way you captured Goku�s excitement, e.g., the mug smashing incident lol! But somehow also managed to show the �girls� side of the coin, I really feel bad for Bulma, but she is a strong character and I am sure that with help from Chi-Chi and her other friends she will survive.

I eagerly await your next update and hope everything is going well for you. Review you later -waves-

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From ANON - maria on January 05, 2005
oh i'm glad that they are going to get together finally..but i really do feel badfor bulma..maybe you could write something formthem to rresolve between the both of them like a closer...great great chapter.can't wait for more..
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From ANON - mrvampire on January 05, 2005
this has got to be the best Vageta/Goku story, ever. Please update soon.
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From ANON - Macha on January 04, 2005
Wow, that was a lot of Chichi and Bulma dialog to start the chapter with. I almost had to go and check that I had the right story. *g* But, YAY, I did. It was excellent dialog.

I loved how Goku was so enthused that he was knocking things over. lol

I also like how everyone knows that Vegeta's almost given up on his 'Yamcha' hating. Definetly A/U there, but, hey, if I had Goku to boink, I probably would be able to forgive a lot of things too. hehe (Well, not to mention that the bond has a pretty big effect on that.)
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From ANON - Will on January 04, 2005
Hey goddess, loved this chapter. Chichi always brings so much warmth to the story and the opening with Bulma is funny and warm and revealing - hadn't thought about it but they must have those feelings about the boys being together - as well as the jealousy, it's like they're almost proud of them for finding each other and being so happy. Complex. Loved Goku's exuberance. Whipped cream and pictures indeed! Keep it up girl. Looking forward to Piccolo chapter. Hugs for 2005.
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From cueball2 on January 04, 2005
Chapter 22

Wonderful. Krillin seems to be preparing to surprise us (or not). Chichi is actually very funny in chapter. I bet Vegeta looks really good with those blue eyes of his! *grin* I can just picture Goku stumbling on his words. LOL

Finally the quest for the mating bond is making forward progress! Goku jumped to his feet, his tail an out of control lethal weapon, smashing a mug. Chichi shook her head in amusement. At least it was a cheap one. Even Vegeta seemed surprised at the destruction he was causing in his happiness. —I can just picure the chaos caused by happy swinging tails! LOL *takes picture*

Keep up the great work!

~Webtester01~

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From ANON - Achillona on January 04, 2005
Piccolo is a VIRGIN?! Imagin the POSSIBILITIES!!!!!
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From ANON - <(^.^<) on January 04, 2005
Yeah, there's an idea! Pikkon was cool! ^_^ Piccolo never got to meet him either. That pairing hasn't been done before either, lol. Lots of potential there.
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From ANON - A C Armstong on January 04, 2005
[Never read fanficton before, let alone yaoi. Apparently for some reason my life is heading in a new direction: Having the ability once again to be able to read and enjoy what I am reading. Suffice it to say, I found your writings by accident. I've read Maintaining. Very Well Writtin!!!]

Happy New Year. My New Year's present to myself is to expand my horizons...by reading more (that and finally getting the procrastination bug out of my rear and start cranking out my own stories).

I am writing to thank you. I always wondered if I was the only one who had issues with that Freak Frieza and his strange obsession with Vegita. It was obvious to anyone with good ears that something happened. Funi couldn't edit out everything...and neither could CN. I did not want to comment until I had read everything up to this point... I really ENJOY your work. It was/is very well written. More...MORE!!!

The G/V Coupling...How can they not be together? They are the last surviving members of their species! The were bound to come together. It was Kismet!

The real beauty of this saga/epic is the angst V felt. To utterly destroy a kid -- a child --for futue personal gain? The mystery is unfolding nicely. I look foward to reading future chapters. Many of my questions are getting answered and I appreciate your thouroughness. I also like the new and improved Chi. I always assumed C would ask her father Ox King to help in selecting a mate for Piccolo. People seem to forget that Ox King is not human...He is King Yamma's brother, from OtherWorld!!! Ox King has dominion over the animal kingdom. Goku isn't poor either. He has all of the property (land!!!) left him by Granpa Gohan. ChiChi is part demon, no human female could have survived sex with Goku. She ain't poor either! She has her own kingdom!

But I digress...

I love the way the mystery is unfolding...

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!
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From ANON - XxNeko_YoukaixX on December 25, 2004
OMG!! i'm so sorry! i know its been FOREVER since i last e-mailed u, but x-mas this year was HELL! well the x-mas shoppin' & wrappin'. *glares at stangers at the places this lil neko went to* the people were crazy & my mom was a butt for makin' me & my lil sis clean the house & wrap ALL the gifts (NEARLY 4 dozen! O.o;;)! *sighs* leavin' me with less time on ur pic. OH! i feel REALLY bad for not gettin' it to u yet! *hinds under Pix's shirt* but to answer ur question, u can show it to others....*blushes* hehe i won't mind it at all! *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* (ON TO THE REVIEW)*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* awww poor Piccolo! by the looks of thin's he REALLY wants to know what love feels like, since hes watchin' Goku & Vegeta (lil voice in the neko's head: LIER! he more looks like hes gettin' all kinky with the two fuckin' eachother like crazy like the should be! Neko: O.o;; OKKKK, i think we all know what i've been thinkin' lately....*scracthes behind her head in embarressement*). i think he should hook up with someone....through i can't really think of who.....good luck to u on that *pats her lil paws on Pix's shoulder*
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From ANON - suisheu on December 19, 2004
::has an insane urge to bite someone:: Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaa!! So the truth is revealed!! who will help piccolo with his problems? and er.... what exactly IS wrong? I get the whole having to go through the stage by himself, but, is it back again or something? I am glad that he told vegeta. Maybe now he won't be so mean. MEH! no green? awww... of course I didn't expect a no. Goku always like to risk his life for the ones he loves. Lol. ::gives author some m&m's and goes off to bite something::
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From ANON - Macha on December 19, 2004
Awe, even if the was a very difficult chapter for Piccolo (I think this may also be one of the reasons you had a difficult time writing it) I am glad the green alien could talk about his issues with Vegeta, and that Vegeta was taking the time to listen and actually try to care. (even if he does feel uncomfortable with the whole caring business)

It really does explain a lot. Lol... this whole time Piccolo thought Nameks were asexual, just to find out later he was the expception. It's a damn good thing Dende had Gohan and Videl to rely upon. What would happen if the Kami of Earth wasn't stable? O.O

hehe, blue eyes, drums, mating. YAY, I am happy to hear some of what is in future chatpers. :)
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From ANON - suisheu on December 09, 2004
make them green! Make his eyes green! ^_________________________________^ OMG! he said yes he said yes! SQUEE!! Hey, maybe they could ask the dragon! ^_~ Lol. only kidding. This won't be something the kais will toy with, right?
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From ANON - Violet on December 09, 2004
I think Vegeta�s eyes staying the dark, bluey black would be cool. But it�s up to you! Yet another wonderful chapter, I love the way you made �Kakorr� so understanding, this whole fic(more like a miniature novel), has me completely entrance. Please update as soon as you are able, catch you around *waves*
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From ANON - Karen on December 08, 2004
I read this story on whichever site I'm on when it's uploaded and I forgot what I say half the time! Vegeta in a James Brown cape, doing a half split, singing "I feel good!" that would be good too! Yeah! He proposed! Now they have to figure out how. Be looking for more, Thanks.
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