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By : Pixelgoddess

From ANON - jaygoose on December 07, 2004
Yes, the should stay blue. I never would of thought of such a wonderful little detail. I knew you'd find a way to make this proposal so sweet yet not corny at all. I love those kinds.
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From ANON - Macha on December 07, 2004
Awe, I really do hope they find the mating ritual. Hmmm, I wonder if the kias' thought that it was a possible way to destroy Vegeta would they be more willing with the information? Muwahahahahahahahahah. *sighs* probably not.

Goku is so supportive. I do like the dark blue eyes, although at first I was concerned that the ki might be bleaching the irises or causing Vegeta to go blind. I am glad that's not the case.
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From cueball2 on December 07, 2004
Chapter 20

This is absolutly wonderful. I hope someone can teach them how to become permanent mates. Maybe they can contact a saiyan in Other World on how to do it. The following phrase made me laugh: “Of course I knew,” Kakorr said, smiling and kissing him. ::Did you think I would miss something like that? Even Baka means ‘I love you’.:: lol

I look forward to more.

~Webtester01~

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From ANON - Violet on November 30, 2004
Sorry about not reviewing in a while, things here have been pretty hectic. So I am just going to review Chap 18 and 19 here hope you don�t mind!

Chapter 18

Aww, I love this while idea. Oooh, Latex kind of sounds like fun! You made this chapter extremely interesting with a well thought out idea, and while I prefer Yaoi, I believe this was a great chapter and look forward to more in the future ^-^.

Chapter 19

Family time! *Sigh* I love the way you give the characters depth and adding in Pete, allowed me to see how much, the healing process has started. I love the constant teasing, its hilarious!

Squee! Trunks and Goten stealing food, that�s so sweet! I wonder if Goku and Vegeta are ever going to become mated? Oh well I will find out eventually. I apologize again for not reviewing sooner. Can�t wait for the next chapter, review you later *waves*

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From ANON - Karen on November 29, 2004
Um..the review thing never worked for me? No, really I'm just a lazy reader that's only allowed to be on the internet for so long and then I have three kids running around asking "What you reading, Mommy?" Thank Goodness for the minimize on windows. Loved this chapter. Put really good visuals into my head. I could just see Vegeta before the tournament yelling, "Anybody want a piece of this!", while throwing up the championship belt and his cape. Such images, I'll be laughing for days. Loved the last chapter too. ChiChi has really been reasonable in this fic, which is nice for a change. Thanks for the great stories!
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From ANON - suisheu on November 29, 2004
::fwaps self:: trust me to get grounded and behind another two chappies. *cries*
last chappie, I choose number three! Yesh, takin' my vocab. away..... eheheheheeee.... I love kitties...
WHE! They're playing! ^_______^ I'm so happy for Vegeta, his life has completely turned around!
no piccolo yet? Meh. MORE! ^_^
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From ANON - Sarkywoman on November 29, 2004
Guess who's back, back again, Sarky's back, here's a review:
Hey, I just got back to the internet and one of the first things I did was come here and read this. Perfect. Of course I've been reading it for an hour now and it's dark outside and I have to walk home and I'm desperate to pee, but hey, Vegeta/Goku yaoi goodness. And the Chichi/Rezu thing was great. It's rare for me to like an OC. You rock.
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From ANON - Webtester01 on November 29, 2004
Chapter 18

This chapter, like all of your writing, was well done. I thought Chichi and Rezu's joining was described wonderfully. *tips hat* Sorry I didn't see this chapter right away. I have been busy.

Chapter 19

The humor in this chapter was very refreshing. Also Vegeta getting respect from unexpected sources is fun. As for Goten and Trunks, they are progressing nicely in their training. *smiles* Vegeta teaching a class? That would be interesting.

~Webtester01~

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From ANON - Macha on November 29, 2004
SIX! *faints* *revives and then pouts* I only have one. I guess I just don't find that many that I think are worth keeping. I'll keep this in mind though, if I ever have a question I can't find and answer to. *SMIRKS* Muwahahahahahhahaha

I am working on a DBZ yuri of sorts. *hangs head* As many ppl know though, don't expect it out anytime soon. I am slow to write, I like reading other's work too much.

Okay, so a review to this chapter, I liked it (duh!) I can totally understand where Vegeta is coming from. (Do I know you? And why would you say such things? *is suspisious*) I liked the noticable change when he stopped the spar and checked on Trunks. THAT is a new side of Vegeta. Not the old, train 'til you drop and then train somemore Vegeta. You didn't make him fluffy, which I do appreciate, just... softer. I have a feeling he will still be a Bad Ass when the need arises though.

Kakor is very supportive and nuturing of this new Vegeta, which only makes since. I liked the humor play between the two of them.

lol, that would be very interesting if Vegeta did start a school.
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From ANON - jaygoose on November 28, 2004
Oh that was funny. And you know the wierd part was that I could actually picture Vegeta laughing. It was so cute. *sighs*
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From ANON - jaygoose on November 21, 2004
*grins like a fool.* I really liked this chapter. Though I am a bit of a perv. *grins...pervishly* Ah any good loving is alright with me. Though you rarely find any yuri let along this good in this fandom. I loved the kitty them and the latex. *purrs* It was wonderful!
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From ANON - Macha on November 21, 2004
Liquid latex. Whoot! I have some. Muwahahahahahahah. *shrugs* FUN. hehe

Nicely written, and I just bet the shop owner wanted a picture (pervert... hehe)

And now, I am jealous that Rezu full control over that kitten. *sighs* I'm liking the kitten, and hey, I am not usually a Chichi fan.

I am having a difficult time imagining an adult form of Chichi's childhood outfit. I bet it is sexy though. I don't know why the Ox King let her wear it either. It's a good thing CHichi met Goku before she met Vegeta.

Nice honeymoon. I am so happy my vote counted.

As far as books of symbols I have a couple of titles for you, by the same author. 'The Woman's Encyclopedia of Myths and Secrets' and The Woman's Dictionary of Symbols and Sacred Objects', both are by Barbara G. Walker. Good information covering lots of cultures.
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From ANON - suisheu on November 18, 2004
YAY!! they are married at last!! Still no go with the bond thing huh? When will it happen? Better yet, WILL it happen? What are these unresolved issues that Piccolo has that concerns New Namek? Are the kais plotting again? WHAT?! goku can kick ass on the dance floor?! Wow!!! ^____^
Someone flamed YOU? YOU?! ::falls out of her chair, laughing hysterically:: now that is the most stupid thing I have ever heard. You've got warnings everywhere in here! God!! That is funny!!! Well I for one think this is one of the most amazing fics out there, period.
Ah, the wedding was beautiful!!! ^^!!!!! It was worth all the waiting, every minute. ::climbs back into her chair, thinks of something else, and falls back out of it again in a fot of giggles:: Drunk!!! XD He was drunk on vegeta's ki!!! Ahahahaaaa!!!
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From ANON - Violet on November 15, 2004
I can�t wait to hear more about the Piccolo �plot� its intriguing, I hope you can find a way to fit it into this amazing story. I never really thought about the time that Goku was dead and I believe your assumptions of Vegeta spending time with the Son family would be more than correct, its wonderful that you can think of details like that then bring them into play in this fic.

Ah, I was quite worried about Goku for a while there but it was a relief to just find out that he was drunk on ki, yet another interesting idea, that I loved!

The wedding was beautiful; your description of the ceremony was great it allowed me to understand traditions that I have never heard in such depth before. This chapter did allow us to briefly touch Piccolo�s �problem� and I found that it also allowed me to see the difference that the healing and being bonded to �Kakorr� has made to Vegeta. I am looking forward to the next chapter. I hope that everything works out for you at work, don�t let the world get you down. Oh and as a last note COMPLETELY IGNORE THAT FLAME! It was a waste of valuable data space; I am mean seriously people have got to learn to read the warnings. If you don�t like it don�t read it, how hard is that to remember? I also believe your writing style is wonderful and judging from the amount of reviews I say many others would agree.

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From ANON - Webtester01 on November 11, 2004
Chapter 17

Excellent! Goku getting drunk on ki was priceless! LOL Everyone let loose the shackles of the past and Vegeta now felt what it is like to have friends that support and care about you. One thing is for sure, not too much time passes before saiyans think of food. *smile*

Bulma certainly knows how to tease Vegeta about dancing. Everyone is enjoying them selves and having fun. Vegeta has hit a sore spot for Piccolo. Hopefully he will find someone. I hope all will be ready when the kais attack.

~Webtester01~

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