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By : Pixelgoddess
  • From ANON - Macha on November 11, 2004
    Do we get to vote? I vote FOR the yuri honeymoon. *shrugs* I may be the only one though. *sighs*

    I am glad that you... uh... finished the ki fetish. I liked it. And you had me going for a moment. I was thinking "Oh NO, what's happening now?" and then you explained Goku was drunk on ki. hehe

    I liked the wording of the ritual, even if mostly copied, it was well worded. I like the symbolisims also. I hope Vegeta can find sayian mating rituals soon. I want those two mated as well as bonded.

    I still love the banter between Piccolo and Vegeta. You write it so well, and it always makes me smile.
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  • From jaygoose on November 10, 2004
    *sigh* Your first flame. You should be so proud. I long for the day when someone will hate my story so badly that they will curse and say ungodly things about it. *looks off all stary eyed*

    The wedding ceremony was so great. I envy your ability to write so many characters in one chapter and it seem so seamless. *pouts* Poor Geta...they have to get mated. They have to! *runs off sobbing*
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  • From ANON - chichi's boytoy on November 05, 2004
    your crap! why would you make goku and vegeta gay? why make chichi a lesbo? that's just sick! whawronwrong with this fucking site! i can't say you have a very good writing style either! GET SOME TALENT YOU HOMO OBSESSED FUCKWAD!
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  • From ANON - suisheu on November 04, 2004
    eeeehehehehehheee! ::tries in vain to keep her eyes covered but ends up reading the whole chapter anyway (as if there really were a choice in the matter):: ^_______^ god I just love your writing! ^_~ hmmm..... a very interesting bet the Ouji had going on... heeheee...
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  • From ANON - Violet on November 03, 2004
    *Glomps back* Thanks for the welcome.

    OMG, why was Piccolo so uncomfortable? That’s the main question on my mind right now lol! The homecoming was an excellent idea, you really made it seem as if everyone was glad to see him come home, you manage to give the characters life. Rather than just the usual ‘dead image’ that is imprinted into my mind. The backward ‘e’ idea was sweet and just helps add to the scene of being home.

    Aww, the reunion between Vegeta and Trunks was well done, you did not make it to sappy but still sweet enough to feel the characters emotions. Oooh, *smirk* Bulma has blackmail material, you have to appreciate the woman’s idea of brining a camera. I like the interaction you placed between Gohan and Vegeta it kind of made it seem like the older demi was accepting him into the family.

    LMAO, I hope Bulma doesn’t try to take on the Kais single handed who know what will happen to her… Although I must say I still want revenge, Kill the kais!

    This bit here was soo sweet, I love the way you’re developing the characters ^-^

    "Hey Dad," Trunks ran up, Goten in tow. "Can Goten train with us, too?"
    Vegeta grinned at his son. "Sure. Can Goten's dad train with us, too?" he echoed.
    Trunks grin matched his. "Sure."

    The boys finally got to have some fun. This was a well-written and described chapter. I can’t wait for the next one. Your story is amazing.

    Good luck with finding someone for Piccolo, there aren’t many singles left. The only person I can think of is Dende and I really don’t think that would happen. Well I hope everything works out, your plot is going nicely so far. *Sits at computer and waits for next chapter*

    Sorry about not reviewing sooner!
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  • From ANON - macha on November 02, 2004
    *pant, pant* La Purr, La Meow... Whoops, wrong cartoon...... This was GOOD. I liked it very much. hehe, Ki fetish... I guess there are a lot of things that can be acomplished with ki. Why not pleasure instead of pain?


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  • From ANON - maria on November 01, 2004
    i need a shower after reading this...maria
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on November 01, 2004
    *grins* Pure unadulterated Kank. I do believe you're trying to kill me. You know that this is the first lemon I ever read that used ki this way. That is quite an accomplishment.

    Poor Piccolo, I have faith that you'll think of something or someone for him.
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on November 01, 2004
    This chapter was ... ... desciptive. You choice of words was very apt.

    It is nice now for then to be able to have time together without worrying about brainwashing or possesion.
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  • From ANON - suisheu on October 28, 2004
    Good? Like? Try, AMAZING!! LOVE!! YAAAAAAAAAAYS!! Good thing Yamucha didn't open up his big mouth and start something with Vegeta. Hmmmm... Piccolo? Actually, truly upset? but, why? Because there was a crowd? Because it was goku? touching? Meh. I wants to knoooooooow! food food food, I am so hungry right now. I wish I could steal some of their food. ^^ YES! Good! Excellent! they're getting revenge on the kais! MWAHAHAAA! but, couldn't they put in another mind thingy and make them forget what they did? Awww.... they are so cute together. It's shocking, vegeta allowing snuggles in public. ::gives author all her M&M's::
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  • From ANON - Violet mai flower on October 28, 2004
    ST get off him. *offers great simpathy to Kerris* he is not a chair, he is a living thing.

    to the writer- welll written, well explained, well thought, Et, EXCELLENT plot. Bit slow on the update. crappy reviewers.

    all in all i rate your story 4/5

    keep it up


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  • From ANON - st on October 28, 2004
    wow! *sits and waits for the next up date*
    Can't believe it! this story is just soooooooooo cool!
    Need more!
    *gets uncomfortable in sitting position.... sits on Kerris*
    Ker... you wait too!rrisrris: Please hurry up and update, SHE'S HEAVY!
    ST: shut up chair!
    Kerris: *Shuts up*
    St: Heheheheheheh.... *still waiting for update* Kerris get used tp this position... you're gunna be in it for a while.
    Kerris: *sweatdrops*
    LOVE THIS STORY
    LUV ST
    ^_^
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on October 28, 2004
    That was great!

    I'm glad to see Vegeta healthy again.

    The welcome home party was very well described.

    Looking forwrd to the next update.
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  • From ANON - macha on October 27, 2004
    Awe, how cute! I loved this chapter. Vegeta gouding Goku into harrassing Piccolo was funny. Truten letting out Gohan's 'secret'. Chichi and Renzu(sorry about the spelling of her name) Kissing Vegeta's cheeks. Vegeta sending very naughty images to Goku(I would love to see what was being sent, hehe.) I can't wait for the wedding, and I am very happy there is going to be some time (aka chapters) between Vegeta being healed and the Kai's being asses. Thank you so much for the insight to what may be upcoming.

    I hope you had fun on your vacation. I was kind of wondering, but hey, everyone needs a break. I hope yours did you a world of good.

    P.S. My computer is down, so I may be slow to read/review, and if AFF doesn't let reviews happen, I won't be able to send emailed reviews. *pouts*
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on October 27, 2004
    This chapter was so terribly cute. Of course that was probably your plan all along. *grins* I am worried about Piccolo though. He needs some love too. But who in the hell is good enough for the Namek. *ponders* *ponders some more* I'll get back to you on that.
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