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Reviews for Quest

By : Pixelgoddess

From ANON - XxNeko_YoukaixX on September 30, 2004
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *runs straight onto Pixegoddess's lap then shoulder* i missed u, ur fics, the net, other fics, the net, & & u *attacks Pixelgoddess's face with A LOT of neko licks* Oh God u don't know how hard it was not to have the net FOR OVER A DAMN MONTH!!!!! *continues her asult* it was horrible like a really scary movie. --half hour later when the neko is done with her asult on poor Pixeless-ess--*crawls under Pixelgoddess's shirt & curls up real tight* i'm not leavin' this spot EVER AGAIN & u can't make me. *sticks out tongue* this spot is WAY to comfy *purrs loudy to show how much she REALLY missess bein' here* ok now for the reveiw. awwww poor Goku he was so sad in the past chaps & i think Vegeta made a smart move tellin' Chichi & Bulma whats goin' on i know it'll help Goku get better. although i won't mind if Vegeta show how HE did when he got raped in the past *big smirk*...hey can't blame me for tryin' i haven't seen (or read really) any good Goku & Vegeta sex in OVER A MONTH!!! but whatever i can live for a lil while without it just PLEASE get to the GOOD part soon. hmmmmm comfy *purrrs as she curls up in Pixelgoddess's lap more*
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From ANON - Silver tear on September 29, 2004
Oh man that was simply excellent! I love this story and have been following it from the beginning of mentaining. it just seems to get better and better! Maintaining was one of my top 5 fav BDZ fics and Quest is proving to be about number 6! I love you. your great! keep writing! I hope things turn out ok for Goku and Vegeta but we all know that in fics things HAVE to get worse before they get better! you've got me hanging on to the edge of my seat waiting for the next chappter (like you always do!)
Lovin your work
ST
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From ANON - macha on September 27, 2004
Phew, I am glad Piccolo was near by to help. That's a cool idea with the ki cuffs, the one who is the key can control how high or low the ki is set. I am glad Bulma finally figured out what was happening at the time, but she was acting a little dense. And I am still very happy Chichi is being so supportive. I like her character more with each new chapter.

Not that I really want it to happen, but it kind of makes me happy thinking of all the chaos Vegeta and Goku could create in HFIL. What's that saying? Heaven didn't want me and Hell was afraid I would take over. Muwahahahahahah. Okay, seriously though, I hope there is a solution to this that doesn't involve Goku having to kill Vegeta and then commit suicide.

Think Bulma, THINK! hehe
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From ANON - jaygoose on September 27, 2004
So dark and depressing. I guess everyone needs a swift kick in their fluff receptors every now and then. But it still hurts. *pouts* Poor Makoto and Kakorr. *sigh* Is this my first time reviewing? Damn I suck huh. But I am reading. And trying to get in those reviews now too.
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From ANON - Webtester01 on September 27, 2004
I wonder how Bulma is going to help Vegeta.

Looking forward to more in this mystery.
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From ANON - kitsuneakai13 on September 27, 2004
*sighs* i suppose yur right, bulma was going through a lot too. *grumbles* she still gets in the way though. i'm glad goku was able to gain control over vege. *pouts* but of course eventually he won't be there and then vege will snap! *sighs* that's the moment i'm waiting for. *cries* i hope vege doesn't kill himself! protect him goku! ^.^ and it seems that piccolo is alwas there to help his friend. ^.^ great chap! luved it lots as always. *waves* ja ne!
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From ANON - maria on September 26, 2004
oh how i want to cry for them both.and bulma dumb ass she should of known that he'd love her..oh i'm glad she's with that other dumb ass yamcha...i don't want them to die but if they do and go to hell maybe there is where vegeta can put things to rest for them both...sorry about all the bad weather down there.just know we get the rain up here.stay safe...can't wait for more..maria
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From ANON - suisheu on September 26, 2004
Oh God, he almost said it!!! What happens if he says it in his mind like he did with Goku?! ACK! This is a very bad situation. Oh, no! That coulda been it right there!!! she just needs to learn to keep her big mouth shut! Geeze! He IS telling her the truth and all she can do is bitch at him!! *takes deep breath and begins apology* I am terribly sorry I didn't review sooner! It seems I missed the last chapter as well.... I feel just awful about it. I'm so sorry! ::offers her sacred bag of M&M's:: Wow. You know though, I think that everyone is going to feel just a little bit better now without that nasty secret hanging about. So, is Bulma going to tell her son? How long can Vegeta hold out agaisnt the temptation not to say the "L" word? Not that he wants to, but like you said, people tend to want to do exactly what they shouldn't... I know I wouldn't be able to do it. Will goku start getting his power back? Will the secret accidently get out somehow? And WHY isn't at least King Kai helping?! GRAG! Betrayal! misery! Depression! Deception!! and to top it all off, it's a cliffie! Ah, well. More and more!!!! And again, I am so sorry for not reviewing sooner!
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From ANON - maria on September 25, 2004
oh i hate your cliffhangers...i just read your whole story in two days and i'm drained...what great syuff you have here...i feel bad that your in fl please stay safe ok...and put me on you mailimg list ..i tried to see your pic but you have to be a member to view them...any pl upd update soon...maria
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From ANON - Webtester01 on September 23, 2004
Finally. Vegeta has things out in the open.

Looking forward to more.
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From ANON - macha on September 23, 2004
OMG, I am so glad Vegeta insisted on the ki cuffs being activated before they had this little get together. Even so, if Bulma's questioning Vegeta about his love for her or their son led him to the place I think it has, well, Goku's going to have his hands full, Chichi had better get a head start toting Bulma behind her, and why didn't anyone think of having Piccolo on hand? AAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh. Sometimes logic and sarcasim just don't mix all that well, and this would be one of those times.

I am also glad in a way that all the details were glossed over. I was put through enough drama reading Maintaining. Don't get me wrong, it is a good story, but having to relive it would have been hell. I don't like to think that this is the third time Vegeta has had to relive it. The real deal, the brain melding with Piccolo/Kami, and now with the ladies. It has to seem like reopening old wounds, over and over.

Run Trunks, Run! I think the worst thing now would be if somehow Trunks showed up, having skipped out on the fair.

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From ANON - kitsuneakai13 on September 22, 2004
nou vegeta! *.* now he's going to kill them! *chuckles* i hope he was admitting to luving bulma (she's so mean!) and not trunks so that he's safe fer now ^.^ *thumbs up* excellent chap! finally they get to tell other people about vege's prob. *thoughtfully* though mebe that wasn't good since it's turning out bad. *hopefully* but mebe he cut himself off in time. >.< but i guess he doesn't have to admit it out loud does he. gah the suspense! *grins* i'll be waiting fer the next chap, *waves* ja ne!
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From ANON - kitsuneakai13 on September 19, 2004
*frowns* gok goku and vege. *curiously* so the ki cuff thingies r like rings? i mean do they wear them like rings or something? *grins* and i suppose it is better that piccolo is alone, he has enough people in his head to keep him busy. ^.^ *blinks* and i wonder why goku's getting weaker, mebe vege is unkowingly taking his ki. or mebe he really did get his energy from his friends. or mebe there's just something wrong with him! *falls over* oh yeah, what if something bad does happen to vege with the restraints, i never thought of that. well i hope everyone stays safe i suppose *grins* but then that would make the fic boring. so bring on the angst! great chap, update again soon! *waves* ja ne!
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From ANON - macha on September 18, 2004
I can only guess at how much of an issue it was for Goku to put his thumbs in those locks. I know he didn't like the idea, because of what he had gone through with them on, but I also believe he 'feels' that Vegeta is currently the strong one and who is going to be protecting who while those things are on Vegeta's wrists?

Once agian, I love the friendship between Piccolo and Vegeta.

It was a very funny story, Dende having a one way argument with the Kias (I am assuming that was because the listener couldn't hear the kais' responses)
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From ANON - Webtester01 on September 18, 2004
Excellent!

Morre mre more!

It's ~04:00 here so I'm tired.

Looking forward to your next update.

Also, I wonder if a portion of the brainwashing program got downloaded into Goku.

~Webtester01~
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