Reviews for QuestBy : Pixelgoddess |
That was a good chapter. Iliked the part where Vegeta helped Goten in the store.
Keep it coming.
That was wonderfully written! Goku comforting Trunks was well described. Goten is such an amiable character in that moment. I am looking forwardmoremore of your writing. Anyway I'm trying to learn php. I hope they find a way soon to remove the brainwashing. A telepath would be able to help Vegeta but it would have to be a very strong one, or a lot of not so strong ones working collectively. Or maybe some kind of anti-virus program could be downloaded into Vegeta's brain via an occilating light, into his eyes? Perhaps Bulma could write it. Maybe the program's output could be registered by occilations in his ki and interpretid by computer. Well that idea does not involve magic. If not Bulma, someone else smart. Those are my ideas of how it could be done.
I don't know what do say except Excellent!
Keep it up.
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