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By : Pixelgoddess
  • From ANON - Webtester01 on August 11, 2004

    That was a good chapter. Iliked the part where Vegeta helped Goten in the store.


    Keep it coming.


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  • From ANON - KitsuneAkai13 on August 11, 2004
    *cheers* cool! there's more chaps here than on the vault site. *purrs* so happy i found this place. *blinks* oh, the review. hehe i luved it of course! i really enjoyed maintaining so this is totally cool. it's really interesting so far with the mood switching things with goku and vegeta. and poor trunks feels unluved, so sad. *thumbs up* excellent job on these chaps! *whispers* can i get like an alert or something when u update? 'cus i really wanna read when u put up the new chaps. *smiles* thanks if u can. *nods* so i luved it and it's wonderful. *laughs* haha, ja ne!
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  • From ANON - macha on August 11, 2004
    I liked this chapter and littlittle bit of history behind Rezu(?) and Chichi's relationship. It was very endearing.

    Had to laugh at the boys who stank like fish. Yes, Goku may be trying to be a better parent, but apparently he still has some stuff to work on. (i.e. make the boys go for another swim before they go home to Ch sme smelling like fish guts.)


    I liked seeing that side of Vegeta. (I thought it was very cute, but don't tell him I said that.)
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  • From ANON - Velvet Curse on August 07, 2004
    aaaaw poor Trunks, he's so cute i feel so sorry for him. it's hard on vegeta too. i think i hate freiza with more of a pashion now than even before lol. well i look forward to the updates, and im sure there will be more and and fun ;) i trust you lol
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  • From ANON - suisheu on August 06, 2004
    ^________^ *big smiles* okay, that was a much better ending. Didn't hit me quite as hard. Aww, Trunks misses his dad! I wonder... I know that Veegta and Goku are almost switching personalities of a sort, but where does the extent of influence end? And also, I wanna know what triggers the damn brainwashing! So I'm probably going to pout because you won't tell. *sighs and sits down and waits* that was a very prompt update. YAY! It makes me happy. I gotta have something to read every day. Why does Vegeta feel "something" when he sees Trunks, but not when he's around Goku or piccolo? He loves Goku and Trunks, i know that. So... how is it different?
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on August 06, 2004
    Oh! Trunks is so cute! I feel bad for the little man though. He thinks that his dad hates him and no one will tell him what it going on. Not that that would be a good idea but its still sad. Goku isn't a bad parent either is he. I read a lot of fics where he was a total failure. I never thought that way though, he just has his own way of doing things.
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on August 05, 2004

    That was wonderfully written! Goku comforting Trunks was well described. Goten is such an amiable character in that moment. I am looking forwardmoremore of your writing. Anyway I'm trying to learn php. I hope they find a way soon to remove the brainwashing. A telepath would be able to help Vegeta but it would have to be a very strong one, or a lot of not so strong ones working collectively. Or maybe some kind of anti-virus program could be downloaded into Vegeta's brain via an occilating light, into his eyes? Perhaps Bulma could write it. Maybe the program's output could be registered by occilations in his ki and interpretid by computer. Well that idea does not involve magic. If not Bulma, someone else smart. Those are my ideas of how it could be done.


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  • From on August 05, 2004
    First off I would like to apologize for not reviewing Maintaining *begs for forgiveness*. Secondly I'd like to say how much I like this fic already, though you did leave me hanging in chp. one, but you made up for in chp. 2 the conversation between Vegeta and Piccolo was hilarious. oh yeah, and I thought the interaction between Goku and the boys was just so sweet and sad. Love it, love it, and love. Keep up the good work. That's the longest review I have ever written *blinks*.
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  • From ANON - Macha on August 05, 2004
    This chapter was both reassuring and depressing(not really the word I am looking for, it's really too strong, but I can't think of a better one right now).

    Reassuring because Goku loves both the kids and wants them to know it. Depressing, because Vegeta can't be there to show Trunks for himself. (I am in total agreement with Goku, I hate that F.B.)

    I liked how you wrote the bond affecting Goku. Kind of funny in a way. (haha funny, not strange funny) Goku did come up with a reasonable aliby for Vegeta. He is kind of sick. I wonder if the kids would understand if they found out what was really going on.
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on August 04, 2004
    Ahh...Vegeta fucking with Piccolo. Oh so refreshing. Heh heh.
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  • From ANON - NuTHoUse on August 04, 2004
    Hello!!
    Wow Vegeta's (hopefully) getting back on track and teasing Piccolo while doing it *giggle*
    I would like u 2 email me wen u update this fabulous story.
    Plez and Thank U
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on August 04, 2004

    I don't know what do say except Excellent!


    Keep it up.


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  • From ANON - jaygoose on July 31, 2004
    Hurray! More Vegeta/Kakarot loving!
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  • From ANON - Velvet Curse on July 31, 2004
    hehehe more yaoi =^_^= thankyou
    i can see i'm going to like this story just as much as Maintaining hehe.
    update soon i'll look forward to it ^^
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  • From ANON - treana on July 31, 2004
    i really liked mantaining. i finished it a few days ago and came upon this tonight. I'm not dissapointerd. keep up the good writing. ;)
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