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Reviews for Quest

By : Pixelgoddess

From ANON - tsiabriefs on July 15, 2011
i know this has been up for years, and i read it when it was new. but i was just recently dreaming about it and had to come looking for it again. i still love it, and it still brings happy tears to my eyes at the end. what an epic ^_^
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From ANON - tsiabriefs on October 25, 2005
I just loved it, as I do all your work. I gotta say... now you make me want to read about when they visit Rouba later oin. Personally.. .I think that they were the mated couple Vegeta saw when he was a child. Also... just gotta wonder who made the prophecy to the Kais that set it all in motion. Once again, just wonderful. Cant wait til you write more

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From CarlyCoburn on October 25, 2005
OOOHHH NOOOOOO! -cries, clings- IT CAN'T BE OVER IT JUST CAN'T BE! Is your next fic gonna be a good, sexy, lemon filled Goku/Vegeta again? Crap...now you've got me wanting to write one of those! >.< Doh! Lol. Anyways, I'll be watching you...very closely...very...very closely. So closely that...well...I'LL BE WATCHING YOU! Lol. I've really enjoyed reading your stories, they're an excelent way for me to pass the time while I'm baby sitting my nieces. Now...I think I might go and try out this idea I have for a Goku/Vegeta fic. Hmmm...maybe you could e-mail me and I could tell you about it, and you could tell me if the story has potential? -bats long, sooty eyelashes- Please? Lol anyways, it's up to you. I can't wait to read whatever you write next, and I'll make sure to review as much as I possibly can, until my fingers bleed even! Mwah, luv lots Pixel!

Nay-Nay The Queer Queen
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From ANON - West Dean on October 23, 2005
Thank you for spending so much time and effort on this story. It has been a truly great read with laughter and sorrow and deep emotion along the way. I have really enjoyed every chapter of both this and "Maintaining". I hope that you continue to write fanfiction as you have a great gift of storytelling.
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From ANON - ~anz~ ^_~ !!! on October 20, 2005
You know I am so mad at you--NOT!! What can I say...this was very enjoyable...yet pognant. the party was very humorous. and the chat with Lord Enma: priceless!!

But the museum! the waterworks turned on...and wouldn't stop. i hope you realise the faucet hasn't stopped running yet...the valve is broken!

this story is like a warm blanket...or an old friend...i'm really gonna miss it. I love your potrayal of the mated pair. maybe you will revisit them one day...or they can guest star in a continuation...Truten maybe? or a namek saga? something starring them with Kakorr as a Rouya!!! that would be so cool!!!

This was indeed truly wonderful....i really loved the museum...actually that was brilliant!!! a true stroke of genius! and kakorr as a rouya...you do realize that with those tomes and kakorr's new gift...you left this open for yet another sequel [Truten *hint*hint!*] as well as a spinoff!!! ooh you are soo diabolically clever!!! Love it!! Now I don't feel so bad! I feel happy!!!

!^_~Have a safe trip! Leave early so you can avoid ms. wilma!!! you can take the few extra days to conjure up what you are gonna enamor us with next! ~_^!
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From ANON - allusnine on October 20, 2005
I waited until the end of the saga before I commented on this wonderful story.
This story made me laugh and cry. I found myself looking for the next up date.
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From ANON - Macha on October 20, 2005
Yes, you were successful. Tama was adorable. hehe... I can just see all the maham she's going to get into.

Nail and Piccolo were wonderfully funny. I'd love to see more interaction between them.

O.O The library was an awesome idea. *nods and sighs*

This was a great story. I am so happy you took the time to write it so I/we couldn enjoy reading it. I am so happy I started with Maintaining. I can't imagine trying to catch up to the rest of this in one go.

Thank you PG!
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From ANON - Maccam on October 20, 2005
Well done love *HUGS* i love happy endings as well. i felt bad for Bulma ending up by herself but i understand why. i hope soon you take us all unto another journey. Thanks :)
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From ANON - fyrbyrd on October 20, 2005
I love happy endings too! And I laughed this time over Nail, thank you, thank you, thank you. Can't wait to see what you come up with next. I had a blast entering the Kamehameha contest in Sydney, Gods it's great yelling that out! I promise I will get that Nail story of mine written, just have to find the right muse working. So till next time, again thank you, love Fyrbyrd
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From Kugatsu on October 17, 2005
Eee! This makes me so happy! I hadn't even realized it was such a long time since the last one! ^w^ I've been away for sometime! But now I'm back!

Three cheers for the Goddess!
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From ANON - ~anz~ ^_~ !!! on October 14, 2005
~Well PG, at last you know my secret! Not only am I seriously disturbed, but am also slightly twisted and a tad demented, sprinkled with a pinch of paranoia and a bit of obsession!~~Just for the record:
there are WAYS to get around a gear shift AND the hand brake. What was the REAL reason people got beetles? Fuel economy my foot! It was for the 'reclining buckets!' [emphasis on the word "recline"] Most were rag tops too....and where was the trunk? In the FRONT of the car. Many a traveller slept in the front boot. Sleeping bags became famous around that time also...for just that reason, remember the commercial? ~~~

I read this chapter...then I had to read it again. Like a fine wine...it must be savored. The care and attention to detail was just mind blowing.

The joy and pain of the reunions:

Nail returning and shocking Piccolo out of his socks...umm,yummy...and in his own body too! and his exuberance in sharing his joy with everyone.

Eighteen and Marron: No one thought he'd harm his own family...her anger at him...and what she'd do to him if he ever came back.

Vegeta and Piccolo...how the quest for vengeance turned into price of another beings soul. The way Vegeta looked out for Piccolo and would not allow him to be destroyed.

Vegeta's love for his family...and finally Kakorr...

Their reunion and mating...the phoenix! a stroke of genius! and the dragon actually moving! WOW!

Awesome. Awesomely Magnificent. Magnificently Awesome. Wow. and the ssj4's: BEAUTIFUL!

The artistry in this chapter is simply awe inspiring! Inspirational! Magnificently wonderful...

Bravo! Bravo! Bravo! Encore! Encore! Encore!

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From ANON - enya of nexcuss on October 13, 2005
absolutely, positively brilliant I love it from binging to end and I hope I am not the first person to say and outstanding achievement I have only really loved 3 stories in my exploration arround the web and I am pround to say it now is 4 ( maintaining and quest I consider to be 1 even though quest is a sequel)
you've now I think delivered all who read this a masterpiece ( stands up in front of computer and applauds)
with many thanks for the kind answers you've sent my reviews and with great anticipation for the next story what ever it may be, for now take a much deserved rest
Enya of Nexcuss
P.S I hope you haven't forgotten about the drum ceremony in a pervious chapter ( can't think of it at the moment) would love to see it made a side story of 1 off.
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From ANON - BlackDragonSoul on October 12, 2005
OO! I hope Vegeta gets pierced. That would really make my day. I loved this chapter. I still can't get over the moving tatoos. Well, update soon!!
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From ANON - Maccam on October 12, 2005
Sorry luv *blushes* i shouldn't doubted you at all luv. I loved this chapter it was soooooo hot. if only i could get laid like that :P..
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From ANON - Fyrbyrd on October 12, 2005
Big happy sigh! Yes Nail back with Piccolo started it, but then you brought in the Phoenix, and I was in heaven. My sign on Kakorr and Vegeta, huge smile, wish I could see it for real and not just in my mind's eye, though the description makes a beautiful picture there. Thank you, bows to ground in Japanese way. Off to Syndey on friday, will be interesting meeting Sonny as we share a name, the name I go by is the same as his, and spelt the same. I think I'll be nice to him, but if he wants to hide behind Dan Green that's okay with me, I write YGO anyway. Loved the way you got Nail in his own body, I wouldn't mind who he was paired with as long as he was around, but I like Piccolo/Nail the best. Thank you again, going to sleep very happy tonight
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