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Reviews for Lost

By : Spacefille

From ANON - davevin on October 17, 2016
I was so immersed in this that I stayed up to finish it and I have no regrets. I love it and as you wrote more, it got better. The feeling was not lost and it was powerful enough that you didn't need too much details to get the effect...the emotion accross. Bravo. Your an awesome writer. Thank you

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From ANON - cara9001 on March 13, 2014
This was so amazingly good I wanted to cry, I loved this story so much thank you for making it ;-;
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From bitemeslowly on April 21, 2012
Wowww this is the best damn story I have read in a longggg longgggg timeee...it's so intense..but I LOVE it! Wow..pleaseee continue!? It really is amazing!
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From ANON - Anon on February 11, 2006
I've always gone past this story and never got the chance to read it. I just finished it and I must say....wow! Your writing style and details in this story are amazing. You made the characters perfect! Vegeta's personality is great and the way you made him and Goku struggle through this horrible ordeal was really somthing to behold. Not once did I find myself bored with story and I was always asking...what next?! I know it's hard to tell yourself "I'm going to write an angsty story that is dramatic and sad all the way through," but you did it and made the story great. I loved the ending. I loved the whole thing! Great stuff, and I'll be reading more of your work in the future.
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From ANON - MultifacetedTune on December 12, 2005
Wow! Oh, wow!!! I love this!!! *grins like a kid in a candy shop* ^^;; Absolutely amazing plot line, with very realistic (and not to mention simply spectacular) characterizations and descriptions. *gives you chocolate* ^__~ I can't wait to find out where you take this -- keep up the good work, and update ASAP!!!
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From ANON - Anon on November 23, 2005
update?
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From ANON - Anon on November 17, 2005
UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!!

uve taken AGES!
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From ANON - Anon on November 14, 2005
wow...

continue please!
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From ANON - Anon on November 13, 2005
update!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
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From ANON - Krippity on November 08, 2005
i really enjoy this story. its dark, but its not filled with disgusting details. its a true story. i believe that that is how the characters would act when faced with this situation. Goku and Vegeta are stuck with this together, they have to deal with it together, however reluctant Vegeta may seem, he knows deep down that he needs to help Kakarot and that Kakarot needs to help him.
its not plain and its not simple. but its not totally cluttered with unnessicary facts and information that just confuse the reader. the way you describe things keeps me entertained and immersed in this story.
i can garantee you that i will not stop thinking about what is next to unfold until i see a new chapter posted.
i am waiting for that day....
i have found love, this story.

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From ANON - Webtester01 on October 27, 2005
Wow. This is an intense chapter (5).

I'm glad they are back on the healing path. :)

Keep up with the wonderful writing.
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From ANON - Jenn on January 14, 2005
ohhhh...broken people...mmm

I enjoyed the change of pace from the PWP. I hope to see a new chapter soon. But not before you do that damn report. I procrastinate enough reading these things, I don't need anymore updates to encourage me!!
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From ANON - Emma on December 16, 2004
Really love this fic...
So keep up the good work
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From ANON - chayron on December 13, 2004
hi,
this is unreal! I couldn't tear myself from the computer screen. It's sad that i can't read the fifth chapter because the stupid library cenzores it, but the prevoius ones... Oh, this is the work of genius! Thanks a lot for writing this! (Damn now i have to find a normal computer with normal access to the internet to read your story further.)
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From ANON - kit-kit on December 04, 2004
yes this is the best story yet and im glad vegeta and goku will be ok. i don't know what i would do if they had to die or something
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