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By : Spacefille
  • From ANON - Macha on December 04, 2004
    Don't worry. There was still angst in there. Not as much as the first three chapters, but it was still there. I am happy you have continued with the fic!

    Well, Piccolo had at least two good ideas. One, having Vegeta fight him. Two, bring the rabbit back alive.

    Awe, Trunks and Gohan!
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  • From ANON - sinningia on December 04, 2004
    Didn´t think you´d actually manage a vaguely happy twist for the story was quite angsty... but you did. And I liked it. And I´d like more... more I say! ;p
    Is there gonna be another chapter? You are good with writing about feelings, emotions etc. Very well done!

    ~sinningia~
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  • From cueball2 on December 04, 2004

    Chapter 5


    I like the way you portray Vegeta's thought process, as he awoke to the surroundings of his home.  Goku also seems to out of his mania for the moment; it is going to be a long healing process for both of them.


    Trunks may need the most therapy; Gohan seems to be providing that to some degree. The torment of being forced to watch your father tortured onscreen, and have it replayed over and over must be horrible, to say the least.


    Regarding the video(s), Bulma must have witnessed the cruel goings-on, and possibly seen Trunks reactions on another video.


    Great story! Keep up the good work.


    ~Webtester01~


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  • From ANON - Macha on December 04, 2004
    Wow. That was really a close call. I am glad they are 'safe.' I do have to wonder if the aliens didn't succede though. Maybe not the way they had planned, but it looks as though the two remaining full-blooded sayians may have been broken beyond repair.

    Will this story continue and go into depth about how the three of them deal with what happened, and how everyone around them deals with what they are told happens?

    If this was the end, it was a very good fic., but I hope you continue with the repercusions.
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  • From ANON - db27 on December 04, 2004
    WOW! I absolutely loved this chapter! One of the best stories I've read!
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on December 02, 2004
    That was a surprise, to see the rescue.

    I wonder what Vegeta's response, will be when he wakes up. And what will be Goku's new behavior since his breakdown?

    More!

    ~Webtester01~
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  • From ANON - Pixelgoddess on December 01, 2004
    Such an intense story - The rescue was a surprising twist, but I fear it was too late for Goku. An interesting thing I noticed - and I am not sure if it was deliberate...Trunks never referred to Vegeta and Bulma by anything but their names. Never as his parents. So which Trunks is this? Glad you updated, but I just know this won't be a nice ending story.
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  • From ANON - Hecate18 on December 01, 2004
    *Stares in awe* I liked the addition of Trunks POV, your style of writing really capture's the pain felt by the characters. It was an unexpected twist having them rescued... I am looking forward to the next chap! ^_^
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on December 01, 2004
    i see some gohan and trunks love or maybe it's not be the love i see it as. i also see some tough times ahead goku and vegeta maybe to broken to save and they may just give up though i hope it doesn't come to that. anyway i like your story so hurry and write more.
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  • From ANON - Violet on November 26, 2004
    This fic has me slightly confused, and yet greatly intrigued. I hope you update soon. I really would like some clarification on what’s happening though…
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  • From ANON - Hecate18 on November 25, 2004
    This is great! I like your writing style... you've gone and got me hooked now! ^_^
    Looking forward to the next chap!

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  • From ANON - Ginia on October 26, 2004
    WAAAAAA!! Oh, I hope there is more.... whether to release Goku from his misery as he released Vegeta or what I'm not sure... You have surely succeeded in your attempt at angst - oh kami, more than succeeded. There can be no happy resolution to this but there can be closure. Was Trunks there? was the voice all in Goku's mind - or had Trunks found a way to free them only to have Vegeta die before his eyes... gees - I'm never going to get to sleep now...
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  • From Pixelgoddess on August 20, 2004
    So sad, so depressing...but I like it. There won't be a positive resolution to this - there can't be. Vegeta is/was broken, but he understood more of what was going on - knew the reasons things were happening. With Vegeta gone, Goku won't have anything to cling to, and I expect to see the last shreds of his sanity vanish, hating himself for what he has done. (And are you playing mind games with us? Are these events real, or just part of a fevered imagination?)
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on August 17, 2004

    Wow.! That is angsty!


    If you're going for more torm you you could make that action a nightmare.


    Or if you are going for character death, then not.


    Life sure is short, aint it.


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  • From ANON - Kaka4Geta on August 16, 2004
    Why? Why did Goku Kill Geta? He's supposed to save him. I really like the fic, but now I'm upset. Please have a happy ending. Please, I'll beg if I have to. Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Pleasleaslease, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    PS: 5/5
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