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Reviews for Lost

By : Spacefille
  • From ANON - macha on August 16, 2004
    *sighs* Well, I have to admit, I am really unuse to a DBZ universe where somethings are just impossible. To the point that even Goku sees that it is useles res resist. Nowoulwouldn't have wanted Vegeta to go thh anh another multipul rape, something else even worouldould have happened. You are taking angst into a little known realm here; it's called futility. (Not to be confused with fertility)I never thought I would see the day that even Goku felt his situation was so totally futile that he would accept Vegeta's request to kill him.

    *sobs*I keep wanting them to wake up or something.

    As usual, I am waiting for your update.
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  • From ANON - Suisheu on August 16, 2004
    Oh my God! that's horrible! I think that death was the best option for Vegeta. I don't like to see him like that. but poor Goku.. what will become of him now? God, Vegeta was in such an awful state. But I'm glad he's freeom pom physical pain. What about Trunks? will those people in white turn on Goku and begin to torture him until he too goes insane?
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  • From ANON - sinningia~ on August 16, 2004
    Oh.my.god.You.are.pure.evil!!! ^-^ How could you stop THERE?! *grins* Iīm glad though, that you update fast enough for me to survive this cliffhanger... somehow I`m glad for what you had Goku do... Vegeta could have never recovered.. even IF they were to be freed... anyway, and just sit here ans see what you have up your sleeve for the next chapter... Anything is possible, isnīt it :) Thanks for another great, angsty chapter! ~sinningia~
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  • From YamiHikari on August 16, 2004
    Arrrggg! You tell me that AFTER I read about Vegeta dying! *Is tempted to Galic Gun you*
    All I saying is this better end happy, 'k? It's giving me nightmares, really.
    Phhhhhhaaaa. Okay, rave is over. Another scary, discriptive and naughty chapter! Please more, so I can either have different nightmares or stop them?
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  • From ANON - Kakarott Lover on August 16, 2004
    Please don't let Veggie dead!! His life has always been hell,it can't all finish like this...Anyway great chapter, so emotional and sad.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 16, 2004
    no! vegetas dead!!
    poor goku.
    Great chapter. sad but great *sob*
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  • From ANON - macha on August 15, 2004
    I did like reading this story from Goku's point of view. I am still not certain that 'like' is the correct word to use, because I don't 'like' seeing the sayians in the predicament they are in. I think 'intrigued' is the word I am looking for. (Maybe not.) You are still writing the angst well.

    I would have to say 'they' are managing to mess with Goku's head just by messing with Vegeta. He doesn't like seeing ppl he likes hurt so this must be really bad for him. Especially when he ends up being the one to do the hurting. I like the point that was made by him admiting that he wanted to REALLY kill something, even if it was only to hif. f. That would be an almost breaking point for him, it's not somewhere the usual Goku likes to go.

    This is a good story, and I am glad it didn't turn out to be a one chappie. I'll be waiting for the answers (via reading updates)
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  • From ANON - sinningia on August 15, 2004
    Ah yes, another great chapter. I love this story! I really do! I wonder whatīll happen next... A very twisted and very well-told fanfiction... and seeing Vegeta so vulnerable. I donīt think heīll ever get back to what he once was after that. One question though: Is it going to be a long story? I just wonder... ^-^ ~sinningia~
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  • From ANON - kakarott Lover on August 15, 2004
    It's very interesting so far. the unstable state of mind of Vegeta, the way Goku is trying to take care of his tortured companion....so much angst!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Yami-hikari on August 15, 2004
    Doing good! I hope they escape... It'll be good to have Goku have to bring Vegeta back to sanity and health while still having to hide. Only thing is, how're they gonna free Trunks and yet not have him interfere with the limey goodness and plot? You're not allowed to let anyone die! Except for the evil buggers that imprisoned them.
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  • From ANON - sinningia on August 11, 2004
    Wow, I really hope you DO continue this. It is interesting to say the least. Furthermore you understand it to create suspense and an overall darkness. The athmosphere is very angsty so far ;) and I like the feelings and emotions you described. You have an awesome way of writing and with the way you keep the scenery and any previous happenings so vague, only feeding them bit by tiny bit to the reader, you arouse curiousity and make the read worth it. I was actually sad when it ended. Didnīt expect something like that to turn up today ;) ... Very nice!!! Keep writing, please.
    ~sinningia~
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  • From ANON - macha on August 11, 2004
    Is this only a one chappie? I hope not. I want to know the when, where, how's and such that made this possible. You did give some answers, but not enough to really get a good idea about it. Lost is an appropriate title. (Sorry about the spelling.)

    Your A/N said that this was a practice in angst. I think you did very well.
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