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Reviews for Rituals

By : maryl
  • From ANON - yaoilovergirl on November 12, 2004
    Really great story. First I didn't want to read it but after I tried the first chapter I became addiccted....MORE PLEASE!!!!
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  • From ANON - Skyla on October 30, 2004
    continue writing. It's a good story
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  • From ANON - Arach on August 30, 2004
    This is the kind of creative idea that makes me wish I'd had it. >_o It's sheer brilliance. There are a few mistakes here and there, especially around the beginning; it cleans up at about the middle and towards the end, though, so good job. =D

    I love your realistic setting; it doesn't look ovee ore or contrived, and flows quite well, what with the camel herds and the scar system and . Ma. Maybe you should have described the scars more, though, as there was no mention of them on Tala or Kai.

    "Kai rose to his feet, ignoring the spread(ing) stain on the hideously expensive rug and stomped to his tent flap." -> I love your expression here, "hideously expensive". Gives me the mental image of an angry, broom-wielding servant woman screaming at Kai for ruining the carpet. :3

    I hope Rei's scars heal right! Though it would make a rather nice plot twist if they didn't... >=D *evil*

    Off to read the next chapter,
    ~Arach
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  • From ANON - SnowIce on August 29, 2004
    This is a great story so far. I hope I don't have to wait too long for an update.
    I just hope Tala will be alright. I know how painful it can get when you fall of a horse and hit your head.
    Update soon ok and keep on writing more great stories like this one.
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