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Reviews for One Step Closer

By : ShiSaiyan
  • From Yaoicreator on May 13, 2011
    OMG!! That was sooo hot! I loved your descriptions, and you portrayed their personalities perfectly! Vegeta must have been ecstatic at the prospect of having Kakarott on his knees...
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  • From ANON - Dark~kakarot on November 02, 2006
    I love this one it i very awesome and cool..Keep up the great work make another chapetr
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  • From ANON - White Destiny on January 09, 2005
    This is very well-written! Not many errors, it flowed, it was enticing, so drool-worthy! ^_^ And Vegeta is seme!! I'm so happy! :D
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  • From ANON - Violet on October 12, 2004
    An interesting story so far, I enjoy the way you captured the primal ‘lust’ of the Saiyajins. You have made Chichi seem like a terrible over bearing bitch, but in a believable fashion. I hope you will be continuing this plot.
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  • From ANON - Porphyria on November 07, 2003
    Well-written songfic. I have a voice in my head like Goku's too. Anyway, keep up the great work. ^_^
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