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Reviews for The Awakening

By : vegetagoddess
  • From Justicea on February 04, 2013
    I really like this story. Its nice seeing Goku be much darker. While yeah sweet Goku is good to, that does get a tad old after awhile. Thank you for writing this. Please finish it. Again great job.
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  • From ANON - amberanime on December 17, 2012
    I like it so far.
    I would not mind vegeta/pan though. She is spunky, I like her.
    And it would give Bura and Pan a commen front.
    As well as the 2 now evil guys. XD
    It would make some sense even vegeta/pan. But it is your fic.
    I do think you should keep writing this regardless cause it is a good idea!
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  • From ANON - Azer on August 16, 2011
    Hey nice to see Goku ack that way no more fluffy Goku for now hope there will be struggle be twine Kakarot and Goku over Bra (after all Goku is technically and i right meaning a saiyan to)
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!
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  • From ZeroUnit on August 15, 2011
    Well the story looks interesting so far hope that you will manage to upload new chapters I would hate to see this story to get lost to the "sand of time". ^_-
    I cant say I'm to much interested in possibility of Kakarot/Vegeta part but it is your story. ^^

    I hope that you will manage to get some spare time and continue this story.
    PS: I wish you good luck on your story:"Slave" Bulma/Vegeta hope you will update that one soon to. XD
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  • From BossHoss on April 08, 2011
    This.

    There needs to be more of this, like, right now.

    For srs. ._.

    Also, I'm way late to the party. xD
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 03, 2006
    update
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 11, 2006
    ooo...good story. It's cool to see Goku's evil saiyajin side. Will he turn on Vegeta? Will he get what he wants from Bra? I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - 69er on September 08, 2005
    kool man update it has bewen ages

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  • From ANON - Clemen on September 06, 2005
    Great story. Very orginial. I can't believe Vegeta accept Goku like that. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Hope you post it soon. And if you can send me an e-mail when you update this story ok. Thanks in advance. Until next time, take care and god bless.
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  • From ANON - Cloud05 on June 21, 2005
    Curse my friends...Once more, I am reduced to a sniveling wretch, forced to review a story. Despite how good this is, and how much better it could be, provided more chapters...I still hate doing this. Please consider it an honor I review this fic, and I shall consider it an honor to read this story in its fledgling state. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - unholy_repentance on April 24, 2005
    UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!

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    PLZ EMAIL WHEN YOU UPDATE, I LOVE YOUR STORY ITS AWSOME

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  • From ANON - Mermaid Ninja on April 11, 2005
    Has Veg flipped his lid!? The others have to bring Goku back!! This one had better have a happy ending!!
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  • From ANON - nani on April 09, 2005
    very good love it can't wait for more
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  • From ANON - Ben on April 08, 2005
    Yes you updated!! you truly are a goddess because your so good!! i am your 153 highest fan
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  • From ANON - Jen on April 07, 2005
    LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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