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Reviews for New starts and old beginnings

By : mamall
  • From ANON - Pixie Smith on January 23, 2005
    I just want to say that this is a beautiful fic. It's also very funny how Wu's stuck with Meiran. It's one of the few highschool fics that i enjoy reading. Thank you for writing such beautiful work.
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  • From ANON - Fate on December 14, 2004
    nooo! update this!! and i'll er...give you a little chibi wufei with a panda!...or in the likey case he will kill me..a cookie? (not good at bribing..) anyway update ^^ this story rocks
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  • From ANON - Fate on November 26, 2004
    yay i love this story! so glad you updated! and i really hope this is an heero and wufei pairing ^^ I feel so sorry for the guys, reelena and her gang sound fucking annoying
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  • From ANON - crystal on November 14, 2004
    Ok, i am wondering what the hell is going on here. I remember i reviewed your story, but now my review is not here. =_= I hope you didn't try to delete it or something. Anyway, keep writing!
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  • From ANON - black beauty on November 11, 2004
    Oh! Come on Pudin?! I know you can do better with the spell checks! The 'please review' part is what is giving me the impression that you are not bothering to use it. I like the content, I like the description but reading the mistakes takes the enjoyment out of a fic. Anyways keep up the good effort and update soon!
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  • From ANON - lilredjchan on November 01, 2004
    i check this almost every other day or so hoping to find a new chapter. i really enjoyed it so far. you have to write more.
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  • From ANON - Fate on October 10, 2004
    I love this story! The way you have written it is great, and the way you written about the way wufei feels and thinks. Its perfect! Pleas write more soon, i really like this story. And for the record, Wufei kicks ass!!!
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  • From ANON - WinterCloud on September 29, 2004
    I think this fic has great potential. My only tiny complaint besides the spelling (BTW, I beta and wouldn't mind beta reading this fic for you) is that there is no Ying Dynasty; you should have Wufei say "Tang" Dynasty, which probably is the setting his family would be living in. Also, I'm wondering whether you allow other people to host your fics on their site?

    ~WinterCloud~
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  • From ANON - black beauty on September 10, 2004
    Yeay! A new chapter! I'm glad that you corrected ch 1 and changed the points of view, but goodness gracious someone has to take pity on us, your wonderful and amusing readers. Yep! I'm mostly tng ang about me... *goes off ranting about self imposed greatness, which last hours and hours ...* But I digress, you need a beta reader and you need one pronto! On the plus side, from what I can see you have less spelling errors in this chapter than the first. But then again you also have less words... hm... what a tricky situation indeed?! LOL! I love you writing style, _spelling and grammar aside_ your style is so good that after the reader finishes reading a chapter, all the light-heartedness and fluff spills over! And why you my dear get this type of review. Kep thp the good job (writing style) and suck up to one your readers and get them to beta the stuff for you! Oh! Yeah! Don't forget to UPDATE SOON!
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