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Reviews for Rules of the Game

By : plasticseraphim
  • From ANON - jaygoose on November 05, 2004
    Oh my god! How did I miss this story?! The shit is really about to hit the fan, huh? Trunks is pissed. This fic is great. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - MAjin Bulma on October 19, 2004
    lemon lemon! lemon! lemon! lemon ! lemon!!!!!! O_O; -sings- Lemmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmooooooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnn X3! or else -shakes fist - O_o lol..
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  • From ANON - macha on October 19, 2004
    I believe Bulma only THINK she knows where Gohan got that hickey. Otherwise she wouldn't have made is seems as though it was no big deal. I wonder what she would do if she found out where/who he really got it from.

    So, Trunks is going to be the kind of person who asks a million questions until either you are so twisted up in your own lies, you can't keep them straight, or you make the mistake of saying something you didn't mean to, huh? I guess that's the way it is about most young teenagers harassing their idols though.

    Well, That was F number 1 from Mr. 17. It's a wonder that Gohan didn't/doesn't remember the threat of how many times did you say that word? How will he react when he does?

    And Gohan's reactions when he did finally remember where/when he was were believable. I can imagine puking in a similar situation.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 19, 2004
    hey! anotclifcliffhanger! i cant wait to see what happens next!
    Aw, poor lil Gohan. I like the kind android 17 ^_^
    Once again i have to say that this is a great fic!
    Your a great writer.
    You better update soon!!

    ~soneji~
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  • From ANON - macha on October 16, 2004
    And here I was starting tke tke this chapter, and you left at a cliffhanger. On purpose no less! That's just plain mean. *pouts*

    Actually, I really do like where this is going. I find the body temperature differences interesting.

    I hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - macha on October 16, 2004
    I did like the original. I also like the rewrite. I'll have more comments after the second chapter.

    On to chapter two.
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  • From ANON - Kevin on October 16, 2004
    You are truly evil! And you're making me want to write slash again. Temptress!!!

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  • From ANON - Kevin on October 16, 2004
    Tee hee. J00 rox0rs Skylar, a very nice beginning. Oh what shall happen next? ;)
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  • From ANON - cabbitshivers on October 11, 2004
    You can't leave me hanging like this. It's angst, it's torture, it's Gohan... you must write more! You're stringing me on and although I'm enjoying this fic it is most unpleasant to not get more when you want it. *Pouts* Hurry? Please?
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