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Reviews for Rules of the Game

By : plasticseraphim
  • From ANON - alex on February 22, 2016
    Read all chapters in one go only to realize this story will never be finished. I'm really annoyed at this as I thought it was beautifully done. It was built up in a way that was neither too fast nor boring, just the right mix, therefore very believable.
    I'm a sucker for conflicted emotions and this story had something special going on.
    Well, it's been 10 years soI'll just silently cry and accept the story has ended in a tragic way *goes into mourning mode*
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on May 01, 2015
    Damn, I love this. I know you'll likely never see this given how much time has passed since the last update, but I wish you'd continue.
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  • From ANON - hhxh99 on January 18, 2006
    Someone please tell me that this is not the end~~~~~~~~~~~~
    This is the first time i found a article about 17 and Gohan. Please keep writing. I can't accept that Gohan dead like this way. Did gohan really die?
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  • From ANON - Camaro on March 14, 2005
    Absolutely breathtaking... I've never read a story quite like this and I'm both moved and shocked by it. Truly, inspiring and captivating, the characters are portrayed as both invincible and vulnerable at the same time, the emotions rising at a balanced pace rather then them being in love from the first chapter.

    And the sacrifice at the end moved me to tears, realizing that in the horror of it all, was the necessity for it to be done by his hands. Truly, it touched my heart and made me grieve for all involved. Also, I have a fanfic contest being held on my website and if you were ever curious and wanted to enter, please feel free to email me. Along with that, I'd like your permission to link this story on my website... It's truly amazing, thank you.

    Camaro
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  • From ANON - neko-gurl on February 10, 2005
    wow wow wow, that was amazin, but y did gohan have to die??? Are you gunna make a next chapter coz im totally addicted to this story lol. It gets to the stage where the first thing i do as soon as i get onto the computer is look to she if this story is updated. well anywayz bbbbbbbbbbbbbyyyyyyyyyyyyeeeeeeeeeee xxx ^_^
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  • From ANON - Macha on February 10, 2005
    Why does 18 have to be such a bitch of a sister? I mean, come on! If it wasn't for her threat Gohan and 17 would be go at it like rabbits. *wishes*

    I like the internal conflict going inside of 17. Well, don't really like, but you made it into very believable reading, which I can enjoy.

    O.O NNNNNNNNnnnnnnooooooooooooo. Can't 17 just stand up to his sister? He has to go and strangle Gohan? AAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh.

    You'd better believe I'll be waiting for the next chapter! I was afraid I'd read your author's notes and find out THAT was the end. (phew)


    You're forgiven? Afterall, I am guilty of the same heiatus (sp?) Doesn't make it right, but I'll be having my own appologies to make in the future.
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  • From ANON - *~*~*~* on February 08, 2005
    UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON hehe
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  • From ANON - Shadow gurl on January 11, 2005
    wow i love you story, when are you going to update it? luv +{ShAdOw gUrL}+
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  • From ANON - ??? on December 24, 2004
    luv ya fic, wen r u updatin???
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  • From ANON - dragolix04 on November 30, 2004
    i fink dat dis story is gr8. keep on writing more
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  • From ANON - neko on November 29, 2004
    omg omg omg, this is probably the best story i have ever read on fanfic.net. i love juunana slash stories but hardly anyone writes them. well anyway i could go on foreva talkin about how gr8 it is but just to sum it all out. WRITE MOER CHAPTERS LOL :D
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  • From ANON - Hecate18 on November 26, 2004
    It just keeps getting better and better. I like this new side to 17. ^_^
    Glad you had a good Thanksgiving! Looking forward to the next chap.
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  • From ANON - Hecate18 on November 25, 2004
    Thats a clever theory, one I've never seen before; but when I think about it, Juuhachigou always seemed to be the older of the two. Its certainly a great new twist you've added!
    Looking forward to the next chap! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Hecate18 on November 22, 2004
    I'm loving this! I was a little sceptical about the paring at first, but WOW, you sure did pull it off with flying colours! ^_~
    That was an evil cliffhanger you left, but I'm willing to wait for the next chap! ^_^

    ~Hecate18~
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  • From ANON - Macha on November 09, 2004
    It was a lovely lemon. I think I like this couple. Now as for Trunks, what was the little shit doing not followoing his orders? And, yes, Gohan was enjoying it, but Gohan also used his body to save Trunks life. Of course, had Trunks not stayed to watch the lovely show, then he wouldn't have had the reason that got him to go Super sayian.

    *tries it* Nope, guess I'm not that upset yet. hehe

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