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By : SOTK
  • From ANON - Kiotana on August 08, 2006
    Haha!...I mean...woops XD wierd lemon you have there...
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  • From ANON - Kaze Kitsune on January 20, 2006
    HAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that was very funny in the end....and so yummy during the action....mmmmmm........ja ne!1
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  • From on April 29, 2005
    that was good, i really liked iot and i hope taht u make another one son okay6?? w *runs off to read more* make another one soon well, i gt,g later!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Freaky Feline on February 07, 2005
    Wow man this fic rules, it's funny and hilarious,that was a very nice detention for Tyson too bad they we're interrupted, and kai si going to be fired or not? anways You gotta keep update it SOON!!!!
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  • From ANON - kyou on February 05, 2005
    update soon
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  • From on September 16, 2004
    what happened to rest of the comment?? -_-... you should try fanfiction.net where your humor would fit other types of styories much better then now. Your style of writing isn't the best, as you use slang where u shouldn't (his kinda crimson eyes) and its does seem a bit chidislh. the idea is good, detention and all, title fits nicely, but it's I don'r think someone intelligent would do that... someone intelligent would check the school to see if it was empty and would at least seal the doo noo no one came in ne?
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  • From on September 16, 2004
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    are you even old enough to write this ~_~? guess not... ever heard of paragrafs? and spacing? If you don't separate things more oftenly and put and order into things you'll leave your reviewers confused as it's hard to know when he's talking, thinking and when it changes from Tyson's POV to Kai's speach!

    "why did you make me turn around"?
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  • From ANON - jenjen on September 13, 2004
    yo terrific work specially for ya first lemon and its shota too!!!!O_O without you even knowing it eh, now trhats extraordinairy! hahaha

    Jen
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  • From ANON - KC on September 11, 2004
    Me: oh my gosh! kai got fired?!
    seto: *smirk* fucking in school isn't a good thing
    me: what are you doing here seto?!
    Seto: looking for the puppy, what do you think?
    me: *smirk* joey isn't here right now, his at Yugi's
    seto: fine... *leaves room*
    Joey: hey girl, what's up?
    me: nothing much
    joey: well, that was a great start
    me: you read the story?
    joey: yup! where's seto?
    me: i told him to look for you in Yugi's place
    : yo: you did? well, see yea than! *leaves room*
    me: update and i can't wait for more!!!
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  • From ANON - miro on September 11, 2004
    OMG XD I CANT BELIEVE THAT U DID IT!! GOOD CUZ UR FIC ROXS XDDDDDDDDD!! UAHAHAHHA XD YAY GO LIN DEAR XDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!
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  • From ANON - Ezj on September 11, 2004
    Hi this is awesome... very good looking forward for more fic's from you
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