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Reviews for Intelligence thy name is Goku

By : anitaedwardforever
  • From Lavonya on January 25, 2014
    I like this /new/ Goku!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I think Vegeta didn't notice Goku until he stopped his facade!!!!
    Please /CONTINUE/ writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From darkstar7789 on December 29, 2011
    Interesting fic! I've always been into how people interpret whether goku is actually secretly intelligent or just simple. It'd be great to see the next chapter, if you've got more in mind. Nice job with the writing! Although, there was a few spelling errors I think, but I've been seeing that in nearly all of the stories. I don't know, but hope you keep updating, if not, oh well. :) *hugs, blood, and chocolate*
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  • From ANON - War-chan on January 24, 2005
    O.O....WOW!!! Its only 3ch's into it and I'm already saying WOW!!!! I love it simply LOVE IT!!! Is Kakkarot going to have little Vegetas and Kakkarots? Hee Hee I hope so.......^__^

    Tib-chan~ War-chan! You should know that it has to have a romantic feel to it like, like a silk sheet bed with rose plates! And cindles! Not restroom sex! Thats eeky! >P

    Don't mind what Tibys is saying I like where this is going and if its eeky restroom sex (as Tib-chan states) then I'm all for it! Tib-chan go back into the bedroom! No one whats to hear you whine about their storys!

    *Tib-chan goes sulking and crying quitely out of the computer room*

    O.o; Oh, shit I made her cry....Well Very good story! I'm hopeing for an UPDATE REAL SOON!!!!!

    *Goes running off to try and make Tib-chan happy agian*

    Ja ne
    IHopeTib-ChansNotTooUpsetWithMeO.O
    Miss War-chan

    P.S.> Don't forget what I said! You NEED to UPDATE!!!!

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  • From ANON - dannigurl on January 02, 2005
    huh? where's the rest of it? damnit i hate cliff hangers.....please....please continue. I hope this story isn't going to be just about saiyan sex..although that is a plus...but also about love. LOL i sound like a loser....anyway please update soon
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  • From ANON - haruka on December 09, 2004
    WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH o_o
    you cant stop there (sniff)
    PLEASE write more very very very very soon
    you are a not nice for brekking the fic ther
    ^_^
    be nice and write sooooooooooooooon PLEASE PLEASE

    haruka
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  • From ANON - veggiefan2 on November 29, 2004
    Please write more for me!!!!!! i love the story especially the last chapter!!!!!!! please go on!!!!!!!!
    *begs on hands and knees*
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  • From ANON - Camaro on November 27, 2004

    Ok, since no one else on your review board wants to say it or leave any constructive criticism (which I'd say is necessary sometimes) I'll do it. Its a good story and a GREAT fucking idea to make Goku intelligent! That takes fucking balls right there when you take into account the fact that half the morons around here use Goku's apparent idiocy as a plot for their boring, talent deprived storylines. You aren't being cliche (for the most part) and that's greatly appreciated.

    But you write like a driving manual. There's very little emotion, the language usage is an absolute bore and all-in-all, about as entertaining as watching my grandmother eat peas one at a time. Its dull and meaningless. Reminds me strangely of a child's first book. "Jack can run. Jack ran. Jack ran fast." Try to put some emphasis on things, spice them up a little. And a bit of a dictionary run through would also liven up the vocab that you seem to have sacrificed along the way. Goku and Chi Chi in the first chapter are breaking up. A marriage of how many years is coming to a conclusion and its written like a walk through the mall. Where's the inner conflict? Or emotion? Or past?

    And how they speak? UGH!

    "Your silence tells me all I need to know. I refuse to stay in a marriage where love is not the key factor. But don’t feel guilty Goku because you see, I don’t love you anymore either. But I’ve found someone whom I do.”

    Do people ACTUALLY speak like that? Or was that a sad attempt to make the language a little more poetic? Oy! The characters talk as if they're reading a pop-up book to their kid at 3 in the morning. "Blah blah blah, but yeah.. yawn* its ok, cuz like... yeah, I found someone else too." Make it prettier or something!
    For GOD'S SAKE! Find a dictionary!

    I've always found that when writing, try to use the same emotions that you have. Say that YOU had been married for a long time, your marriage was breaking up. Dont you think it'd be a little more eventful then "yeah, you're smart now and dont love me, but its ok cuz I dont love you anymore and I've found someone whom I do."...

    Other than that, and that's just the first chapter but I somehow dont see myself progressing any further simply because I dont like the story, its not bad at all. I like the idea of Goku having a brain.. and if anyone can appreciate the struggle it is to create him that way, its me. Though Akira created all the characters in a very 2 dimensional way, he made Goku by far the least complex. Or at least, that was his original intent, and if it weren't for writers like you, he might have gotten his wish. But you broke the mold and really said a large "fuck you" to fanfiction norms. That's a sign of a true fanfiction writer. Not just a fanfiction writer, but a writer period. I dont know how old you are, it could be anything and I've been surprised before, but I'd say you honestly have alot of potential.

    Keep up the creativity and work harder on the delivery.

    Camaro

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  • From Shan on November 22, 2004
    I like it. A tad confused why Goku's sudden intelligence turns Vegeta into a sex kitten, but maybe genius is a turn-on for him. I mean, he was with Bulma.
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  • From ANON - Veggiefan2k4 on November 15, 2004
    "A physique no human would ever have" Wow, that had me good very nice quote. I love you. (NOT LIKE THAT YOU HENTAI'S)
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on November 10, 2004
    what is geta doing i hope he's not playing a game with goku heart.
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on November 10, 2004
    Now that was just damned mean. *grins*
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  • From ANON - SailorVegeta on October 09, 2004
    Great job! I've never read a fic like this before. Never seen one around, to tell you the truth. I'm liking this, even if I can't understand half the words Goku's now using! =P ^_^


    I've always believed Goku to be smarter than everyone thinks, and I kinda get annoyed when people decide to make fun and call him an idiot. I'm glad some one decided to write something like this. Excellent work! Can't wait for more! Especialy since it's a G/V pairing!thinthink they make the cutest couple!
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  • From ANON - gokumum on September 30, 2004
    OK, that is some beginning, now, let's see where you want to go with this. But, just check the two chapters, as you mixed up Goten and Goku in some place, which was a bit confusing.
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  • From ANON - En4cerMax on September 26, 2004
    I really enjoy this fic so far.
    Is this going to turn a darker?
    Or will it stay light?
    Will our little prince be able to handle the new Goku?

    Stay tuned for the next chaper of: Intelligence thy name is Goku.

    Hope you will write more.
    :)
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  • From ANON - Kugatsu on September 26, 2004
    Update!!!!!!
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