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Reviews for Never Again

By : freewater
  • From ANON - Camaro on March 14, 2005
    Not very good I'm afraid... you probably should have put a warning that this was a mpreg so people such as myself, who faithfully believe that that overused idea should have been shot in the ass the second it was originally created, wouldn't have to be surprised by it. Also, this was pretty damn predictable, fucking cliche as well. But you write well enough so why not try something that actually takes some creativity rather then just borrowing all the bad parts from other people stories? I'm sorry if this is harsh but honestly.. I see a lot of potential so please try and use it next time.

    Camaro
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on January 15, 2005
    Aww... that's the end. *is sad* Sorry it took me so long to get back to this fic. Busy, busy, and busy I've been. Little Gogeta. How cute. *grins* I like this fic alot. I can't wait to see what you have planned next.
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  • From ANON - Rayne on January 10, 2005
    Awwww... *cuddles* Glad they got together at the end. Would have cried if they didn't... ^^;;; Anyway, wonderful story! I applaud you!
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  • From Solo on November 27, 2004
    *grins* Hey! It's leelee, in case you didn't know (or forgot all about little ol' since I haven't been on the B&R ml in so long...^_~). Awesome stuff! ^__^ I've been meaning to read this for the longest, and I'm so glad I finally did! It was great, very original. I like it a lot! I hope to see another chapter for this very, very soon!
    Oh, and I think I heard something about you wrote a book? ^o^ Congratulations!
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  • From sisko66002 on November 27, 2004
    Wow. That was a really good chapter. I can't wait for the next. Hopefully by the end of the story there will be a lemon that doesn't start out non-con.
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  • From ANON - Majin Bulma on November 14, 2004
    YAY!!!!!!!!!!!! LEMON!! YAY!!!!!!! O.O -PRAISES- YAY!!!!!!!!! XD! O.OYou Updated! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! o.o! hope to see more soon o.o shall be on the look out. -stalks- o.o
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  • From ANON - En4cerMax on November 12, 2004
    Wow! I am really loving this story thus far. I wonder how the rest of the gang will take to this IF Trunks id pregnant again. And how will Pan react if he is? Please keep writing more! :)
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on November 05, 2004
    No...NO! And here I thought that I was the queen of cliffhangers. You win. I submit. The suspense is going to kil. *d. *dies* There are you happy now. Please update soon. I don't think I can take it.
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  • From ANON - NuTHoUse on November 01, 2004
    I love this fic so much i'm reviewing again on AFF!!! *chuckle* i liked the flashback/memories of when Trunks first had to 'put up with' Pan. Keep up the great writing!! Update!!
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  • From ANON - MAjin Bulma on October 30, 2004
    Yaaaaaaaay another chapter done X3! -is luvin it - =3! sucha good fic,nothing ive ever read before. MWHAHAHAHHAH =3!!! Cant wait to see what happens next -literally- XD! JA


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  • From ANON - sayah1112 on October 30, 2004
    I loathe you and your evil cliff hangers! I love this fic, I love the plot, and the general idea of it. Good work on this chapter! It was soooo sad *cries*. I only have one suggestion for you (Im in a creative writting class and now am used to critiquing other people's work) you change tenses in Gohan's dream, from past to present- and it was a bit confusing. If you clean that up then I think this chapter would be absolutely positively perfect! You best hurry out with the next one though, I dont like to be kept waiting!^.~

    LoL, congrats again on an awesome idea and awesome fic- I shall be checking daily for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on October 25, 2004
    Oh...but there is new suspense. What will Trunks decided? I love it. I really like how you discribed the flashback/dream. How Gohan could only watch and do nothing about it. Very cool.
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  • From jaygoose on October 22, 2004
    Okay the first chapter was amasing but with this second one you've really got me hooked. What did Gohan do?! I have to know how. Very good with the suspense by the way. I like this alot.
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  • From ANON - NuTHoUse on October 21, 2004
    i like this fic! Its different and...dun, dun, dun.....mysterious?!?!?!
    *whine*What did Gohan dooooo....i wanna knowwwww*pout*
    Update quick and save me from the pouting!!
    *chuckle*
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  • From ANON - Pixelgoddess on October 19, 2004
    Well written, interesting start. I am curious to see where this will go. I'm wondering, of course, what has happened that Gohan has been kept away from his daughter, and how Trunks has been able to enforce it. It has to be something along the lines of blackmail, I suspect.
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