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Reviews for The Cursed Idle Mind and Bloody Instinct

By : jaygoose
  • From ANON - shameika on November 19, 2004
    awesome story keep up the good work please update soon
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  • From ANON - aphinna on November 19, 2004
    cool fanfic please write more soon
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  • From ANON - Shinna on November 19, 2004
    I must say this was an unusual fanfic, but I enjoyed it. update soon
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  • From ANON - Macha on November 11, 2004
    Um, Vegeta, I'm not certain sleeping is such a good idea right now. *looks at Cell* He might find it in him somewhere, to have to stregth to get up som something.



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  • From ANON - sinningia on November 11, 2004
    Yes! Strike! *lol* another great chapter to your story. I hope that wasn´t it?! I love this fic to bits and I don´t mind it developing on and on and....on ^-^ Anyway, I´m not in my right mind at the moment, therefore only one thing to say: Continue! ^-^

    ~sinningia~
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  • From ANON - Card on November 10, 2004
    Vegeta couldn’t recall ever being this pleased with himself. ~~And we're all very proud of you too, Vegeta. *rolls eyes*It wIt was somewhat soothing to his damaged ego that he’d made the big bad prince so breathless. ~~*pats Cell* That's the way to think of it.

    *glomp ficcie* I looooove it! Isn't that weird? *looks worried about mental status* Anyway, it's great.

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  • From ANON - macha on November 07, 2004
    My, my. I wasn't really certain who was going to be where when you started this fic. For some reason, I had it in my head that Cell was going to end up being seme. *shrugs* Sometimes it's good to be wrong. hehe

    I really don't want to think too much about what Cell must have been really thinking on his little run. Kind of like a mouse with a cat after it I bet.

    hehe, I have a new twist on a old saying, "Don't run! You'll just get laid tired." *shakes head*
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  • From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on November 06, 2004
    This fic is great!!!
    I was wondering how long it would take you before you wrote of such a pairing. ^.~
    Your descriptions are wonderful and gosh so in character it is amazing. I can't bel how how much I love it...I mean Cell/Vegeta I would have never fathomed it. But that's one of the reasons it's so good. I loved the line "Hello Uke." hehe...nice. I can't wait until the next chapter!!!!!

    ^.*
    -MB-
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  • From ANON - Card on November 05, 2004
    ...*dies*

    GREAT!~ Perfect. Wonderful.

    And now I must sob because there will be a gap between this chap and the next one. *sob* Seriously though. Vegeta's being such a mean bastard to poor little defenseless Cell. *grin* I liked it. *pets slightly-evil Vegeta*

    Now I can't say you're going tke mke me love Vegeta/Cell or anything, but I do like this story.
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  • From ANON - sinningia on November 05, 2004
    "Hello, uke!"... tehehehe.... Another great chapter. I wouldn´t have expected this twist though, but it makes the story even more interesting. Anyway, maybe you should change it to V/PC then as to not give the wrong impression?! (That wasn´t criticism, that was just me being pedantic...^-^) And don´t worry, if you´ll take longer with the next update then that´s what you do and we will wait! ^-^
    ~sinningia~
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  • From ANON - Pixelgoddess on November 05, 2004
    What I really like is that Vegeta is dominating Cell here. Considering their prior history, I had expected Cell to be the agressor. Nicely done twist - and very clever of Vegeta to damage his tail enough to keep Cell weak. "Hello, uke," just made me giggle. *g*
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  • From ANON - En4cerMax on November 05, 2004
    I have never read a Cell/Vegeta slash before. And I'm likeing the way it's starting to come around. For me, I like the whole Dom/sub shindig. Gives me a creppy feeling, just like Cell is feeling right now. Keep up the good work and don't leave us hanging for thxt cxt chapter. se? se?
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  • From ANON - calia on November 04, 2004
    kewl chapter. I like it! Very much so! In the first chapter you had the story center more around Cell´s point of view- that was interesting to say the least. There are so many stories already focused on Vegeta´s thoughts-process, so maybe you could uphold this Cell-centered POV? Anyway, you have a fantastic way with words and keep the two in character (as much as it is possible her!) That´s rather rare and makes the story even more loveable. Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Pixelgoddess on November 03, 2004
    Interesting take on Cell's genetic inheritance. Cell and Vegeta plg? Ig? I actually like it. I never thought of these two together before, but this story makes it work. Vegeta gets flustered at Cell being naked. I like, I like. It seems like Cell is deliberately goading Vegeta into a more intimate battle. Can't wait to see what happens when Vegeta grabs his tail.
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  • From ANON - Pixelgoddess on November 03, 2004
    Very well written, and very much in character. Fights are notoriously difficult to write, but you did an excellent job. I never thought of Cell having hair before - interesting touch. Vegeta's ego would push him to accept Cell's challenge.
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