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Reviews for Beware Criminal

By : Veggiefan2
  • From KaptajnBellaMus on June 14, 2012
    Wow..
    You really don't like Vegeta do you? You sure ass hell made him and asshole. I like your writing style, but i really didn't like how much OOC they were. You should warn about that plz.
    Other when that your writing is good.
    Keep going.
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  • From ANON - Saiyajinprincess on November 19, 2006
    hi there, good job and a very interesting one, even if i donīt know if i really like your story Oo*
    yeha, that sounds strange,does it? ^^ but i meant it.
    errhh, well actually, i donīt like vegetas behavior in the story and i donīt think that he would do such things to bulma or any human, because theyīre not on his level and the proud prince, he wouldnīt...he just wouldnīt do that! ^^°
    besides i also think, that bulma would kick his royal ass to hell ( poisen him, little "accident" in the GR and so on :P ) before she would become a victim like that.But whatever, itīs your story and your fantasy for sure, not mine! :))and for some reason ("some reason" because of vegetas behavior, it really bothers me a little ^^) -iīm thrilled by your story and enjoyed to read it. iīm curious how goku will react, if he finds out what vegeta have done. But Goku already seems to guess that it was vegeta, does he?
    soooo, keep on and update soon, please. d^^b
    bye.
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  • From ANON - achillona 77 on July 24, 2005
    This is a good story...an unholy triangle/quadrangle...

    You should continue this...not only for the benefit of future readers, but for your benefit also...
    the satisfaction of completing something...

    I have basically figured out the bone of contention...what i am curious about is Goku's reaction when he finds out...

    ....and bulma, when did she figure out that she had deep feelings for Son-kun and why was she stupid enough to tell Vegeta?

    ...as for the Saiyan Prince himself, why is he not confronting the object of his desire--er--obsession?

    ...and speaking of said object...is he SO clueless that he can't figure it out? He can't be THAT much in denial that he can't figure it out?

    [People gravitate to stories in their own good time, PATIENCE is a virtue. Eventually people will read what you write and you will get reviews...just continue the story...:)

    Thank you for sharing what you have written so far... Domo arigato!]
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  • From ANON - bob on May 27, 2005
    hey i like your story and i like your writing style. it's awesome keep writing it.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 04, 2005
    I hope Bulma gets help soon.
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  • From ANON - En4cerMax on October 27, 2004
    Wow! This is pretty dark. I like! I'm hoping you write more. As for me, I personally do not like Bulma. Keep going!
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