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By : Kali
  • From ANON - Anon on May 10, 2010
    Hey, it's over! I think. Well, either way, I'm happy with the result of... something. Oh, and the awkwardness. That being with the whole journal thing. Yeah, usually I would've stopped reading at an event like that, but somehow you've manage to keep me drawn to it. Oh, and then there's all the majoring and stuff. You know, I didn't think of Tyson being the type to consider teaching, or rather, the type that actually liked kids. Well, maybe... But, yeah, it's all well and fitting. And then there's the whole 'confession' thing. Usually that'd bug the hell out of me, but again, you've managed to keep me interested. There was a little fluffiness in there, but luckily it was kept to a realistic level. Sort of. See, that's probably one of my favourite 'confession' type.. scene... things. Not that I find that that entertaining unless it happens to be somewhat awkward. And then there's the telling (or something) of Gramps' passing. I was kind of expecting some kind of awkward fluffy moment, you know, just 'cause it's so common, but I'm incredibly happy there wasn't all the crying and what not.

    Yeah, so that's about it. I'm really hoping there's some sort of ending or sequel or... something. Yeah, so that's about it.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 10, 2010
    Just incase the other comment didn't go through.

    Ah, that was fun. I'm so happy that there wasn't this whole awkward explanation about Kai sleeping with Tyson. Well, that certainly sounded wrong. Anyways, back to subject. It kind of bugs me, though because of the lack of any other character. Well, actually not really, but just having that huge, awkward explanation thing was just a little bit irritating. I mean, it was pretty entertaining, but fluf really isn't my thing. Oh, well. Atleast you threw Max and Ray in there. And now they're going to the store. Huzah for contact with the outside world, although most people here hate that. Whatever. It'll be interesting to read of they're having a conversation while pushing a cart of food around the aisles. Oh, but if one of them has a break down in the store it'll be more then a little... something. Doesn't matter. It'll still be entertaining.

    Oh, and just because I forgot to mention it, I'd completely forgotten that those blue stripes Kai has are shark fins. I think I new in the back of my head from somewhere, probably season one, but it never really registered, you know? Well, whether it's true or not is beyond my knowledge. Oh well.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 10, 2010
    Yeah, you could totally see that they'd be sharing a dorm. And then the whole 'avoiding each other' part, well, Tyson avoiding Kai, was pretty predictable. It was fun with the 'ice breaker' thing, but yeah, I'm not a whole fan of the all the fluff and crying and stuff. But, hey, it's normal if the guy's grandfather just died and he hasn't seen the guy in close to a year. Now, I wonder what Tyson's reaction would be to finding Kai in the same bed as him in the morning. That'll be interesting. Atleast the fluff is over. Wait, no, he still has to tell him about Gramps recently passing away. Crap. Oh, well, it'll be entertaining anyways.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 09, 2010
    Another well done chaptor. It's kind of fun to know that the Univerity isn't in one of those highlu populated areas. And it must be huge if there's more then one eight floor building, even if it is a university campus. Sounds pretty fun, though. And for some freaky reason, the dorms, well, Tyson's dorm, sounds very similar to my place. Yeah, so this seems like it'll be a fun year. Although, too much fluff and stuff (haha, it rhymed) hind of bugs me. Oh, well. It'll be entertaining anyways.

    Oh, and just because I keep forgetting to mention it (I think), that Gregory guy, Kai's butler, sounds like he'd resemble Watari from Death Note. Just though I'd bring that up.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 09, 2010
    And yet another entertaining chaptor. I really can't believe I catually all of that because, honestly, all this Abbey stuff and mental/physical abuse is starting to bug me. No offence to the people who loved that stuff. But it's still nice to see what's going on with everyone. And so now the story's actually starting, huh? Yeah, this'll diffinitely be interesting.

    So, yeah. And for some reason I always imagine Tyson to be from Canada for some reason. I think it's because I have a friend who looks like him. Yeah, just thought I'd get that out there.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 09, 2010
    Ah, another fun chaptor. So, Kenny and Hillary engaged, huh? Well, that seems a little bit awkward , but I guess I'm still imagining them all as those kids from before (sort of (weren't they, like, fifteen or something?)). Yeah, fun times. But, we haven't heard anything about Kai or the Blitzkreig Boyz, yet. It seems that, for the first time, Kai's not the main character with all the spotlight on him. It's kind of a relief. So, yeah, another overwhelmingly entertaining chaptor.

    Oh, and I forgot to mention this, but I'm eternally grateful that the BBA University is in Canada. Fun times, eh?
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 09, 2010
    Ah, that was a pretty good opening chaptor (or, as you say, prologue). It's nice to see how everyone's moved with their lives and aren't, you know, not.. young(?). A scholarship. A scholarship based one Beyblading talents. If that were really legit they'd have a crap load of students and a school probably the size of. Well, no, seeing as you'd have had to have been involved with the BBA and stuff. But, anyways, it was a pretty good chaptor. Got to see how everyone's doing so far (didn't I say that already?). Although, it's more or less just Kai having it all great and whatnot, Tyson grieving over Gramps' death, and then the others reacting to that. It was long, but worth reading. It seems like everyone's lives are turning out opposite of what was supposed to happen, but I won't question your magnificent plot ideas and writing skills. Crap, this is getting long. So, uhh, yeah. It was very entertaining and, uhh, yeah.
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  • From ANON - #1hardcorerabidfangirl on February 01, 2008
    get to the lemon already and this fic is great i love it most likely because i am a hardcore rabid yaoi fangirl -_
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  • From ANON - kailover2006 on November 27, 2006
    keep updating this story please
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  • From ANON - K.C on September 08, 2006
    *puppy dog face at Kali* Please please please update!! I really love this story!! I understand about fics running dry but plz finish it for all of your devoted readers * bows at feed* I really don't want to push you just plz consider it thank you!
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  • From ANON - K.c on November 15, 2005
    Plz continue I really like this story. I know what you mean about it running dry I have like 6 binders of unfinished storys but plz don't quit I can't stand that it makes me feel bad anyway keep going it'll be excelent no matter what but I little bit of KATY hottness os always welcome *wink*
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  • From ANON - asa reme on October 12, 2005
    Dude, i've waited and waited and still no new chappie. Where's the new chappie? What going to happen to Ty/kai and what about everyone else?
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  • From nocturne on October 12, 2005
    well, this fic is beautiful. ^.^ and I understand PERFECTLY how it is when fic's run dry. =_________________=;
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  • From ANON - Techno Ranma on July 01, 2005
    Did I ever tell ya how much I love how you write kisses??? Especially TyKa kisses? $_$! And I just get a warm feelin from this fic, keep it up Kali, you writing is loved!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 29, 2005
    I'm so glad those two got together. I can't wait to read the next chapter!!

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