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Reviews for Pretty Electric

By : Raletha
  • From ANON - Ashley on June 25, 2011
    I love this story. I'm amazed at how well you make trowa intelligent, and much like himself, but still almost simple minded. you did i great job and i hope your planning on finishing this story!! Thanks for writing it!
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  • From ANON - Passing Reader on January 28, 2009
    It's one-something in the morning, and I stayed up to read this. Simply put I loved it and hope to see more so please continue!
    Heres promising that I'll try to be more awake for my next review ^^' ~Passing Reader
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  • From ANON - teaspoon on July 26, 2006
    What captivated me from this story was its story line, it was unique and you were developing it quite well. The first time I read it I had recently discovered fanfics, but i remember being taken by it. So much I still remember it after all this time just by title. Hope you are thinking about continuing writing for this fic. I know i"m hoping to continue reading it.
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  • From ANON - Lou on January 23, 2006
    i love, love, love this story so far its one of the better ones ive read. i hope you conti. it soon
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  • From ANON - rae on January 19, 2006
    This is the first Sci-Fi G/W fic I've ever read...I have to admit that I was really shocked that I'd ended up liking this. It's pretty well thought out and it really goes into the differences between life and death. I think it's the first fic that I've read on ANY website that actually makes me think and truely pulls me into the theme. Great Job!!!! Please update this soon? Thanks!
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  • From ANON - Talia on January 02, 2006
    I enjoyed this one. It's the first GW i read in a while and i'm glad it has more plot then most of the 34 i have seen. I think you make a good interpretation of him even though his image is rusty because I havent watched it in years.
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  • From ANON - penny on December 19, 2005
    i really like your story its great.
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  • From ANON - jamie on December 13, 2005
    When are you going to update your story? ;-; I wanna read more!
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  • From ANON - Takya on December 11, 2005
    This is by far one of the best fics here...The character development and the relationship between Quatre and Trowa are very well written. The only thing I have to say is...wouldn't it be interesting, at some point, to take a peek in on Duo and Heero?
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  • From ANON - angelofshad0ws on December 09, 2005
    Awesome, awesome fic. It's perfect. I'm *begging* you to update, and soon.
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  • From ANON - dazz on November 28, 2005
    This story is sooooooo cool Iñm loving trowa so much here, please update soon, cant wait to read more!!!
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  • From ANON - Komikitty on November 16, 2005
    *blinks* I love it. I really do.
    But it's so deep and philisophical and...
    wow. Just, wow.
    I look forward to the next update!
    =^_^=
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  • From ANON - DarkGoddess on November 14, 2005
    Yay! I always love it when you update this story. And these last two chapters are so descriptive and beautifully written! Wow. I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 13, 2005
    i love this line: "For the person who dies, I suppose it is. For the people around him, though, it's change, and change that profound is hard to accept. Changes like death, we're rarely ready for. I want to be ready for it, for my own and for those of others." touche!


    looking forward to some trowa/quatre contact... if you know what i mean ;)
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  • From ANON - a non food on November 13, 2005
    I'm not usually a Q&T reader, usually skimming them. However, your characterizations of these two and their relationship is beautiful. The peeling away of Q's mind and the insight's into T's as the story develops gets at them in a way I don't see often, and has inspired me to look more into this pairing.

    There was a slight clean up issue you might want to look into in later editing. The puncatuation at times feels forced and overdone, like many uses of the semicolon. Another area was this : "Nothing, never mind," I said. Rising into the sinking bliss of the was the flicker of physical arousal; I tried to ignore it. "That feels nice, Trowa." --of the was the-- is a bit odd. These are nitpicky but hopefully helpful.

    Also, are you going to go into H&D's relationship in another story? And what about W?
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