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Reviews for A Saiyajin's Heart

By : SelenityJade
  • From ANON - kymera on April 16, 2009
    i absolutely love this fic inside and out. please let me know as soon as you post the sequel!
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  • From ANON - red102277 on January 24, 2009
    wow that was a great read! Sequel please!
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  • From jreel08 on November 23, 2008
    wow. someone tell me what the sequals called. please!
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  • From CanadianGinger on July 24, 2008
    A really good fic, I tore through it within a couple of hours. Like everyone else, I'm not thrilled about the ending, but I can wait for your sequel I suppose. Don't keep me waiting too long though. ;)
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  • From gokusgirl on May 20, 2008
    In spite of the mary sues you had in this story, I really liked it. Full of drama, romance, and the best of all, action. But I HATED how you ended it!!! I hope you do write a sequel... becasue I feel you left us dead in the water with that ending. Wow... it felt like I watched the Matrix II and the credits were rolling before I could grasp my mind around all the dialoge. And that's not an insult to you, just a comparison. @_@

    Good work overall, I give it 4 1/5 out of 5 stars. :D
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  • From ANON - Bulma 08 on March 19, 2008
    Ummm... ok, which is the sequel ? is it ready yet or do we have to wait more? and when or where are you posting it. Because the plot thicken in the final chapters but as an ending that chap was a cold water bucket over me. i refuse to let this story collect dust in the dark corners of my mind because there is no sequel and it didn't felt right. S o please I'm eager to keep reading this story line.
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  • From ANON - debbie on January 09, 2006
    Wow what a great story! I'm jealous:P And I think your really a talented writer. I give you credit for it. But what I wanted to know is where the sequel is becouse I can't find it:S It would really help me out becouse I want to know how the story continiues.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 07, 2006
    hi
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  • From ANON - Yuka on October 30, 2005
    Ooh my gosh! It was a great joy to read your fan fics since my friend introduced me to them. But there is one question that I would like to know if you have a little time to answer whenever possible, What is the title of the squeal of this fic? I just finished reading this and it's such a cliff hanger for me. :'( But respond when it is convienent for you. Thanks! Keep writing!

    - Yukarime A.K.A. Twiggy.
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  • From ANON - Blue-Haired Beauty on October 29, 2005
    Oh my gosh! Loved it! I can't wait for the sequil. agh! That can't come fast enough.
    I love your stuff Selenity Jade. Arigato! :)
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  • From ANON - Meghan on August 20, 2005
    MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!! this is an AWESOME fic! I just love everything that you do! HOW do you DO it?!?!?!? forget it, just KEEP doing it, k? I love the way you are defining the whole relationship between B&V thanx for the great read!
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  • From ANON - jenna on August 15, 2005
    OH MY GOD! OHMYGODOHMYGODOHMYGOD! Wow, this was an incredible story. MuSt HaVe SeQuEl NoW!! I will definitely be looking forward to your next story! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - jeck on August 15, 2005
    I only commented the way I did because 1) I found your spelling and grammar mistakes horrible enough that they actually interrupted the flow of my reading; 2) sounding defensive in a FIRST chapter actually invites hostility especially when you demonstrate that you are willing to resort to violence to "defend" yourself; 3) I note that my review is actually the only one so far that actually tries to critique your writing (at least on Mediaminer) so I have no idea if you are defensive or not when it comes to even negative comments-- I apologize if this is a wrong assumption but that tends to be the general attitude of most fanfic writers who are defensive over perceived "slights."

    I still recommend that you just TAKE IT EASY on the author's note. Especially when now, in this newer version, it takes up at lesat 2 paragraphs-- one devoted to me and a heated defense of yourself of why you find it offensive that I thought you would treat my review as a flame. Frankly, I don't care for drama so I find any behavior that actually CALLS ATTENTION to drama itself-- devoting a paragraph to me as a reviewer is rather like "calling me out" as if for a duel-- rather disrespectful. I find it strange what you choose to be defensive about too-- your comments in and of themselves detract from the story when they clamor for attention to be made to you personally.

    Like I said before, this isn't a flame but just some advice from a reader that's had to wade through a crapload of bad fanfics. You're one of the better ones, which is why I bother to even give you some critique. You can take or leave my advice. But if you persist in drama whoring-- I'll just shut up. I'd rather someone think they got an imaginary victory rather than have both sides lose in an Internet battle.
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  • From ANON - Akari on August 14, 2005
    you beter post that sequel soon before someone does kill you.
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  • From angelwarrior1 on May 17, 2005
    Oh my gosh!What kind of ending is that!Seriously though,you had me on the edge of my seat.I will be looking for the sequel now so ta ta!


    Angelwarrior!
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