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Reviews for Fight Club

By : Switchblade003

From ANON - deathseed101 on August 21, 2005
Wow this story was awsome, and your rant made lots of sense, I love those akward endings ^_^!
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From ANON - Ever-the-Cliche on April 03, 2004
I'm... sorry. But the end of your story made me feel sick. I really liked International Relations and then I came over here to continue the story... I liked the idea of Trowa and Quatre, and even the VERY OOC Quatre-ness of the whole thing. However... you're ending left SO much to be desired, it's not even funny. I could understand a good portion of the angst, I could understand Quatre's confusion, but... your ending? No... I think you're a wonderful writer and displayed a lot of talent with characters and stuff but... you're ending was very unflattering. If your purpose was to stir up emotion in the reader, than I guess that was successful. But... if you're going to have unhappy endings where Quatre runs off with Duo in a drug-desiring f*cked up scenario and leaves Trowa as some kin hel helpless, used victim... please warn accordingly. I read through 8 chapters of each story, because the summary was 3x4x3. Warn people if you're sticking in 2x4x2. Warn people if you won't bother to complete a relationship, even in an AU story. I guess I'm just really disappointed. You did stir up emotion in me, but... what can I say. I like happy endings, even in angst. I just really wish you hetteetter warnings, that's all. I hope this doesn't come off as a pointless flame, because it's not. I'm just angry that I spent my time reading a story with such a... uncompleted ending. Gah...
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From ANON - AJ McKay on November 14, 2003
Oh...haven't been to this site in a while. You've updated wow. The ending didn't surprise me-made me quite somber-but it didn't surprise me. The way you expressed the characters' emotions in chapter eight was amazing. I felt the pain that both Quatre and Trowa felt. It's always bothered me how people that could be good for each other can't be because of other circumstances.

Nice switch of backgrounds of the two without becoming too OOC. Interesting work and keep writing damit!

Glad your back Jack!

~AJ McKay
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From ANON - DarkGoddess on October 22, 2003
I really liked this story and the one that came before it. They were both very well written and very creative. I was just disappointed at the end of this one. I was really hoping that things could have worked out for the two hem.hem. But then, that's life. Nothing is perfect, and it never turns out the way you want it to. Great job with the writing anyway.
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From ANON - Niu Shiy-Ue on October 22, 2003
AAAUUUGGGHHH!!!

Okay, nhat hat I'vttentten that out of my system, I admit I don't really like the way this ended, but that has more to do with the fact that I like happy ending 3x4s than anything with the writing style. It's a very realistic ending and frankly I readfictfiction to escape, not to depress myself with more bad stuff. It's hypocritical, especially since I don't seem to write anythbut but bad endings, on the other hand I write for different reasons; ie. mainly to get that stuff out of my system before it makes me feel even worse.

My, that's getting wordy.

To summarize, I don't really care if you continue this arc or not. While I'd love it if you wrote a happy ending where they end up together, it certainly is more meaningful and perfectly fine to end it here. Actually, I think I'd prefer if you continued some of your other arcs instead (although as noted before, this may just be my selfish interest in seeing T and Q get together).
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From ANON - Neko Taka on October 21, 2003
*sobs, but knows you ended it for a reason and snuggles his Q-bean, knowing the blonde isn't really bad* good fic...but...evil too...poor Trowa...evil Duo...*sniffle*
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From ANON - arashi38 on July 27, 2003
I loooove this fics..love it..oh, cannot wait for next update. Please dont take to long to update this fics..onegai
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From ANON - Fabi_chan on July 15, 2003
Hey there!!!!

I'm sorry I didn't review last chapter, but I was away on vacation....it's winter vacatior mer me, and I went away with my family, buwantwanted you to know I didn't forget about you or this fic.
I just wanted to say that if you ever need someone to talk too my offer is still up. My mailbox is free for you. Whenever you need it, just e-mail.
Well...now let's get to the real reason of this.....this chapter was as great as the others. Quatre sure is messed up in this, but it's nice to see something different from the usual plot. You are doing a wonderful job here. ^-^
Oh! And I hope you find the strengh to figure out your life's plot.
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From ANON - tq04 on July 11, 2003
i really like your work, all of it, and this is my fav story. i'm sorry you hit a low spot in your life, but i hope to still see your fiction in the future. best regards.
tq04
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From ANON - Cob on July 10, 2003
*Sniff* *HUGS* That was a great chapter. More emotional than the others, and I like that in a fic. I feel very sorry for the next person Quatre is found screwing too!!! *dazzling smile to Trowa*

Heh, I know I kinda went off on a tangent in the last review, but hey, I'll help with writer's block if you decide to stay in fanfiction! I hope your RL curbs back to normalicy without too much more hardships. If you don't continue with fanfiction, just remember that we, the readers, loved your works! *hugs* Hope that we hear from you!
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From ReddAlice on July 08, 2003

Mmm... Fight club... I always have loved that movie. (Sorry long RA talk ahead)

As a somewhat avid reader of you writing, I am sorry to hear that your life is going a-whack. Believe me, I know how it is, lol I'd love to say I didn't but OH HOW I DO!

You're right to say nothing is set in stone, and as a reader I appreciate your apology and advance notice of (possible) absence. However, as a writer (one who writes when the mood, or personal angst, motivates her), I believe you shouldn't stop writing. Maybe posting, but definitely not writing. It?s an outlet whether you can appreciate it for its simplicity and therapeutic nature or not. That's the way it is, and if you are good at it (which you know you are so stop the self pity and or loathing, whichever that was), then you should do it.

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As for the story, I like this chapter, it just felt right in the story. It had a solid beginning, and explanation, and a spectacular conclusion. I TOO feel sorry for whomever Trowa finds in Quatre's bed next. I'm still waiting curiously about Quatre's mysterious past, and the full story on Duo (whom you played off... as well yummy)! I love to get worked up over a good fic, especially one so well written! As a warning though, from someone who falls prey to it frequently, don't let you characters fall into stereotypes in which their actions become less self-willed and more programmed. Habit is different than repetition; so far you've done EXTREAMLY WELL! I don't think you are capable of doing ly, ly, but I just thought I'd wave a flag around inanely.

*CHECK* Html is a little wonkie!! LoL.

Once again, thank you for rvelrvelous read, and I hope to see more from you soon. I pray that everything in your life works out for the best, don't worry it always does, but in your case... I hope it happens faster as so it doesn't eat you up inside.

Best wishes and love-

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From ANON - Usako on July 07, 2003
Oh Sweetie! I'm so sorry. I know how much it hurts to lose someone. Trust me. It really sucks, putting it rather harshly and plainly. There's just not a better word for it. I thought my heart would never get mended. I wish you all the luck and I hope everything will be ok. Even though I don't really know you very well, if you need to talk to someone, just email me. I'll listen to whatever you've got to say. If you need to vent, that's fine too. lol Hope verything works out.

Much love,
Julia
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From ANON - AJ McKay on July 07, 2003
Conflict and major plot happenings since last time I read this story. Since the beginning of International Relations I've seen a maturity and growth in the story chapter by chapter. Fight Club is really becoming quite the sequel and frankly I'm enjoying is even more than I enjoyed International Relations. You seem to know where this is going and hopefully you'll make it there.

On the technical side, you have few grammar mistakes, which is generally awesome. Your writing is tight and to the point. Your characters are well thought out and don't change personalities every chapter (a problem for too many authors or so it seems). I do recommend spacing out your paragraphs for easier reading, but that's a minor suggestion. Make sure to read the chapters through a few times heckheck for any irregularities and such before you upload them. A beta reader is nice to have, but can be a pain also, depends on the person.

On a more personal note if you must bow out from fandom for a bit then you must. Fanfiction and computers take the passenger seat compared to your life, don't throw anything like that away! I have a few stories that I stopped in the middle because something happened in my life or I became busy with other things. I came back and found out my writing style and interests didn't fit with my past projects. I know I left a few hopeful readers in the dust, but that's life. Do what you must and good luck. If you keep writing then may your writings ever be clever, but if you don't then be happy with the fact that you left a mark in the world of fandom. Hope everything works out for the best!

~AJ
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From ANON - Takaro on July 07, 2003
*tips his head to the side, then hugs* Awwww, its gonna be ok. I promise. ^_^ And you have never EVER given us mediocre fics. All you're fics are incredible...and if I could, each and every one of them would be dubbed with either my 'Drool Worthy Fic Award' or my 'Greatest Yaoi Fic Award'. Honest, I really would do that. I just hope things get better you.you. Don't need you ending up in the white padded room like I did. Deep calming breaths and a nice place to be calm. It helps *noddles* Cheer up. We all luv ya.
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From ANON - Usako on July 05, 2003
Well, I must say that I will most likely go back and review every chapter when I have time. I've been SO busy lately that it's ridiculous. lol But I still love your story! Just b/c i haven't been reading and reviewing doesn't mean I've lost interest in your fic... By no means actually. I adore Quatre and Trowa. They're one of my favorite pairings. And you really write them well. Keep up the good work. Love ya!
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