Click Here!

  • 1

Reviews for One Stormy Day

By : Hibari
  • From ANON - jmm on April 21, 2016
    OMG I love this story! Can't wait for you to finish it. Yessssssss please make a lemon!!! Aww vegeta was so cute worrying about bulma and all the nights he went and searched for her. I hope bulma remembers what yamcha did to her and tells vegeta. Aww when vegeta and bulma kissed. Again please finish and do a lemon!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - De on August 01, 2006
    Lemon, lemon, lemon! ::starts a lemon chant:: Seriously though, try the lemon first, and if you find out that you can't write it, then you can write around it. But you'll never know if you don't *try*.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Legilmyth on July 02, 2006
    Well first let me say I have throughly enjoyed reading this story, I'm very glad I found it.
    You have Vegeta perfect, (Drool) Any way I wouldn't mind seeing a lemon at some point but I for one love leaving readers in suspence, what can I say it's the only legal way I'm allowed to be evil.
    ( laughs, its 1 in the morning I'm a little wonky LOL)
    Any way I look forward to seeing where you go from here.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - mingleing g on February 10, 2006
    have them have a lemon and then have her after her orgazm remember all the things of her past.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - sex goddess on February 10, 2006
    ohh have her remember yamachas break-up and have her hit him with a pan or something
    Report Review

  • From ANON - casi on January 24, 2006
    i think you should do a lemon and have vegeta and bulma GET together...
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Laini on January 16, 2006
    Great story so far and about the lemon...i think you should go for it! I mean obviously if your lovey thinks you cant do it then i say take the challenge! lol.Im sure you'll do fine with it also.Just whenever you do get around to write it just take your time.Oh yea update soon also,i cant wait to read more ^_^
    Report Review

  • From ANON - GGL on January 16, 2006
    Ack! I don't care which you do! Just continue. Though a bit of lemon wouldn't be illy placed here. It actually seems like a good set up and not just thrown in. Or at least a cute little scene. =P
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Aelan on November 21, 2005
    I wanna be on the mailing list!!

    my email is Kaylariana05@yahoo.com

    I love your story so very much. It flows nicely, and really keeps me interested in the storyline. Awesome job.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Celtique on November 23, 2004
    I've got to say, this story would be much better if you would get to the point. So far FIVE chapters have been the same! Bulma hurt, lost memory... And that's it? Your style of writing is wonderful, don't get me wrong... But you're dwelling on this part of the story way to much...
    Report Review

  • 1
T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!