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By : Solo
  • From JubblesBubbles on January 07, 2011
    "Decent" is an adjective I would use to talk about your grammar; actually, no, your grammar writing is more than decent (considering the fics there are).

    But your closure... "don't think, Trunks. Feel." was PERFECT

    good job
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  • From ANON - Ivy on February 09, 2005
    “You’ve been bothering me ever since you came to this time. You want my approval that badly, boy?” Vegeta smirked haughtily. “Then bow to your Prince.”
    (swoon & drool) I love it when vegeta get's all demanding! (stil drooling all offer the keyboard) thehe...so naughty I love it! :p this is a very good fic, a very high two tumbs up for you, good job! :p
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  • From ANON - Princess Angela on January 24, 2005
    *crys* I love this.... it's so beautiful yet.... the sex... at the same time!! *hugs* if I could get pregnant from just reading something.... I would so be having like..... a litter of brats right now!!!
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  • From ANON - JenaVeta on November 27, 2004
    I liked it. You could make it even longer if you wanted to. Allow Trunks to some how go back to his father and try and be with him. Or some shit like that. Inscet isn't really my thing and I prefer GxV but you write well!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From OriginalShinigami on November 26, 2004
    Sweet. As strangely as it is to call such a relationship sweet, it is. Vegeta saying, "Don't think, Trunks. Feel." seems to make everything alright. (I loved that line!) The last bit about love made me smile! It was more than decent and I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Good stuff!
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  • From ANON - Hecate18 on November 26, 2004
    Awww That was so cute, I normally don't read Vegeta/Trunks fics unless they're writen well, and this one was. Great fic! ^_^
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  • From mystikal on November 25, 2004
    Wow! Again, another great fic, Rayne! ^_^
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on November 24, 2004
    *drool* that was hot and stemy i always wondered how did trunks earn vegeta approval beside turning into a super sajyin
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on November 24, 2004
    Oh my lord. That was so wonderful. It did have a moral to it afterall. Damn that Vegeta...he's so good in every lemon he's in. I love this btw. *grins*
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  • From ANON - En4cerMax on November 23, 2004
    Awww. This was co cute. Even though Vegeta can be rough with his offspring, he still loves them very much. All the dead beat dads across the world can learn from this. :)

    Demini
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  • From ANON - Del0 on November 23, 2004
    For a PWP this was good. There was enough there for a story though it could have been fleshed out more. It held my interest and the emotion it contained made it satisfying to read. I'm glad you decided to share it, and I look forward to seeing your future work and how your style matures.
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