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Reviews for The Most Important Day

By : TechnoRanma
  • From ANON - Anon on May 18, 2010
    Yay. Ah, that's a fun time. So, it's funny how even though Kai got the date wrong, he came anyways. Well, you've probably added why somewhere in there and I just didn't bother to read it. Whatever. So, what movie were they watching again, anyways? I don't remember. And why would Grampa be taping pRon? There's a whole side story somewhere in there.

    Yeah, that was really something. You know, most people don't really write them properly, but you got their personalities down perfectly. Slipping popcorn into Kai's hair is totally something Tyson would do. Yeah. And at the end where Kai tryies to... analyse (?) Tyson's reason for... getting him to... come over (?) was pretty interesting. It would've fit perfectly if he'd guessed correctly. But of course it would've been too fluffy and predictable. Yeah, I think I'm done now.
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  • From ANON - Tyson on November 29, 2005
    AWW that was SO PRO hahahah hly man i loved it lol GREAT story
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  • From ANON - MyrasFP on August 18, 2005
    lol thanks or skipping classes to finish it, ooh! dat was a good lemon! i liked it because it was so funny tho! who likes ice cream? MyrasFP likes ice cream! OOH YEAH BABY!!!
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  • From ANON - kiotana on March 17, 2005
    you great author"!i loved this story!write more and next time you can go in each otheror try different pairings...go for it!
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  • From ANON - lita on February 04, 2005
    I loved it!!! It was sweet and funny!! I love how Tyson was putting popcorn in kai's hair!!!(hillarious!)
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  • From ANON - Hiwatari Lover on January 22, 2005
    That is THE best story I've ever read on adultff.net! I love it, it made me laugh SO much too!

    Tyson/Kai, yummy... ^.~
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  • From ANON - KandKL on January 03, 2005
    Wow...that was really good! Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Lily Carroll on January 02, 2005
    A fic entertaining, romantic, and with a scene lemon F% $#!!!!! I love your lemons!!!


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  • From ANON - lo on December 05, 2004
    THat was very cute. I like the wat you structured your scene. Nice job.

    lo

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  • From ANON - Glay on December 01, 2004
    Best fic evar!!
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  • From ANON - White Dog on November 29, 2004
    OMG that was too cute for words!! You rock!! ^__^ I have to go see my fave TV show now, but I'll come back to read this again, trust me. ;)
    White Dog
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  • From ANON - Rejiita on November 28, 2004
    Fantastic!!
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