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Reviews for The Barrier

By : Kimmy
  • From MutantPoptart on June 19, 2011
    This was a very powerful story. I was really pulled into it. You're style is poetic and beautiful to read. You portrayed Goku very well, i felt the turmoil he was in. I look forward to seeing if this story gets any lighter but it's still great if you end it here i think :) thank you, i truly enjoyed this story!
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  • From ANON - Hakura on January 20, 2010
    Oh my god, I loved this! I've been looking for some good dark fics, and you really hit the nail on the head. The characters were kept mostly canon outside of Goku's little psycho trip, X3, and I love how the story kept to the same theme and did not get all sappy at the end. I hate the sappy stuff. lol Great job! :D
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  • From ctsama on November 03, 2009
    You know, I'm really angry with you for making me feel pity for Goku in this story. ;) What a great, heart-wrenching story. Vegeta was so true to character... wow. And the ending was perfect. Bravo!
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  • From Zofo on October 25, 2008
    So dark. I feel sorry for both of them :( Goku's moment of anger has cost him the respect of his prince and any chance of more.

    Any chance of a reprieve?
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  • From DarkSerapha on October 06, 2008
    Oh.. is there going to be more to this? *sniffle
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  • From ANON - vegetachik7 on January 02, 2006
    Wow, this story was very well written. It was amazing, good stuff.
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  • From ANON - Jay FicLover on November 05, 2005
    Can't help wanting third chapter now.

    It was good, but the first one was better. This chapter is that kind that you read and are left with a feeling of unfullfillment, like saying to yourself: AND....So, what happens now? That's it? That can't be it!!"

    Anyway, they're very in character. I couldn't help but feel sad for Goku... such torment, such feelings of rejection, such self loathing... Okay, Vegeta was the one to get raped, but I can't help but think Goku's the one whose gonna be REAL miserable about it... Unless Vegeta is better at hiding his feelings than I thought he was.

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  • From ANON - Black Haired Demon on November 02, 2005
    Damn! That was really intense.

    Vegeta was right in character.. just can't believe Kakkarot did something like that!! what an ass.

    A very well written this fic.
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  • From ANON - Kichi on October 30, 2005
    Thank you!! I was so happy to see a part 2 I almost died! I really like this fic because I know this is the worst possible thing Goku could EVER do to Vegeta and you made this seem completely believeable even though Goku really doesn't seem like someone who would do that. Especially not to Vegeta. I really enjoyed part 2 and hope against hope there is a part 3, because I really think Vegeta would want to kill Goku after this and everone would notice how Vegeta suddenly hated Goku more than ever. Because I miagine him avoiding his prescence althogether unless he wanted to beat the shit out of him. Which I'm sure he would want to try often. If i was him I'd spit in his face every time I saw him. And if he ever tried it again, I'd rip his throat out with my teeth.
    So anyway, thanks for another lovely piece of work for me to enjoy and I hope to see another, but these two could stand alone as they are, just wishful thinking. ;D
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  • From ANON - Macha on October 27, 2005
    Angsty, angsty, angsty. And very well written.

    Will there be a chapter 3?
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  • From ANON - kittenqueen on June 02, 2005
    *Is speechless*

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  • From ANON - kiro on January 28, 2005
    Very well done, I really loved it :> but It kind of leaves you on a cliff hanger. Will their be anymore?
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  • From ANON - Kichi on January 17, 2005
    I just wanted to leave you a review here, I think this fic was awesome and would love to see a part 2!
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  • From ANON - Sarkywoman on November 30, 2004
    Wow, are you going to write more of this? It's amazing.
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  • From ANON - db27 on November 30, 2004
    Hey, cool story. You should continue this!
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