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Reviews for The Barrier

By : Kimmy
  • From ANON - Liz on November 29, 2004
    I think you need to continue this as a chp. fic. It would be interesting to see how it would turn out.

    ~Liz~
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  • From ANON - Kakarott Lover on November 29, 2004
    I love fics that explore the darkness inside Goku. That was awesome and I feel sorry for my poor little prince...give us more please!
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  • From ANON - sinningia on November 29, 2004
    wow... Iīm stunned.... that was.... beautiful!!! Really wonderfully beautiful. You got Gokuīs emotions across so clearly itīs astonishing... Iīm speechless. Wonderfully written. Please write a sequel (and if you do please donīt make Vegeta all "whoa, I like it rough." because thatīd just be plain wrong and happens too often in fictions ^-^) Very uniquely written.... I love it alot!!! Didnīt expect to read something like that so early in the morning, but you made my day today!

    ~sinningia~
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  • From ANON - JenaVeta on November 28, 2004
    OMG I loved it! Teehee I want you to write more! Well,maybe not, leave us wondering what happens! Still, I will so read more!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Pixelgoddess on November 28, 2004
    Intense and disturbing. Very well written. I'm always uneasy with rape stories, because rape is not love, not sex. It is violence and taking. I don't see how Vegeta could ever accept this theft of self, and Goku would have to be deluded and lying to himself to think that it could be otherwise. I'm hoping you continue this in a realistic vein, instead of having something like 'He raped me and now I love him'.
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