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Reviews for TOY SOLDIERS

By : sinistra
  • From ANON - momiji_k on July 20, 2006
    Beautiful! So much emotion was conveyed in this fic. I hope if you write of have written any more Roy/Riza stuff that I will some day come across it. :)
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  • From ANON - Wind child on July 29, 2005
    YAY another great roy/riza fic! there are so few on adultfanfiction
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  • From ANON - mad man 742 on May 31, 2005
    nice story it was really well written
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  • From ANON - Ayashi on May 08, 2005
    This was written MOST gorgeously! I've never read any other fic that, while definitely being a heart-racer, set down the characters so well! I love the way it is more about the emotions they are going through, rather than the act itself........ Not to mention that I've never seen another fic where lyrics are appropriately used.... exquisitely, wonderfully, awesomely well done!!!
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  • From ANON - Heather on April 07, 2005
    i love this story! the colonel and hawkeye are one of my favorite pairings in fma. and the lyrics to "toy soldiers" interspersed throughout the story really impact the message you're trying to get across. great song choice. i just wish this wasn't a one-shot!!!
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  • From ANON - reinhartvonlohengramm on April 04, 2005
    80s song and 9-s film references are fine with me when they are used to make such a cool fanfic! YOU ROCK!
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  • From ANON - drake220 on March 26, 2005
    wow, this was GREAT. did you bawl when maes died? i cried like a baby. great one shot, loved it.
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  • From ANON - SillyNiecy on March 26, 2005
    I just wanted to tell you that this fic almost made me cry! (And not only because it happens after Hughes dies *sob*). It was wonderfully well written. Your word flow was very nice. The song lines worked very well where you put them. Honestly, as it went along, I wasn't reading it for the sex. Mostly, I wanted to find something and then read something that was Riza/Roy, because Ed/Roy makes me gag and shiver *cold chill*. Thank you so much for such a beautiful story!
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  • From ANON - Noelle on March 10, 2005
    This is the most beautiful Fullmetal Alchemist fanfic I have ever read. I haven't seen ep. 25 yet, but when I do, I will come back and read this story. It will probably mean a lot more to me. Keep writing. We need more poignant, mature fanfics on this website. And if it's a songfic, even better. It gets the emotion across so much better.
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  • From ANON - Chelsey on February 20, 2005
    wow......I was listening to TOY SOLDIERS while I read this...I love that song, and I think you wrote the perfect fic to go with it....simply amazing...and yeah, I noticed the line. Wonderful job.

    ~KikyoKiller~
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  • From ANON - tsukashi on February 12, 2005
    Heya, I was browsing through the FMA section. I was actually checking to see if you had decided to update your other fic, when I saw this one. I really liked this a lot. I normally don't read the song lyrics in stories, but Toy Soldiers has remained a fav song of mine for so long that I actually read them, and they fit so well. I love the way you describe each of them, giving them a human quality that is missing from the anime. That is what I feel fan-fiction should be about. Giving the characters added depth. I encourage you to do some more Roy/Riza, I really like the two you have posted.
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  • From ANON - Asmodeus on January 26, 2005
    Wow. I mean, I know this was a lemon, but that was very well wrtitten. It was extrememly graphic, and it was more about the people in it than the act. The addition of the song's lyrics from Eminem's "Like Toy Soldiers" (don't know the other song) was a nice effect that really did set the tone for the fic. Very well written.
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  • From ANON - PinkStarz on January 23, 2005
    This story is written so beautifully. Well done.
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  • From ANON - Rose on January 12, 2005
    That was really, really good. Exquisite writing. You have the characters down perfectly, and I loved how you described Roy's feeling after Hughes' death. Very touching, an excellent job. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Gabba on December 29, 2004
    This was very lovely and heartfelt. The song fits so perfectly with the mood, very good job. I enjoyed it greatly. ::Grins::
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