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Reviews for Innocent Dance

By : Might
  • From ANON - Cat in the web on October 21, 2005
    Well, after that chapter you need your bodyguards! Really I hope in the next chapter Kai and Rei will be together again! You are not done with making Rei suffer, hu? It is a very good story, but I'm almost afraid of what you will write next.
    Well, mabe it seems like I like to suffer, but keep writing.
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  • From ANON - Crimson on October 21, 2005
    Oh dearie, you'd better make the next chapter good or else I swear i'm gonna kill you...or rather, I'm gonna let Kai kill you. See, he's been wanting to make you a test target for Dranzer for such a long time now, and I'm the only one stopping him. If your next chapter isn't what I expect, I'm gonna *forget* to stop him.

    Kai: BRING ME AND REI BACK TOGETHER DAMNIT!!! OR ELSE...DRANZER!!!!!!!!!! (charges towards Warrior of Flame with Dranzer ready to launch)

    Crimson: Kai, down!!!

    Kai: BUT SHE BROKE US UP!!!!!!

    Crimson: She'll fix it...WON'T YOU?! (brings out a switchblade and threatens authoress with it)

    Kai: By the end of this fic, I expect to be wedded to my beloved Rei-koi, Boris should be dead and Salima should have found herself another guy already!!!! So fx this huge mess you made, and I might even spare your life, got it!!!!?!?!?!
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  • From ANON - Fantasy on October 20, 2005
    I.... Am.... Pissed off =.= How could you leave it there?!?!?!?!?!?!?! And let any of that stuff happen?! Do you qannt make us readers crwy? T.T
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  • From ANON - Shitza on October 19, 2005
    You...

    *incert millions of evil words, you do as you please*

    Fights her way between her bodyguards. HeHe

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    Okay, that was simply a joke. *glares at the annoying bodyguards* I am pretty sure it will all work out in the end, just please don't make Salima tag after Rei all the time, that'll make me sick!!! not that I seriously hate Salima, but she is not meant for Rei, and that's a final!!!

    *Shitza's readers* What are you doing here, update please!!!

    WAAH, they found me! GTG, but take a leaf from that and update soon. *leaves before her readers tears her apart*

    Shitza

    Ps: If you do get seriously bored, you are allways free to read the Elemental Legend series posted on Ff.net

    Just advertising
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  • From ANON - Shitza on October 19, 2005
    You...

    *incert millions of evil words, you do as you please*

    Fights her way between her bodyguards. HeHe

    -------------------------------------------------------------

    Okay, that was simply a joke. *glares at the annoying bodyguards* I am pretty sure it will all work out in the end, just please don't make Salima tag after Rei all the time, that'll make me sick!!! not that I seriously hate Salima, but she is not meant for Rei, and that's a final!!!

    *Shitza's readers* What are you doing here, update please!!!

    WAAH, they found me! GTG, but take a öeaf from that and update soon. *leaves before her readers tears her apart*

    Shitza

    Ps: If you do get seriously bored, you are allways free to read the Elemental Legend series posted on Ff.net

    Just advertising
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  • From ANON - blueinferno on October 19, 2005
    *crys* omg! poor ray!! *sobs* omgomgomgomg update sooooooooooooooooooon please! this is to cool ive been waiting sooo long! :P
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  • From ANON - Raven on October 18, 2005
    I do hope that the next update won't take too long, i really like this storry, and get upset if I see it sit for too long. It makes me think that you've forgotten the story. I'm really glad that you like this story as much as your readers do, one can tell when a writter truely loves their work, and you do. As for a sequel, when and if you end this, yes, I would love to read the sequel! I hope that, if you do make one, that you don't wait long between the ending of this one, and the begining of the next. I have never enjoyed reading a fan fiction nearly as much as I have enjoyed reading this one. Your play on the emotions, and the mental state of your characters is wonderful, and it keeps the story alive, and going. I look forward to every new chapter, and will continue to do so. Hope that you can update soon. Ja ne.
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  • From ANON - Draza on October 18, 2005
    you may have bodyguards all around you *jumps into air* BUT NOT OVER YOU!!! I'LL KILL YOU FOR THAT ENDING!!!

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  • From ANON - LaDiNi on October 18, 2005
    Ok, so I love your story, but stop with all the disgraces already! Isn't it enogh elaready girl? Jesus, they deserve some love no? And damn Kai for that sense of oportunity ~_~...
    Update and I for one won't kill you (I should!!! But as you said, no more story would come ;_;!)
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  • From ANON - phoenix on October 18, 2005
    i can't believe rei is so nice

    rei: *huffs* too nice
    kai: that's okay baby i'll make it up to you
    rei: smirksKita:*covers her eyes* THEY BURN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - xanae on October 18, 2005
    *O* this is amazing!!!!
    don't worry, I'm not going to kill you, I'm giving you the oportunity to make things right XD
    where the hell is Boris??? that £"$£%%& Just put him in front of me, I'll make him pay!!!
    and what about Kai?? TT_TT he has to listen to Rei, he MUST.
    and and.... Rei's dad!! TT_TT I cried a lot knowing about his leg and all that stuff, but HEY!! this is your storym u are gog here so u can make a miracle occure.
    hope next update does not take so long, I need to know how everything ends:
    *chu*
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  • From ANON - Blackrose on October 17, 2005
    Oh no. *Grabs baseball bat and waves it threateningly.* You'd better not end this too quickly. Grrrr. It's getting really good. Die Salima. *Whacks her hard.* Die Boris.* Whacks him hard and then shoots them both.* That asshole Kai needs straightening out. Boris better not take advantage of Ray, the bastard. Next update soon please. Intense. And who's gonna play the female role?
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  • From ANON - darkstar92 on October 17, 2005
    Just one more chapter! Is this the best time to tell you i get depressed near the end of stories that are more than awesome, for exapmle this one. And only one more left, this is such a good story i wouldn't mind if it never ended. Anyway, i was so shocked when i found out it was Kai, i thought it was Boris. Just what Rei needs, more crap put into his life, but sadly, that's what makes the story interesting.
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  • From ANON - j.s on October 17, 2005
    nooooo
    they were just starting 2 work it out
    it was all doing sooo well
    damn salima
    grrrrrrr
    update soon!!!!
    kai and rei must get back 2gether!!!
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  • From ANON - Arsinen on October 17, 2005
    What would be the best way to kill this someone. Torture and the kill or just kill them....*turns to see poepl looking at her*
    OH I didn't know I was being watched please don't listen to my musings.

    Anyways update soon OMFG I want to....I don't know but UPDATE otherwise you are going to kill me or I might kill you. Well see ya.
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