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Reviews for Innocent Dance

By : Might
  • From ANON - Deathelf on July 22, 2005
    I've read the whole story and I have to hand to to you, this story is the best!! Ur really good with putting emotion into everything, I can't wait to hear what happens next... the suspense! LOL
    Well done on a very awesome written story! YAY! I'm probably one of the only fans who doesn't want to hit u wif stuff, so be happee!!! Ok sorry to ramble, just keep up with this and um... well done! WEEE!!!
    *glomps Kai*
    Ok bye and keep it up! :) ^.^ YAY!
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  • From ANON - LaDiNi on July 21, 2005
    okkkkkkkkkk........... dad is dying? weirdo...
    this is getting too similar to a soap opera no? well, update, will Rei get there in time!?
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  • From ANON - GS* on July 20, 2005
    AGH!!!!!!!!!!!!! sry 4 not commenting 4 a while my comp was acting stupid. but argh!!!!!!!!! i thoght that they would finaily b 2gether!!!!!!!! y!??!?!? wahhh!!. so is Rei gonna follow him or did Kai really did stay behind?? and it was something bad that happened to his father instead??. ahhh! all the unanswered questions!!! when will the Tourment stop?!?! update soon! oh yea i was kinda happy when tala said Rei was always feeling like the victim. lol. its aout time someone said that. haha thats all. XD
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  • From ANON - kiotana on July 14, 2005
    *angry* you always have to end it like that!!! he's gonna miss the plane god damn it!!!!!okay....i hope your wrist heals...very quickly*glare*
    plz update soon^O^
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  • From ANON - kiotana on July 14, 2005
    awe!!! ray!!!! you idiot get your ass out there and admitt it to him!!!
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  • From ANON - Nebride on July 13, 2005
    wow, I've been reading this story non stop for like three days now, and you are really really good! Both Rei and Kai's behaviour annoys me from time to time, but that just means you have done a very good job portraying them, and get out their feelings and thoughts, making them more alive ^_^
    As you have pointed out yourself, there are some spelling mistakes, but they're not really so importain, since the story is so brilliant :)
    I'm a sucker for angsty stories, and damn, you've done such a great job, with not only the story in general, but also details and descriptions of both the characters and surroundings. You have this natural flow to the story, and it is so fun to read this because you've put it together so beautifully!
    I am definately reading the rest of this, so keep up the wonderful job you've done to now ^_~ I just pray that it all will end good *hands you cookie*
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  • From ANON - keisan on July 12, 2005
    Nooooo! He's leaving! I'm glad you unveiled the truth behind Kai's feelings for Rei, what he said was all love. And now Rei...who became seemingly more unemotional- it seemed like his contant need for Kai wasn't really because he wanted to use him or needed sex, it was a love that he was too young/immature to understand. I love this concept. It's beautiful. I'm actually surprised Rei hasn't really realised it yet...I mean, if he had, he'd have been right over to the airport as fast as he could. I'm curious as to what your ending will be, please update soon. ^^
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  • From ANON - Chibi Drigger on July 12, 2005
    -blinkblink- Aww...I almost cried...Jeez! Well....-gives big bandy for your wrist and arm- T_T Get better soon!!! Well great chapter and poor Rei!! T__T...-huggles Rei-kun- Well can't ait for th next update and the chapter was great. Untill next chapter. Ciao -Cd
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  • From ANON - LadyMichikoReturns on July 12, 2005
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
    you cant keep ending them this way!!!
    does kai's flight get delayed??? Does Rei get to him in time???
    Does Tala eat chicken in a depressed state of saddness>
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  • From ANON - Incessant Darkness on July 12, 2005
    Since you were good and updated despite your wrist I think I'll be good and review. I like it so far. I wanted more angst and I liked the little bit of fluff at the beginning so this chapter was perfect in my eyes. Keep up the good work and keep the chapters coming. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 11, 2005
    ohhh poor rei and kai..will they both just suck it up and be together!
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  • From ANON - maria on July 11, 2005
    hey ya updated. great chapter. update next chapter soon.
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  • From ANON - Kat on July 11, 2005
    Damn!!! that was a good chapter!!!.
    Please update soon dont leave us hanging, its great so far but how come rei's being portrayed as the villan?
    PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!! let them get back together!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.

    Kat
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  • From ANON - Draza on July 11, 2005
    You wrote such a good chappie...i think i'm gonna cry...*wimpers*
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  • From ANON - Arsinen on July 11, 2005
    >.< You better not kill my Rei-chan. You know what would be interesting if this fic ends with a not so happy ending. I mean no killing off people bt that Kai and Rei stay apart. And then there is a sequel that for some reason they meet each othre again it's more angst for the readers although I would expect the second to end happy. But anyways that's just a screwy idea i had while reading this last chapter. WEll hope you don't kill your arm okay but I would appreciate an update soon. ^_^ See ya!
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