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Reviews for Innocent Dance

By : Might
  • From ANON - Chibi Drigger on June 07, 2005
    Aw..It's what...Wyatt...He...Gawd....:gonk: T_T....So sad....I bet it's going to be either Kai or Boris......In the car...Or something. Or Kai is gonna see him tryin to do something and save him...>>...
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  • From ANON - Incessant Darkness on June 04, 2005
    You are offically deadse. How could you even make us believe for a second that Rei was going to die. Argh I was so freaked, I would have been totally freaked if this fic totally ended up as a death fic, they're so depressive. Anyways that was a good chapter but it was so full I mean I get why Rei would want to kill himself. He's out of the production replaced by a guy who wanted to rape him, he has to marry a girl when he's claerly gay, his parents are acting weird. and to top it all of Kai is going to be leaving anytime now. Wow this is really getting sad, but keep up the good work. update soon.
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  • From Shitza on June 04, 2005
    I'm not angry, guess I have no big reason getting angry, after all in this fic, landing up with Salima can seem worse then death. Salima (here) sounds so bossy I'd rather die if I were Ray. I only hope he and Kai will get together and that you won't kill him. I don't think you will, if you do then prepare for something worse then a flame. i can be really evil.

    Oh, byt the way... look... finally have an account of my own. Yeah, know it took time to get one, I am sooo lazy.

    Shitza
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  • From ANON - HeArT on June 03, 2005
    UPDATE DAMNIT UPDATE PLZZZZZ!!!!!!! AHHH!
    SO....DAMN.....DESPERATE...... X.X...
    PLZ MAKE THIS PAIN GO AWAY AND UPDATE!!! IVE BEEN WAITING SOOO LONG...
    UR BUSY WORK BETTER BE OVER SOON! U NEED A BREAK AND U NEED TO UPDATE THIS FIC!!
    I HATE CLIFF HANGERS!! WHAA!!
    IM SOOOOOOO ANXIOUS TO KNOWWWW!! PLZ UPDATE..!!
    (PUPPY DOG EYES, POUTING.) O.o?
    THAT HAVE BETTER WORKED AT LEAST A BIT. :P :( :) YAY!
    FROM AN ARTIST AND AUTHOR: HeArT
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  • From ANON - Tsuki Seishin on June 02, 2005
    0_0 Oooo I can't wait for the next chappie *glomps* so dramatic and angsty!! Oh, I have started to write again ^^; you kinda inspired me too *grins* please put the next chappie up soon!!! ~Tsuki
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  • From ANON - D.S. on June 02, 2005
    You had beter not kill Rei! I don't think you will but don't even consider it. Man you really know how to make people want to kill you! I hope that you have some excllent doctors close to your house! If you update soon though you might survive. I hope you do because I really want to know what happens next! Great though, only problem was that you had a few grammar and spelling mistakes. That was the only thing I found to critisize, everything else is great! Well once again, I hope you update soon and survive all the angry readers! See ya!
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  • From ANON - crimson on June 02, 2005
    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You're going to give me a heart attack!!!! I can't breath, I'm hyperventilating!!!!! I can feel an asthma attack coming on!!!!!! Don't you dare kill Rei off!!!! Please, I'm begging! DON'T!!!!!! Why do you do this to him!!! What has he ever done to you!!?!?!??!?!?! WHY DO YOU HATE HIM SO MUCH!??!?!?!?!?!? Now that I am done freaking out all I want to say is: DUDE, I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!! I'm so glad you finally updated!!!!!! History is to repeat itself....Wyatt and Rei...tsk, tsk, tsk. Ne, please do me this little favor: let Rei get run over but please don't kill him off. I want to see all their reactions when they find out that Rei got run over. Especially Kai, Tala, Raul and Boris. Oh, and please don't let him end up with Salima.
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  • From ANON - fireandice on June 02, 2005
    *Squeals Happily and bounces around like an idiot* I can't believe you finally updated. I thought you had lost your spark and just left us hanging in the wind their for a moment... but... NO... your back and with an amazing chapter. I can't believe how strange and oddly self-centred Rei is acting. Kai loves him so much and he can't see it. The ending... oh the ending. Your an evil human being you know that... you really are... If you kill Rei I will... I will... * picks up bloody knife from the floor and runs after author* I'll kill you.
    Update ASAP... and I mean it... or your dead.
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  • From ANON - Fantasy on June 02, 2005
    *puts hands over chest* You about gave me a heartattack! GAWD, I thought you really did say the end, otherwise I would have been one angry reader. But don't worry, I won't kill you ^^ Can't speak for anyone else though, CRUEL JOKE! CRRRUUUEEELLLLL!!!!!!! *.*
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  • From ANON - dark-anime-slave on June 01, 2005
    awh man, reiz zo fcked! i dont no y riez tryin to hd the gay thing, everyone zeemz to b alright with it, welll not mizz b!tchy...but who carez about her???.....and wat about kai???poor kai.... lozin both the poeple he lvz to a car crazh....
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  • From ANON - kiotana on June 01, 2005
    you better dodge!!!!
    kai better save his sorry as!!!!!!!
    or he's gonna wake in a hospital disapointed that he didn't die and yet so close to death since he might be paralized....
    lock yourself in a room ray and think things through for yourself!! feel the need to be held by your true lover!!!
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  • From ANON - Kat-chan on June 01, 2005
    I usually don't review on adultfanfiction.net, but...I've been reading your fics for a while now, and this is definately worth the review. I mean, all the chapters are worth the review. I've just been too lazy. XD It would be sad...if you had ended it there. Please try to update soon. ^^"
    Kat
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  • From ANON - NekoJenn on June 01, 2005
    WooHoo! I hope Rei gets hit! And Kai too! That'd be great...
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  • From ANON - Hikaru_chan_4ever on June 01, 2005
    OMG! I REALLY THOUGHT THAT WAS THE END! GRR! Please continue real sooN! ~Chan
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  • From ANON - GS* on June 01, 2005
    dot dot dot. *blink blink* thats such a lovely way to end a chapter. *twitch twitch* well anyway. i think Kai might apear out of no where and u know save him/ push him out of the way. orr the truck would stop just a few inches away and he faints or something.XP
    but i think Rei was getting a bit annoying. he complains too much. but i just think that Rei wants his parents to just b parents like yell at him or something thing. XP i dun know. but then i felt sry 4 him. ahh mixed emotions. :P.
    oh and i hope u feel better!!... wow ear& throat infection. and u have a art project. i shall pray 4 u. lol. haha but u'll get it done in time. have FAITH!!! WILL POWER!!!!!!! ....yea... >_
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