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  • From ANON - Faith on June 01, 2005
    Ah! Evil! >< you made me think that was the end! evil! >< Well not realyl good of you to keep going *pats* Though try not to wait so long this time ^^ I like chapters of this story 1st one this long I have stuck with.
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  • From ANON - J.S. on June 01, 2005
    oh my god
    dat was sooo horrible...i thought u were going 2 leave it at dat
    dank god i strolled down
    update soon
    and if rei dies, there will b a angry mob at ur doorstep witin da hour



    btw...nice chappie, poor rei though
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  • From ANON - Maisa_angel on June 01, 2005
    I could kill u for leaving chapter 39 like that. But, I will forgive you if you don't let Rei get hit please. Anyways, I love your story and the way you have brought it about be including other characters in the series as well as some OCs. So keep up the good work, so I won't start throwing things at you along with the other angry readers.
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  • From ANON - Ray 4 Ever on June 01, 2005
    Chapter 39 was hilarious and sad, a most weird mixture. Update. I want to see what happens. Ray and Tala better make up. *pouts* *looks thoughtful* One other thing. You made a reference about Garland not knowing about Kai and Ray. But he was there when Ray asked Kai to make love to him after Boris made him cum. Garland already knew. I thought I would let you know. tootles.
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  • From ANON - Ray 4 Ever on June 01, 2005
    Chapter 39 was hilarious and sad, a most weird mixture. Update. I want to see what happens. Ray and Tala better make up. *pouts* *looks thoughtful* One other thing. You made a reference about Garland not knowing about Kai and Ray. But he was there when Ray asked Kai to make love to him after Boris made him cum. Garland already knew. I thought I would let you know. tootles.
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  • From ANON - Ray 4 Ever on June 01, 2005
    Chapter 39 was hilarious and sad, a most weird mixture. Update. I want to see what happens. Ray and Tala better make up. *pouts* *looks thoughtful* One other thing. You made a reference about Garland not knowing about Kai and Ray. But he was there when Ray asked Kai to make love to him after Boris made him cum. Garland already knew. I thought I would let you know. tootles.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 01, 2005
    Gah! how could you do that to Rei-Rei?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!!!! This better turn out OK in the end *shakes fist at auther* and you had better update sooner *another shake of fist*
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  • From ANON - brenan on June 01, 2005
    what the hell was that nakaka asar ka!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    sana di mo nlng ginawa yung kwento sinayang mo lng
    ang ganda pa nmn tapos ganun lng ang katapusan?!
    amp ka!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    if you want to know what i wrote learn to speak in filipino!
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  • From linkin89park89 on June 01, 2005
    hello again. this chappy was so sad and i feel bad for both of them i mean rei's just confused. maybe they want him to go to colledge with kai? i duno well ill be gone the next 3 days so it gives u a chance to get me offa ur back. i love the story and i hopefully can talk to u later cyas
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  • From ANON - Blackrose on June 01, 2005
    NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Poor Ray. Hasn't he suffered enough. Bet Kai comes. Hopefully Tyson. Not Boris or Salima though. Hate those two. Looking forward to reading more. MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Arsinen on June 01, 2005
    GAHHHHHH! NO HOW DARE YOU LEAVE IT IN SUCH A PLACE! AHH! I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU DID THAT! *Takes a breath and calms down* okay I'm calm now. Please update soon like tomorrow soon i can't stand the suspense of what will happen to Rei please update WAAHHH! okay anyways grea chappie and see ya around.
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  • From ANON - Faith on May 29, 2005
    *sniffles* I thought there be another chapter watting when I arvied home.... Oh well ^^ you will put it up soon enough
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  • From ANON - dark-anime-slave on May 25, 2005
    zhez a lil bitch!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Shitza on May 24, 2005
    *drops Salima in a tree*

    There, that should do it.

    Salima: Ray! help me!
    Me: Bitch!
    Ray: huh?
    Salima: RAAAAAAAAAAAY! HEEEEELP!!!!!!!!!!
    Me: Shut up! Kai, take Ray away from here!
    Kai and Ray: *walk away*
    Me: Now, I'll handle you!

    Back to reality

    Uhm, sorry, my evil thoughts. Okay, Salima usually don't get on my nerves, even if she is a bit too much goodie goodie girl. Come on, let the GUYS be together and let that GIRL out from this story. Love it though, can't get enough of it!

    Lol Shitza
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  • From ANON - GS* on May 23, 2005
    AGHH!!!!!!!! OMG!!!! Salima!!! she better not do anything or i'll hit her with a car! bwahahahahah! >D
    it was shoo sweet though. i can just c the scene in my head. Kai hugging Rei. it;d b a better feel if it started to thunder once Salima was at the door way watching. lol. XP
    ahh cant wait till next chappi! XD
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