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Reviews for Innocent Dance

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  • From ANON - Faith on May 16, 2005
    Evil T_T you left us gessing T_T >< why couldn't you keep going? I wanna know what happens I wanna know what happens with kai and if he gose to Eorupe or if Rei and Kai do stay toghther T_T
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  • From ANON - Chelsea on May 14, 2005
    I just read the whole fanfic, And I'm like..in love with it! Keep up the awsome work, and I hope to read more soon.

    I love how you did the pairing of Brooklyn and Jin.. and the story line you have got.

    Yeah, :) please update soon ^__^
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  • From ANON - Faith on May 14, 2005
    YAY! Really good fic you know ^^ Can't wait till you finish it! and please! dont be one of those evil people that stop doing it affter a while T_T They hrut me so I really like to know how things end.
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  • From ANON - ray 4 Ever on May 11, 2005
    Hiya, a fellew writer here. Usually i don't like Kai/Ray but you're making me. Keep up the good work. One other thing. I WANT MORE JIN/BROOKLYN SCENES! *Puppy dog eyes* Pretty Please.
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  • From ANON - Kelly Rua on May 11, 2005
    Great, so Iam not the only one without internet!!!!!!!!!!!
    Man, I never knew that a HD was so fragile............
    Anyway I am sneaking in the college computers, also, just to read your story.................
    I know a lot of people here in Brazil that love your story...........they are just to boring to review
    Well, that´s it............I don't know what else to say..........
    Kisses
    I love your story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Tomoe_shinozaki
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  • From ANON - Phoenix\'s Wings on May 10, 2005
    OMG!!!!
    please don't quit writing! the story is starting to get very interesting....and i very want to know the ending of it.
    i hope, rei and kai will end up together...Did you know your fiction is one of the stories that i love to read. So please containu
    the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Your fan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    P.S. Yaoi Rules!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - maria on May 09, 2005
    ALRITE YA UPDATED! great chapter. update next chapter soon.
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  • From ANON - Danya on May 09, 2005
    Awesome.....aww poor Kai....I feel so bad for him :(
    I really like the story update when you can:D
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  • From ANON - HikariDon on May 08, 2005
    Oh, my, god! You poor, poor, thing! Having the net taken away! *hugs you so tight* I haven't been on here for ages, and because of coursework and exams I haven't been on msn as early... ;.;

    But, that chapter rocked! Seriously! Rei is so ... so... noble, trying to do what's right for his family. But now that his Papa knows... this is going to get very interesting. I still stand by wanting his Mama to act like a crazed-fangirl (Cheri-sama XD!!), that would rock some serious socks! But, Kai!! Poor lamb, being all upset. However, he might just understand *why* Rei did it... because... yeah. Anyway... Rei's Papa should have "the talk" with Kai, and then make them marry... OH! Rei could wear a dress...

    I'm rambling now, ne? ... ^^; Gomen-nasai! Mou, but I hope you can find a way to get online again. Our college computers don't let us onto AFF.net... I tried... it's blocked ^^;; Eheh, anyway, I should be in bed (oops) I have classes in the morning. Hope that you get your internet back soon, sweetie.

    Lots of Lovvu
    HikariDon

    xxx
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  • From ANON - Draza on May 08, 2005
    yay!!! at least Rei's father knows!! it's one step..wonder how his mom will react...? ok i have a challenge for you....write an extra long story!!! you aren't obliged to do it but you kept us in suspense (yes i know it wasn't your fault...damn internet) just make it like...say...another 6-8 paragraphs long...kk? you can if you want to, no gun at your head.....
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  • From ANON - D.S. on May 08, 2005
    How could you end it like that!!!!!!!!!!! Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr... be glad I'm in a good today, otherwise you would be dodging a lot of things! Anyways, awsome work on this chapter. You are getting better then when you first started out with this story(although you were doing a great job then too) I hope that you can sneak in another chapter soon! It sucks that you're internet is down. Hop ethings get sorted out fast. Well good luck. See ya!
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  • From ANON - GS* on May 08, 2005
    AHH! u sho evil!!!!!! nou!!!!!!!! wahhh.*sniff sniff*
    lol. well i like the chappi. lol. i waish i was in the story so i could meet Dong Bang shin ki. their sho kool. lol. XP
    but if u had Shinhwa i;d prob go crazy. lol. i just wish that there would b no more suspences. 'n'. lol. oh and good luck on all ur exams!
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  • From ANON - LaDiNi on May 08, 2005
    Oh, gods, this is getting so darn weird! Common, Salima can't really like him,she hasn't met the guy for ages.. she won't be that hurt so cut the crap and make Rei shove her off! Rei and Kai forever!!!!! *grabs Rei and Kai plushies and makes them hug each other*
    Has for his parents, gods, they are so weird! No wonder Rei never called them if they are so 'glued' to him ~.~... I just everything ends up fine!
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  • From ANON - Nikki-Lynn on May 07, 2005
    whoa.I was like so hyper and now i'm bummed.*scratches head*Anyways love ur fic an i really hope you will make another chapter soon and MAKE KAI AND REI TOGETHER!!!!!!!!!OR I"LL THROW A TORCH AT YOU!!





    sorry..........
    luff yeh
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 07, 2005
    very good this is nicki very nice love it i wouldnt mind seeing some more jin and brook and tala and raul sex though so think about that

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