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Reviews for Innocent Dance

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  • From ANON - luciang on January 08, 2007
    I sat on my computer for 13 hours in row to read your story. I have to say I loved it this far you write english that is easy to undertand and made bouth of Kai and Ray have not so simple love life I mean allmoust everyone makes storys whenthey make love first time it ends and everyone is happy.

    Have to say I L.O.V.E IT
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  • From ANON - lili on January 08, 2007
    wow...so sweetttt


    next story please!
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  • From ANON - lili on January 08, 2007
    wow...so sweetttt


    next story please!
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  • From ANON - lili on January 08, 2007
    wow...so sweetttt


    next story please!
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  • From ANON - chainedblunt on January 08, 2007
    wiiiii....

    finally the story goes on!!!way to go!!!*squeal happily*

    I am asking you to marry me.”


    It felt like a brick smacking him hard on the face, he looked at the dual hair still in complete shock his mouth gaping open like a fish, he tried hard to form words but was not able to.


    “Will you be with me forever?”


    “Kai…” the name escaped his lips as a whisper.


    He stared at the dual hair for a while and suddenly he felt his eyes roll back and he lost consciousness, he fell backwards with a thump. Rei fainted.

    oooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh when i read that,i can help but touched and laughed at the same time.
    rei is so adorable.hope boris wont do anything to him,or i'm gonna burn the author*giggles*

    it's getting better of course!iluv it.finally kai reveal his love to rei in a romantic way...haah....how sweet is that??oh i cant help but feel that your writing style is a bit change,more deeply and a lot f emotion it there^_^call me a sappy.hahaha.

    anyway,good work.can wait for the next story...will ei accept it???^^


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  • From ANON - Kiotana on January 07, 2007
    Ch.55
    You have no idea how much I missed this fic...and now this!*indicated the proposal scene*
    That is SO sudden. I knew it was getting corny for a minute there! You know...I want the cookie, but I liked this chapter more^^
    Well since you make everything so dramatic I can just assume Ray is going to take his sweet time thinking about it and wondering what to reply, or he says yes then thinks it's too sudden, or says no and Kai gets upset...Drama in every direction.
    There are more options...these are just most likely XD
    In any case! Try not to make it so mind bottling for poor Reirei; he's got a lot of stuff on his mind...plus there's still Boris to talk about. *short attention span glitch* I can't wait for the wedding!(if there is one) I wonder if they'll get Ray in a gown XD That wouldn't be right. Poor Ray should be happy on this day!
    Rambblerambblerambble
    Kai: Just keep writing...-_-
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  • From ANON - hoshicat on January 07, 2007
    yes oh my god he needs to say yes!!!!! not to mention a wedding would make a very fine ending!!! i love this story it is my absolute fav!!!!!!! plz update soon!!!!!! ~Hoshicat ^_^
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  • From ANON - KitCat on January 05, 2007
    FINALLY!!!! I've been waiting sooo long for you to come back *stays tuned for the next update*
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  • From ANON - danya on December 07, 2006
    Hey a few weeks???
    I'm really trying to be patient... but its not working:P
    Please upated soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Arsinen on December 04, 2006
    Yes I'm so glad you didn't take a very long Hiatus. PLease please update soon I'll be waiting okay and I'll check every single day to see if you've updated. Well see ya until you update.
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  • From ANON - yaoifan on December 04, 2006
    awsome!!!!!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - yaoifan on December 04, 2006
    awsome!!!!!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Kiotana on November 09, 2006
    We'll be waiting^^
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  • From ANON - Incesant_Darkness on November 06, 2006
    actually to tell you the truth my interest for beyblade died off a little muchto my sorrow but occasionally I check up on the section. Let me tell you I am absolutely estatic to see that you're back. Doesn't matter how long you take, just know that I will never give up on this fic.

    - Incessant_Darkness
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  • From ANON - KojiHiwatari on November 03, 2006
    Yeah! I can't wait for the next Ch to be put up. Every night at boot camp a few months back I would try to think of what may happen next in this. I love it. You should change the names and make it a book.
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