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Reviews for Innocent Dance

By : Might

From ANON - Draza on February 28, 2005
ok...i think your either the short one or the sincere one...might be far fetched but i don't care!!! I'm hoping i get it right!

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From ANON - GS* on February 28, 2005
hmmm..lets c which one of the 4 girls is u?...4 somereason i think ur the short one. XD hahah i dont know y. hmm ....i 4 got the other choices so imma just say the tlal one too. lol XD. and yea and great chappi!
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From ANON - evilchild (not signed in) on February 28, 2005
It's been awhile since I last reviwed one of you fics but I just had to review! I love this fic so much!!! When I come to this website (which is everyday), Beyblade is the first section I look in to see if you updated! This is like one of the best Beyblade fics I've read yet!!!! I just had to put it in my recommended reading section! This is so good! Kai's a bastard, Re's confused, Tyson's a freak... what more could I ask for?! I know! The next chapter! Can't wait until you update again!!

To that contest:
Is it B or C?
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From ANON - kiotana on February 28, 2005
okay we are in a hell hole.i skipped the girl part cause it has nothing to do with ray or anyone else.poor ray having to say all that.i can just imagine him slouching over in pain and depression.FINALLY kai shows a little emotion for ray.what will be announced and will tala push the limits of kai's jealousy....lol....continue.
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From ANON - Padfootlet on February 28, 2005
The short one? lol...anyway...AWESOME fic ^_^ poor Rei-kun *tear*
psh..Tyson's no match for Kai...he's gonna get his ass kicked (I hope at least ^^) anyway...UPDATE SOON!
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From ANON - Anon on February 27, 2005
i ask u authoress, when will rei get his sexual revenge?!? hopefully soon... i am enjoying ur story alot!!!!
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From ANON - kiotana on February 27, 2005
just a little reread.what did kai whisper to him and....what will happen next?will ray tell someone that kai rapped him?will he call it rape?will he screw up again in the next play?will raul tell him about thinking they weren't meant to be?will they break up?will ray be depressed and quit.what the heck was kai doing with a vibrater.....i don't want to know the answer to that one but i want answers.i love kai but i have to admit he's cruel ....for now.*hugs poor ray*u just cry your eyes out ray.i think you've had enough punishment................*kai glares*...for now*quivers in fear*
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From ANON - Chibi Drigger on February 27, 2005
-le gasp- I loved it!!..Poor Rei-Chan though....-sighs-..T__T.....-shrugs- ^__^ Ah well.....It was really great chapter....Hehe...I almost dun care you cut it right there....-grins-....And I think your contest is a totaly cool idea....It's a shame I dun got no scanner...-dies-..Meh..Whatever...I really liked it so update soon please!! ^__^
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From ANON - nicki on February 27, 2005
hey great chapture i really like it. keep it up and give me more kai and rei i love it all yahoooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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From ANON - GS* on February 27, 2005
woah....Rei lost his virginity to a vibrator...thats sux! gosh...kai's a kinky person. lol hahah. XD wonder wuts gonna happen next...and y would anyone b carrying around a spider ...and in english class..weird. haha lol. XP
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From ANON - kiotana on February 27, 2005
man that was nasty....MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE....BREATHING.....MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE .....WHAT IS RAY GONNA DO?

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From ANON - GabZ on February 27, 2005
Damn in a case like that one, i would cry
And leave

Is just too cruel, Kai has no respect for others
And he knows Ray lust for him
He is just plain crazy

Usually I would hate Ray, actually I do
But in your story I just feel sorry for him

Poor poor little kitty

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From ANON - GS* on February 27, 2005
....................i feels soo stupid....4 somereason my comp screwed the chapters up so yea.....>.< aghh! *embrassed!!!!!!* hahahah. #^_^# 4give my stupidiness...hahah.yea....i didnt read the chapi yet i just felp to stupid i had to write something...>o< SRY! me go read now. heh heh >_
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From ANON - Draza on February 27, 2005
Damn Kai is confusing...congradulations, you've succeeded in giving me a headach trying to figure out what the fuck kai's motives are.....your contest is a good idea. I'd try it...but my drawings suck and i have no way to upload them so...yeah...
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From ANON - nicki on February 26, 2005
hey great chapt. keep going and keep emailin me when you update thanx
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