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Reviews for Innocent Dance

By : Might
  • From ANON - gina on November 03, 2006
    Yay! can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Shadowy Fluffball on October 29, 2006
    I really hope you update this. But if you don't want too, than don't, your choice.
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  • From ANON - gina on September 15, 2006
    no!!! don't take a break... i wanted to read the end.. *runs of crying* i love this fiction so much..
    (i know, i'm crazy) great job!!
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  • From IncessantDarkness29 on August 25, 2006
    -blinks- You did not just do that. Argh that sucks. Now what shall I have to look soreward to in the Beyblade section. This isone of the only fics I read for Beyblade. Darn.

    Well anyways I'd beg for you to continue but I decided to go with a more passive 'no preasure' route so I hope that someday you will get back to it. And when you do I'd appreciate it if you could email me and let me know you're back to writing the fic. Until then goodbye and may you be struck by inspiration.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 23, 2006
    plz plz plz write again soon u cant leave it like this i managed to get thru it in 2 sittings plz write more plz!
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  • From ANON - Kanilla on August 21, 2006
    Good luck with everything! I hope you post another chapter sometime, it's one of the lovliest beyblade fanfics on this site!
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  • From ANON - Virpi on August 20, 2006
    AFF cut off my last review, sorry about that >.< I'll email the proper review to you =)
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  • From ANON - Kiotana on August 19, 2006
    Ch.5 (Author's note)
    I'll always be checking anyways^^
    Love this story too much to give up on it :heart:
    Have a nice break!
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  • From ANON - Virpi on August 19, 2006
    *sniffles* I want more but I know I can't have more coz you aren't writing more at the moment ;_______; *clings* I love the story and I think you're doing awesome work with it! I've started writing my own fan fics as well (about BB of course, I'm a Beyblade fan foreva
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  • From ANON - Chibi Drigger on August 10, 2006
    I think you might know me better as White Tiger but it's been so bloody long I can't remember. But yeah..I looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooove the story! You better not bloody call a quits! If this story is anything it's the complete oposite of lame. It's got ME on the end of my seat and basically crying for many parts. And it's hard to make my cry...ok? -nods- But yeah. I absolutly love it..I was thinking about printing it out just to have it if I ever want to read it again. Hahahahaha. Make my friends read it. XD But yeah...fantastic. So keep it up and don't do nothing too mean to poor ol' Kai and Rei.. -sniff- They've had it harsh for the past little while. ;-;....XD But yeah!

    Ciao~!

    -Chibi.
    (Or White Tiger...wichever. X3)
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  • From ANON - Rain on August 09, 2006
    OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE this story!!!!!!!! I can't wait until it's finished!!! Keep up the good work!!! =^-^=
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  • From ANON - cutenekojin on August 05, 2006
    Ohhh!! this chapter was so great! ^^ really loved it, I can't wait to read the next, you really have to hurry up with it! Chop chop! XD lol, sorry, excitement over took me ^.^

    Oh! I and I dont want to be mean or anything but, YOU WILL HAVE TO FIGHT WITH ME TO GET JAEJOONG!! XD hahah! because of you and introducing DBSK in this story, I totally fell in love with the Korean Group! ^^ lol, now, I dont even speak one word Korean and I know all the songs by heart! XD Lol and I madly fell in love with Jaejoong...Now that's where really I wanted to tell you, it is that...you didn't really spell the names right ^^; I think you went either according to ear or you picked it up to someone else. So, if ever you want to write a letter to Jaejoong, here's how to write his name properly XD (Its just to help, its not to be mean, promise!! ^^; )
    Jejung. Jae-Joong (he's the lead signer, not the leader. He only is in the middle of the pictures because he's the shortest XD)
    Yucheon. Yoochion
    Yunhon. Yunho (he's the leader by that way ^^)
    Junsu and Changmin , you got those right! ^^ want me to tell you their nicknames as well&? xD lol, okay! XD
    Jae-Joong - hero
    Yunho - U-know
    Yoochion - Micky
    Junsu - Xiah
    Changmin - Max

    there ya go! And I REALLY really LOVED your chapter, like your story is the best! Thanks for all the chapters you uploaded and all!! Hope to read some more later...Sorry for the huge review and sorry if I offended you in someway, I really didn't mean too!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 17, 2006
    DON'T GIVE UP YET.A LOT PEOPLE READ THIS STUFF BUT DOESN'T REVIEW.DON'T GIVE UP!111
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  • From ANON - darkkit2000 on July 10, 2006
    WHY CAN'T YOU LET THEM BE HAPPY FOR MORE THAN HALF A CHAPTER!!!!!!! WHY???!!!??!!! Ok I'm done but now I pray Kai comes and saves Rei's and ass and then kills Boris. Great chapter, but I want to beat you for the cliff hanger which I guess means your doing a good job.

    Love Lots,
    Darkkit
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  • From ANON - ash on July 07, 2006
    this story is pretty great and i wonder if kai will hang around to save rei from that asshole although i would be totally cool if kai returned to italy and rei got rapedXD.ii just want to say that the performance scene in this chapter sucked. considering its been so important for more than half the story alooting it what 10 undescriptive lines is more than a bit of an anticlimax. im not saying to have described the moves that wouldnt have worked at all but u should have described it from ray's angle with his feelings and thoughts and all the excitement for him etc. it was probably the most important moment of his life and so much happened becauseof the performance . somehow somewhere could you do a flashback scene which deals with how he actually felt throughout the performance please ending it so abruptly is disappointing. please update soon
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