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Reviews for And Then There Were Three

By : LisaB
  • From ANON - aly on January 16, 2005
    wow! this fic is in a class of its own! i dont read yaoi that contains vegeta in them... but wow... this fic was awesome... overwhelming seems an appropriate description...keep up the incredible work!!!
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  • From ANON - Jodiodi on January 08, 2005
    Great style. Even though I know nothing about Dragon Ball Z, I was drawn into the story and enjoyed it tremendously. I look forward to reading more of your work.
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  • From ANON - harmony_22 on January 05, 2005
    I actually really liked this story. I wasn't sure if I was going to. It is a very good piece of writing. I hope u continue to write in the future.
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  • From cueball2 on January 03, 2005

    Chapter 3


    I really hope you write more.  Vegeta will need Kakarott eventually.  You did a great job.  Keep up the good work!


    ~Webtester01~


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  • From ANON - Caralin Fury on January 01, 2005
    I tried to review this story on mediaminer, but for some reason (I think it has something to do with my browser) it will not allow me access, so I came here to leave a note. I read your tale a few days ago and it has stayed in my head. It was so well written, so completely erotic...it just wouldn't go.

    Now, I normally see the words yaoi describing a story and run from it as fast as I can (especially when Vegeta is concerned)- with my hands over my ears screaming, "He's not gay...he's not gay!"

    But I was intrigued by the inclusion of Bulma in this tale...that and the fact that it was authored by you, LisaB. I knew as a writer you would handle the subject matter with maturity and taste.

    I wasn't disappointed...this was fantastic! The characterizations were complete and real, the feelings of jealousy and inferiority were more raw and emotional than any story I have read before.

    Great job on a difficult subject. I was happy with the ending...with Vegeta staying with Bulma until I read Orchideater's revirew and then started to think about poor Goku being left alone...

    That is until I remembered Goku's decision to go off and train with Uub. Now tell me this doesn't fit in with your storyline...imagine Goku and a young stallion like Uub...

    Your story has left me with a new appreciation for a genre I had never considered and I thank you for opening my mind to new possibilities!

    Caralin


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  • From ANON - Pixelgoddess on December 30, 2004
    Look! You made me read a het story! Very nice merging with Gutterball's work. It is nice to see Goku maturing - realizing and refusing to allow himself to be used. Vegeta has a long way to go, although Bulma is a positive influence on his life. Maybe you should consider writing a yaoi piece of Goku and Vegeta after Bulma is gone. I wonder if Vegeta can learn to love Goku with the same intensity he loves Bulma. Right now Vegeta's interest in Goku is more about the physical, and I'm sure there is some need there to control and dominate. The need for control is what drives him to push Goku away - he could imagine he had it before, but the pregnancy was something he had no real control over. That probably scared him. For him to stay with Goku he would have to give up the need for total control.

    *g* I feel like I've just started a term paper or essay...

    Well done.
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