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Reviews for Royal Pain and it\'s Sequel Boundaries

By : ethereal
  • From ANON - Anon on April 22, 2005
    You are a guiness! This was a great ending... tho I would have liked more T/G smut lol but that is just me!
    ~K-GT
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on April 08, 2005
    They finally escaped.

    I wonder what will happen next.
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on March 27, 2005
    Oooh. Things are getting more interesting.
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on March 02, 2005
    Great chapter!

    I hope Trunks finds a way to help both of them.
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  • From YamisAkuchan on February 22, 2005
    OMG you better update like fast! I can't believe you left such an evil cliffy! Plz update? I will give you some... *insert fav food* yeah that... please?
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on February 22, 2005
    Looks like things are getting better.

    Upate again soon.
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  • From YamisAkuchan on February 12, 2005
    Oh I am going to cry, not Goten-chan! awww you had to kill off my fav character, now what is going to happen to my fav couple? WAHHH! but I did like it.
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  • From YamisAkuchan on February 07, 2005
    aww is that all? There should be more... like are they going to stay on the planet? And what about Daikon and Nassu (increadible made up charactors I'd say) So huh huh? inform me I am begging you lol. email is: blossumfire_7@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 06, 2005
    That is an interesting way to secure the next geration.

    I wonder what will happen next.

    More!
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on January 25, 2005
    Chpapter four.

    The plot thickens. Goku has a point, with that last statement.

    As far as what Vegeta said, I think that there are exceptions to the rule.
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on January 15, 2005
    This just keep getting better and better.

    Goten and Trunks may have to share a room if the ship is small, but I will have to see, since I don't know the size of the ship.

    Furthermore, tensions will rise between the group, predict.

    I look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Yamis_akuchan on January 15, 2005
    Hey it is coming along great... Oh how old are Trunksie and Goten-chan supposed to be?
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 06, 2005
    Oooh! A twist!

    More!
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  • From ANON - BrokenDesire on January 06, 2005
    Wow, your fic is VERY interesting! I LOVE it!
    However, there are a bunch of spelling and
    grammar mistakes. I'm one of those annoying
    "Police" type reviewers lol. I'm just suggesting
    that you use a spellchecker or have someone
    re-read and edit it before you post it =D and
    then all will be well! ^_^ If you need someone
    to edit it I can do it! You have to give me a
    specific time you need the fic BACK and edited
    by though so I don't slack off haha! Just email
    me with a yes or no for my offer! My email should
    be in my review! Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - Macha on January 05, 2005
    Good start. Definetly set the seen up for a lot of angst.

    You should, however, find someone to beta for you, but not me. I am terrible at spelling and grammar. There are a couple of mistakes that stood out, but I can only remeber one at the momment. You used Clock when I think you meant to use Cloak. *shrugs*

    I'll be interested to see the second chapter.
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