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By : ethereal
  • From ANON - Horizont on May 02, 2005
    Hi there!

    Wow, this story is quite impressive, being that long and even pretty good! The character of Nayo is interesting, though I'd have prefered if his role was smaller. ^^x
    Well, I'm looking forward to the next part, although I honestly don't know how Goku and Co yould get out of that safely.

    Keep up the great work!
    ~Horizont
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  • From ANON - caseyj0 on April 28, 2005
    Did Vegeta not fight because Nayo didn't want him to? Just wondering. Great fic by the way. Like the F/V and F/Z thing going on. Makes it a bit darker than other fics.
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  • From ANON - db27 on April 28, 2005
    I can't believe you updated so quickly!!!! And this chapter just leaves me drooling in suspense! I know, drooling is gross.... What will happen to Vegeta and everyone else?!! Will Frieza capture them all? What will happen! Thank you for getting a new chapter out so quickly!
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on April 28, 2005
    Oooh! Finally, control is back.
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on April 16, 2005
    Er Reverse that.
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on April 16, 2005
    Yay. Fireza is going to get his cummupance.
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  • From ANON - caseyj0 on April 12, 2005
    Great story. Hope Zarbon and Radditz end up together! How cute would that be? Also, it would be awesome if Vegeta were captured too and had to help Nayo out! I mean, he's been nothing but mean to the kid the whole time and this is the perfect opportunity for Vegeta to watch over Nayo. Specially since he knows what Nayo's going through. Think about it! Love how you update a lot more than other authors on the net! You have Frieza's personality right on!
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  • From ANON - WEbtester01 on April 09, 2005
    Oooh. Good new and bad news.
    Everything is so well described.

    Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on April 05, 2005
    I hope Frieza gets what he desrves.
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  • From ANON - Kitty_chan8_31_90 on April 05, 2005
    So far this story is really good I'm not trying to rush you when I say I can' t wait for the next chapter keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - db27 on March 17, 2005
    Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!! I love this story so much! I can't wait for part two!!! Thanks!
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  • From ANON - butterfly164 on March 03, 2005
    Another F/V would be nice for the next chapter. Good story.
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  • From ANON - db27 on March 03, 2005
    Another cliffhanger!! I still love this story! Update soon! Don't leave me in suspense!
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  • From ANON - Sue on February 25, 2005
    this is a great story!!! I really like it alot. who beta's for you though? I thought it was camaro, did you cut off half her name in your summary? awesome story!!

    SUE
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  • From ANON - dbz27 on February 24, 2005
    WOW!!!! I love this story! One of my favorite on the net!!! And BONUS! You don't take six months to update either! I'm on the edge of my seat here with suspense! Cliffhanger! Please continue with this story! Can't wait to see what happens to Vegeta! Update soon! I will be reading! Never stop writing!
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