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Reviews for Honeymoon

By : Debbie
  • From ANON - kainee on January 23, 2005
    I can take the OOCness as it's all for the sake of some nice comedic fluff. ^_^ I can't wait to see how they figure out their first night together!
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  • From ANON - Moonlight Shadow on January 20, 2005
    omg!!! please continue!!!
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  • From ANON - desertblue on January 19, 2005
    this is probly the best stories that ihave seen about bulma and vegeta's wedding night
    it is so detailed
    keep writing thankyou
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  • From ANON - Macha on January 19, 2005
    2nd chapter. BRILLIANT. I love it.
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  • From ANON - maria on January 19, 2005
    OMG please update this story ASAP do you hear me...lolololol..more more more and sooon
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  • From ANON - FallenAngel411 on January 18, 2005
    This first chap was rocking!!! I hope it's not the last!!!
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  • From ANON - maria on January 12, 2005
    I'm enjoying this story so far...it started off very good..can't wait to read more...so please update soon..
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  • From ANON - Katerina on January 12, 2005
    Really great - want more. Pls update soon
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  • From ANON - bluepuppy on January 11, 2005
    The monkey sex bit was probably one of the funniest things I've heard of in quite a while. Very cute.
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  • From ANON - Macha on January 11, 2005
    lol, I hope you have a plan for the next chapter, but if you don't, I have an idea. Bulma being a business woman and all, just may have a laptop with her (even though it is suppose to be her honeymoon), and having a laptop, may have reserved a room with internet hook up. *winks* The two may be able to find a 'road map' there.

    Anyway, I hope you do have a plan for another chapter.
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  • From ANON - bewize on January 11, 2005
    *giggles like a maniac*

    That was hysterical! I thought I was going to die when she said, "wild monkey sex" and the way he reacted. *lol*

    Very nicely done!
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  • From ANON - KuroKen on January 11, 2005
    *Chuckles* Now that's how its done! Perfect characterization and great pacing on the delivery of humor. Plus Vegeta and Bulma's inner dialog is on the money.

    Looking forward to the next installment.
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  • From ANON - catt on January 11, 2005
    Mmmm not bad at all, I like where this is going, and its kinda sweet to see vegeta for once being the shy type. Lol. Anywho keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next update!!!^_^
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  • From ANON - Moonlight Shadow on January 11, 2005
    *breaks out in laughter* omg, this is great cant wait for the next chapter lol XD
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