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Reviews for Gold and Charcoal

By : KalikaMaxwell
  • From ANON - Elric Maxwell on August 20, 2005
    I've read your fic on FF.net. I liked it even then, but it seemed like it took you a long time to update there. I'm glad I found it here, but then I noticed that a lot of folks have moved from FF to here, for more freedom, and other things, like adware. I hope you update this soon. I really enjoyed it. EM
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  • From ANON - allison costa on August 06, 2005
    wow. this story is f*cking amazing. please update soon! i'm constantly checking back to see if you've updated yet :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 21, 2005
    This is by far the best Fullmetal Alchemist fanfiction I've EVER read. The plot is very well done, i love it!! ^.^ Squee!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 21, 2005
    I LOVE IT! That's all i can say. glowing praise for you! ^.^ You rock.
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  • From ANON - Quirk on June 19, 2005
    Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay! Thank you so much! I like these last two chapters, and the way it gave Al an opening to go find Roy. Ed's going to be pissed when he finds out Al went out without him. (Holds hand out like a greedy three year old) More please!
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  • From ANON - Cookies on June 15, 2005
    OMG i luv this story!!! one of the best i've read in a long time! wow this is so awsome! keep up the great work!!!!
    *~CoOkIeS~*
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  • From ANON - Quirk on May 29, 2005
    Maxwell Sa~n! (tugs on your shirtsleeve) More ple~ase?
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  • From ANON - LP on May 14, 2005
    ahhh it's Lily again. I forgot to mention; I was looking forward to seeing Roy, despite being a 'mongrel,' use flame alchemy, since it mentioned in vague terms why only blondies could do it. I was just wondering if you were going to include that one day, since the original plot line still pertains to the story, as in hughes liking Gracia etc etc.

    My apologies.


    ~Lily
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  • From ANON - LilyPichu on May 14, 2005
    Now, I never intentionally clicked on this story. It was something I found while on Google; I'm not a big fan of NC 17 stories, but yours barely include any of that, so I decided to give it a read.

    Characterization was perfect. You captured Roy's sarcasm quite well, as well as Edward's sensitive nature about his height, and it's just like Alphonse to chide in innocently. Same Winry with her wrench. Never have I been so engrossed in a story as captivating and original. You've certainly brought Full Metal Alchemist into a new light, whereas Roy isn't the commanding officer anymore, instead a 'mongrel.' Only part that disturbed me was the one with Paninya, but of course, that's me. Nonetheless, I have fully appreciated these chapters, and I admit, was disappointed when it ended.

    More so of the reason you should update. Excellent job, indeed.


    ~Lily
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  • From ANON - Mia on May 01, 2005
    Please update!
    *clings to ficcy*
    Pwease!
    -Mia
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  • From ANON - Quirk on April 07, 2005
    This is an excellent AU. It flows, is engaging and captures one's interest from the start. The only thing I see that could be improved is the very few spelling errors scattered here, there and yonder. Please continue.
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  • From ANON - tenchi187 on March 28, 2005
    I really enjoy your story. I am just wondering when you will update the story because I am want to know if Ro gets with Ed or Al. Keep up the good work.
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  • From on March 14, 2005
    -pokeprod- Update >:D Fast. I'm bored here! very nice chapter ;D
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  • From ANON - Kiba on March 10, 2005
    Hi there. I really liked your story. But I got really confused in chapter 12 Houghes was killed, but in the other chapters he was alive. At first I thought that it could be Envy in disguis and he was just wating to kill the others. If you could kind explan that to me I would aprishate it. My e-mail is graywolfm18@yahoo.com. Thank you later.
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  • From ANON - Herme on February 24, 2005
    Hey there! I really enjoyed your story! I was really impressed by the depth and detail that you took this alternate world into. Not only the setting but the thought that went into the characters themselves to show just how much their personalities would have been changed through the different circumstances that they grew up in. I was most impressed by Roy Mustang, though. You really made him a much more perferrable character to my eyes. I didn't really like him before you! Not to mention the Elric Brothers, who are my fave characters naturally. I have a thing for Blonde Brothers and you really helped fill in my days! I can't wait for your next update! Take your time and make it the best you can! Yours Herme
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