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Reviews for Shattered Night

By : Kira
  • From ANON - Ryuuko Nakasawa on February 16, 2005
    Oh, oh! What'd she show him! Oh no! Update soon! ^_^

    Seriously, love this. The first chapter intrigued me and the second two have hooked me. Always thought Buruma had something for the little 'monkey boy.' Heh. ^_^

    Impatiently looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - Macha on February 16, 2005
    O.O I certainly say it DID backfire. What is that coniving b***h up to? Well, I guess I know what she's up to, but man is she playing dirty or what?

    As for the rest of this chapter, awe, I loved it. The dream sequence was sooooo cute? Well, not quite the word I am looking for, but close.

    I really thought something more was going to happen after their spar when they were flirting. Did they realise they were flirting? Probably not.

    I hope the situation gets clarified soon before Goku ends up dead. Eep!
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on February 16, 2005
    Ooh. Someone's been puttting their computer skills to use making some one angry.

    I look forward to the next chapter.

    And the colors? I use inline styles in the reviews..
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  • From ANON - Wow on February 06, 2005
    Please continue--it's one of the best written DBZ stories I've read in awhile. Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - geta_gfan on January 30, 2005
    I love your fic , without mentioning that this is my favorite paring.I like the way you made Vegeta act and I hope things workout between him and Goku.
    Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - The Chichi Slaughter House on January 26, 2005
    Really??? *spies Bulma and beats her with a metal stick until she is squishy gloop* You're going to make this really evil, aren't you? It's so angsty!!! Me love angst!!! *grins* Updates rock! *hint hint*
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  • From ANON - Sarkywoman on January 25, 2005
    I like the idea of Bulma in a giant fighting robot trying to kill Goku and Vegeta all tied up in ribbons waiting for the victor. But then, that could just be me. Anyway, I like your portrayal of Goku and the way he's beginning to get a little competitive.
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on January 24, 2005
    *hug you back* thanks for the update i can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Pixelgoddess on January 24, 2005
    Poor Goku - so conflicted. He wants to break up Bulma and Vegeta so he can have a chance at Vegeta, but he doesn't want Vegeta to be hurt. Vegeta was in character while still being nice. I liked how he helped Goku to his feet. He has an impatient patience - makes you wonder if wanting to spar is his only motive. You write very well, BTW. Well done.
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on January 24, 2005
    Hehe... *dances around giddly* Oh thank gods for an awesome story! It always good to stumble upon something this good. Your descriptions of Goku's emotions and even Bulma's was flawless. I'm not sure if I'd go as far as to bitch slap Bulma just yet. I mean she's constantly surrounded by two Saiyan gods. I think it would be a little hard to keep ones hands off either of them. You can't blame the girl for hoping.

    I think it cute how Vegeta's taking care of Goku...even if it is just for a good fight.

    I know you don't I. I've seen your name somewhere before right? Or I could just be crazy. I am known for that. I hope you continue on this path, I can't wait to see what going to happen with these three.
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on January 24, 2005

    Chapter 2


        I'm glad Goku is eating again.  I wonder how the
    interrogation with Bulma will go. *smirk*


        I look forward the the next chapter of your fic.


        ~Webtester01~


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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on January 24, 2005

    Chapter 2


        I'm glad Goku is eating again.  I wonder how the
    interrogation with Bulma will go. *smirk*


        I look forward the the next chapter of your fic.


        ~Webtester01~


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  • From ANON - fyrbyrd on January 24, 2005
    Nice going, really can't wait to see more. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Macha on January 24, 2005
    Ah, a spar? Goku, are you crazy? hehe, yeah, he is, about Vegeta. *shakes head and laughs*

    I am glad he decided NOT to be the one to tell Vegeta what was going on. That was the best desision, even if it doesn't get them closer to where both I and Goku want the two of them to be. *smirks*
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  • From ANON - Macha on January 24, 2005
    How in the heck did I miss the first chapter? This is great. I was like, Ah, NO BULMA he doesn't mean you (hehe, only because I saw the summary though)

    Off to chapter 2
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