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Reviews for Fair Punishment

By : DarkPoe
  • From AlphaLightBearer on August 18, 2017

    godsDAMMIT. i am not into spanking, a friend recommended this fic, i almost overlooked it... but i forced myself to keep reading.

    no regerts.

    AMAZINGLY WRITTEN. you narrated it in a way that is... idk how to describe it O_O believable? understandable? [saiyan] culturally acceptable? all i know is that i loved this story. it might even become a headcanon of mine, since i'm in the middle of exploring saiyan culture and gathering all the information that strikes me as plausible, canon and fanon-wise.

    so, thank you for sharing. i will be sure to credit you if i ever mention the traditions of 'kabuya' ;)


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  • From ANON - Anon on October 25, 2005
    this is a really really good story... i think that you should continie with it or something... ihope you do its very intersting and I like it
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  • From ANON - wendyghost on September 17, 2005
    sadistic! interesting but man i hated being spank as a child!
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  • From ANON - sapphirexkat2 on February 03, 2005
    Aww! That was really good! Great job!
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  • From ANON - Camaro on February 03, 2005
    Well.. I'VE flamed before, though I don't feel any inclination towards that at the moment. To be honest, this was well written, though I'm going to be truthful and say it made me feel... awkward? Uncomfortable? I don't know why but that whole "Move your cock and balls" thing made me click the X box for a second. I think you did VERY well on the delivery and your vocabulary (and imagination) are a force to be reckoned with.

    Maybe something a little less... what's the word I'm looking for? ... a little less... awkward would be nice next time.

    Camaro
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  • From ANON - The Chichi Slaughter House on February 02, 2005
    Wow. Cool. Not much I can actually think to say. No critiscism...no flame (which I've NEVER done)... I enjoyed this a lot...the explanations and stuff was good...plot was good...writing was VERY good... and...ummm...write more stories soon, okay?
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on February 01, 2005
    wow that was great nobody every wrote something like this though i wonder why im sure alot of people got a spanking when they were young.
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  • From ANON - chibi_vegeta on February 01, 2005


    excellent attempt to explain the precepts of D/s...decent portrayal of spanking and the concept of atonement...

    written pretty well...couple typos...nothing big...

    I'd like to see more from you...


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