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Reviews for Everyone that Freeza killed?

By : Jennji
  • From ANON - Bassooooon1 on December 11, 2005
    hey, did you ever write that other story, or did you decide not to/give up on it? You know, the teaser thing at the end of this story? Please let me know, I'm very interested in reading it if it exists ^.^
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  • From ANON - Erica on April 25, 2005
    That wuz hot! A little too graphic but hey it is Adult Fanfiction.net rite? lol So are Trunks and Kakota or whateva gonna get together? UPDATE SOON!!!
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  • From ANON - Camaro on April 13, 2005
    Well, I won't be reading anymore but good luck!

    Camaro
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  • From ANON - Rayne on March 20, 2005
    *keels over with laughter* I can't believe Vegeta just walked in on him like that! ^o^ Poor Trunks...but that should teach him about masturbating in the shower when his father is standing right outside... *snickers* But anyway, good chapter, adn I hope to see more soon! I want to know all about this prize...*grins*
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  • From ANON - Rayne on March 09, 2005
    Yeah, that's right BITCH! *kicks Tohma* ^o^ Yes, anyway, I really enjoyed this chapter. The bit where Trunks vomited blood seemed a little rushed, but other than that I thought it was pretty good. I don't know if I've said it before, but I really like your plot. I can't wait to see it flesh out more.
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  • From ANON - Camaro on March 09, 2005
    Well hello hello darlin'! This is pretty damn good if I do say so myself although, babe, you need a beta reader like it's going to the movies! haha.. Just send me the chapters and I'll fix some of the spelling errors for you

    ::is actually planning an evil plot to get your chapters first and read them before any of the other schmucks get to::

    Muahaha

    Anyways, yeah, really interesting content there, cept that whole Gohan/Trunks thing seemed unnecessary and completely out of the blue but HEY!.. I don't know what you have planned and all that jazz so who knows. Really good so far, I'm impressed.

    Camaro
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  • From ANON - Yuurei on March 02, 2005
    Enough alcohol to kill an elephant? Hahaha...poor Trunks. At least the other Saiyans know he can hold his liquor now. I like the story so far and you're pretty quick with updating too. Keep it up!

    Yuurei
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  • From ANON - Rayne on March 02, 2005
    Oi! *giggles madly* The idea of a drunken Trunks! That is something I would love to see! "I thought it was fruit juice..." Sure, baby, that's what they all say... ^_~ I hope for another chapter soon!
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  • From ANON - Rayne on February 28, 2005
    Oh, I'm really liking the way your story is going! Yeah, there are the spelling errors, but it's nothing a good beta reader couldn't fix. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Yuurei on February 28, 2005
    Two years of alcohol and a stripper...amusing. I'm curious to see what happens next so update soon.
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  • From ANON - Yuurei on February 25, 2005
    ooh...Trunks is going to planet Vegeta. This sounds like fun. Update again soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 24, 2005
    Some spelling errors, but the plot is good! Much niceness. Write more. ^-^
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  • From ANON - Rayne on February 18, 2005
    I'm interested. Keep going!
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